THE OTHER SIDE OF LOVE- mads,hellraiser - Page 34

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Posted: 19 years ago
WOW.i just read the last 3 parts.it is AWESOME!!!!!!plz dont end the fic
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Posted: 19 years ago
finnaly dis part came waise i read dis part earlier 😉 wid sid only n iw as like awesome i dunt have much words to write dis is super duper kewl n i love d mantra coz i helped sid in finding it 😆 😆 😆 but dis rocks i lub u sid
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Posted: 19 years ago
I'm speechless....thats all I have to say.

I am totally bowled over by the way you write....loved the 1st part especially!!!

I dont know what else to say....coz I'm not good with words...and I dont have enuf to describe my feelings after reading this!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
very well written sindhu ..........damn good! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome sidhu..........now u r towerin my chart of an awesome writer........this has been spectacular..
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Posted: 19 years ago
ya congo now plzzzzz continue.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
its every thing tht a purrrrrrrrrrfect fanfic should be!! 👏
u r an awesum writer... u should be da scriptwriter of remix 😉 😉 😆

update soon

CYA
CHARZ 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
congo dindhu.....

and plzzzzzzzzzz cntinue.....

am dying for the next part 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
the sun set on the pyramids of giza....
the purple nd pink colours of the desert were resplendent...
through a fluttering drapes....2 shadows were visible...
a womans laughter filled the air.....
"yuvi stop.....the hotel will kick us outa here"
"we r in the hnymoon suite sweetheart..wat else is it for??"




the egyptian sun lit up the white desert sands
yuvis eyes slowly opened....his wifes red hair was all over the white pillow
he stroked her cheek ...admiring her beauty for the millionth time...
she woke up with a smile on her face...they hugged passionately..
glad just 2 b with each other...



the wind whipped thru yuvis hair...the sahara desert was magnificient..
he killed the engine...
ashi nd yuvi jumped down....ashis eyes were sparkling with excitement...
it was a dream cumin 2 reality..
they walked hand in hand sinking their feet in the deep sand...
makin shadows in the aft sun...
neither of them noticed a third shadow lurking on the edge of sight


yuvi saw a long twisting pattern in the sand...
he bent closer to look....they were the imprints of the scales of a spiiting cobra...the deadliest snake he knew..
it cud throw its venom from a distance of 10 feet away...death was caused in seconds...wat was strange was tht the snake was not found in the sahara desrt...
he wondered where it had come from
he saw a shadow mingle wid ashis...
in an instant it all clicked 2 gether.......
his father wud do nethin 2 get his revenge...even murder his daughter in law
he twisted a full circle.....


ashi saw it as if in slow motion...
the snake in front of her sprayed a few droplets of glistening venom..
she was 2 shocked 2 react...
it was hovering in the air in front of her...
out of no where....the curly hair she had always adored..appeared..
the venom hit yuvi.......he was dead before it fell to the ground...
his last thot was thank god ashi was saved...thank god she will nvr know it was murder
"wacko..i luv u"
ashi fell to her knees...
the desert echoed with cries of grief...........................



im sorry guys..but i had 2 do it...it wa sthe hardestthing i ever wrote....im still crying....*sniff*
on a sadder note....nxt part will b my last....
Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
😭
u killed uv !!!!!!!!! 😭 😭 😭
now ??

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