THE OTHER SIDE OF LOVE- mads,hellraiser - Page 35

Originally posted by: nishi

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u killed uv !!!!!!!!! 😭 😭 😭
now ??

so sorry...im also cryin pretty badly.....
im fellin like im ashi😭😭😭

me too
i noe dis will never happen i noe dis is a fic but cant help it
ur d second person eva who made me cry while reading n i must say dats a rela gr8 achivement for ne writer
iam still like crying n my mums like thinking wats wong wid her but really i want to right os uch but cant get d courage to even write plus i wont add ne smileys coz i dun want too coz i dunt hav ne xcept d cry ones but i have to use dis one
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u really deserve it being a yuvi lover iatleast i cant imagin how to wirte but u wrote it worte it so well
ur on my top ten list of wirters now n i may say in d top 3

hey! sindhu i seriously dunno how to react i am feelin sad cant say how much but............. i know u had to do this as its u'r fic but sindhu never thought tht it wud end like this cant belive i am really feelin very sad 4 himthe part whrn he says thankgod aashi is saved.... really touched me.
i can jus say thanku soo much 4 giving us such a lovely fic to read , i know u have another part to write an i really wanna say tht pleaseeee never end this fic but......

Sindhu.....u know wen u told me u were planning to kill yuvi....I thought maybe it wud be like something more steady and slowly....u know I didnt expect dat u wud kill him like this.......but I must say this is so beautifully written....it actually touched my heart....expecially the part where he says I love you wackho...and thank god Ashi is safe and she wont know its a murder.....😭.....these tears r endless......

But just like these tears...the claps r also endless......👏... This is amazingly written.....u know it truly justified the name of the fic 'The Other Side Of Love'.....

I'm so sorry I cudnt read the earlier part.....but now I dont know if I'll be able to read it wen I know its end......😭

Neways.....as I said...its amazing....n I'm glad u wrote it.....😃

And yes.....congo on completeing 50 pages...and more than 400 replies!!😛👏

OH MY GOD!!!!!
OH MY GOD!!!!!
OH MY GOD!!!!!
OH MY GOD!!!!!
OH MY GOD!!!!!

I'm shell shocked.........

but seriously Sindhu.....I have no words....this fan fic has taken such a turn!!!
Too good....your imagination! 👏

Originally posted by: hellraiser

the sun set on the pyramids of giza....
the purple nd pink colours of the desert were resplendent...
through a fluttering drapes....2 shadows were visible...
a womans laughter filled the air.....
"yuvi stop.....the hotel will kick us outa here"
"we r in the hnymoon suite sweetheart..wat else is it for??"




the egyptian sun lit up the white desert sands
yuvis eyes slowly opened....his wifes red hair was all over the white pillow
he stroked her cheek ...admiring her beauty for the millionth time...
she woke up with a smile on her face...they hugged passionately..
glad just 2 b with each other...



the wind whipped thru yuvis hair...the sahara desert was magnificient..
he killed the engine...
ashi nd yuvi jumped down....ashis eyes were sparkling with excitement...
it was a dream cumin 2 reality..
they walked hand in hand sinking their feet in the deep sand...
makin shadows in the aft sun...
neither of them noticed a third shadow lurking on the edge of sight


yuvi saw a long twisting pattern in the sand...
he bent closer to look....they were the imprints of the scales of a spiiting cobra...the deadliest snake he knew..
it cud throw its venom from a distance of 10 feet away...death was caused in seconds...wat was strange was tht the snake was not found in the sahara desrt...
he wondered where it had come from
he saw a shadow mingle wid ashis...
in an instant it all clicked 2 gether.......
his father wud do nethin 2 get his revenge...even murder his daughter in law
he twisted a full circle.....


ashi saw it as if in slow motion...
the snake in front of her sprayed a few droplets of glistening venom..
she was 2 shocked 2 react...
it was hovering in the air in front of her...
out of no where....the curly hair she had always adored..appeared..
the venom hit yuvi.......he was dead before it fell to the ground...
his last thot was thank god ashi was saved...thank god she will nvr know it was murder
"wacko..i luv u"
ashi fell to her knees...
the desert echoed with cries of grief...........................



im sorry guys..but i had 2 do it...it wa sthe hardestthing i ever wrote....im still crying....*sniff*
on a sadder note....nxt part will b my last....

I have only one word to tell you: WHY???????????????????????😭

Why did you kill off Yuvi??????????? Or atleast you could have made a loop hole, so that Yuvi could have come back with a bang! Because, I hate kekta crap n would never like to see a dead man coming back to life....but if you had left a nice loop hole...........n how can Yashwant Dev win???????????

Poor Ashi! 😭

I loved that line: "Wacko, I love you!"

oh shit..this is so sad ya... why did u kill him...??
and yd?? i hate him..
and i too loved the line.. "wacko.. i love you"
great work!!!!!!!

im so sorry people.....but this is how life is...
my aim was not 2 cause so much sadnes...but show u the beauty of luv from the first spark to the roaring flame to the cooling ashes.....there is always this other sid of luv tht i wanted to show u all...luv is not just about a teenage crush...its far more than that...its abt luvin sumone thru life nd death....thru distances ..through social barriers.....its about caring for sumone more than u do for urself.....yes ..it is painnful...but its pain v cant do without......

im postin my nxt part now.....keep ur tissues ready..

Originally posted by: ashi rocks

I have only one word to tell you: WHY???????????????????????😭

Why did you kill off Yuvi??????????? Or atleast you could have made a loop hole, so that Yuvi could have come back with a bang! Because, I hate kekta crap n would never like to see a dead man coming back to life....but if you had left a nice loop hole...........n how can Yashwant Dev win???????????

Poor Ashi! 😭

I loved that line: "Wacko, I love you!"

wud u like it if it was a loop hole...cuz i wudnt...loop holes r for ppl who cant accept death.....like kekta...
as a wise man once said..."to a well-organised mind..death is but the next great adventure"

here we go....*takes a deep breath*


The dying embers shone in her eyes...eyes which were moist with a film of tears..
the death had not yet sunk in....she felt numb..
she gazed at the fire unseeing....desperately trying not to think of the person who had died
and taken her soul with him...
she had spent so many happy moments with him...even the moments without him had been spent in bliss ...safe
in the knowledge tht he wud come home 2 her at the end of the day..
now it was not so..he wud nvr come bak again...she wud nvr see his smiling fave full off luv and laughter gain...
hear his throaty voice again.....so many things she shud hv told him...so many moments wasted in senseless fites
now it was too late ..she cud nvr bring him bak again...

the tears started falling...fast and hard..until she was sobbing helplessly...without any sense of time..


the funeral had been nuthin but a denial of his death..all throughout it..she had been sure he wud
come silently and wrap his arms around her....she had waited in vain fot tht moment..

as she came back 2 her empty house..to her empty heart...it hit her tht he was nvr comin bak...
ppl thot they understood but no one did....how cud she be so callous tht she picked up the pieces of her life and began all over again ...without him..


she cudnt stand the thot tht he wud b forgotten by everybody xcept her..
he had betrayed his marriage vow to bewith her in life and death.
and had gone on without her..
she felt a surge of anger against him for leaving her

sorrow overwhelmed her once again...
she walked to the window n looked out...
she wanted to just jump out nd escape all the sorrow..the pain....the sadness...

she turned away...she was not a coward....he wud not have liked it...
she dropped into a couch relieving all her memories..
the first time he kissed her...the escapde in the park at nite...
the secret rock concert......."wacko ..i luv u"....so many memories..wrapped around her like a warm blanket...
she dint know how long she stayed there...
..

until she heard the birds chirping..
dazed she walked out n stood in the sunlite..
she felt like she had been born again..the cool gusts of wind...soothed her red rimmed eyes..
for the first time she wiped her tears n gave a watery smile..
knowing dat she had finally emerged fromm the darkness of the nite to the cheer of the morning..
there was no pain left..the darkest part of the tumultous relation had passed ....and mornin had dawned..
leaving her with nuthin but memories of the past.....memories which she would cherish for the rest of her life..
memories which belonged to only 2 ppl...ashi nd yuvi..!!

the end of a beautiful luv story!!





nd tht ,my friends, is THE OTHER SIDE OF LOVE!!


a bigg thank u to mads who started such a luvly fic in which i hv poured all i cud manage....
thank u 2 all of u who hv managed to come to the end.... nd 2 shells for sum valuable contibutions..
hope this has been as delightful to u as it has been 2 me....
please see this not as the end of a love story...but as a small part of a story which will always b alive in ur hearts nd mine...
cheers to rebelde for creating such believably loved characters...
thank u 2 goldie behl n shristi arya for bringing it into our hearts...
nd a rellyy bigg hug to the actors for the laughter ..for the tears ..for the love we hv felt.