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ashi912

@ashi912

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Posted: 19 years ago

#301

wow!who is the guy .i'm not clear is it uv or sum1 else.newys continue fast

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ashi912

@ashi912

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Posted: 19 years ago

#302

ok i get it.ashi is wid sum1 else & uv sees them from a car rite???
plz rite fast!

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Ritwika

@ritz_ashiyuvi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#303

i never never used to read fanfics.....i started reading fanfics,only when i read this one......

i didnt comment till date...coz i had no words to comment...and stil i dont hav any left.....and neither do i want to comment, bcoz words will fall short

all i can say is,......continue fast 😳

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sonia ajit prasad

@s_aangel

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Posted: 19 years ago

#304

my god hellraiser!! after such a long time got to read u'r fan-fic, as usual u put me thru tension...
a very gud 1, thts all i can say. me too in loss of words. so just conitinue

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shelly

@uvcraziestfan

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+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#305

wow sindhu dis was awesome n worth d wait

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hellraiser

@hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: ashi912
ok i get it.ashi is wid sum1 else & uv sees them from a car rite???
plz rite fast!

no hun....u got th plot wrong...yuvi n ashi r 2gether...sumone sees themm...yuvi is shocked seein tht person..now u guess whos tht person

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ashi912

@ashi912

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Posted: 19 years ago

#307

thanx 4 clearing my doubts.u r happy now rnt u

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Aparna

@apple14

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+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#308

OK, Sindhuja....I know that u know that I read your fanfic....

but strangely...till date I've never commented on it here....except telling you while chatting!
So I've made a promise..... I will now post my first evr comments here....

Sindhu...the fanfic....is simply outstanding...and I'm talking about it right from the beginning. So credit goes to Madhura too for starting such a sweet story!
I'm so glad that you've resumed the fanfic after such a long break Sindhu!
I really love the way the story is focusing on Ashi & Yuvi right now. But I also hope you'll return to the other characters too...like kris, tia & ranveer and those funny parts!

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hellraiser

@hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#309

yashwant devs steps echoed across stone stairs..
they sounded like the gong of death for yuvi
ashi stepped forward ..her fists clenched...her anger matchin mr.devs
a fire slowly kindled in yuvis heart..
the rebel in him..supressed for so long finally woke up..
he 2 stepped forward...
he wud defend his love no matter wat.....

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yashwant dev paced the room in frustration
yuvi had refused 2 listen 2 a single word he said
"get me krishna"he barked 2 his secretary..
"krishna..i hv a job for u..."
"yes sir??"
krishna was shocked...
"sir..wont tht b 2 harsh..aftr all hes ur only son"
"shut up nd do wat i say..he needs 2 b taught a lesson"

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"cool down yuvi....kuch nahi hoga.."
"i dont know ashi....y do only i hv such a father"he banged the table with his fist
"im compensation for ur dad" ashi smiled flirtratiously
"come here...."he pulled her 2 her..and kissed her long and deep
a wolf whistle peirced the air..ashi blushed n turned 2 see who it was..
it was kris.....

there it was.....a part ive postponed for 2 long...enjoy it..n find time 2 comment...

Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago

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shelly

@uvcraziestfan

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Posted: 19 years ago

#310

wow o wow sid its outta d world stright frm sid hell its awesome wud u mind giving me ur mind for my english ests pllz i need d ideas very much
its gr8 do post soon

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