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sonia ajit prasad

@s_aangel

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Posted: 19 years ago

#291

hey! its just tooooooooo good. i am really enjoying u r fic but u know wht i am a bit afraid too kya pata woh ladki koi aur ho(i hope not)ya kahani mein koi aur naya twist ho. i very well know ki tumhe shocks dena acha lagta hai, but please give pleasent ones, actually no write anything i dont care cause i thoroughly enjoy every bit of wht u write.
i am waiting 2 read the next bit.

happy remixing!!!!!!!!!!

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Radhika Shree

@nigam_radhika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#292

gud enough!! icould have never imagined ashi in a gown n that 2 white!! 😉

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hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#293

nxt part guys.....im waitin despo fer ur comments..

"hey"he whispered softly..
she just gave an enigmatic smile..
"can i hv the pleasure of a dance??"he asked extending a hand..
she placed her hand in his..
he drew her closer..
and the magic began.
they twirled around in perfect synchrony..
lost in each others eyes..
the music all around them..
~~~baby..surrender 2 me..tonite..
therell b no holding back now
neither one of us shud ever say gud bye
so baby surrender 2 me~~~~~

he gently placed a kiss on her lips n let go of her hand.
he went down on one knee n slipped a slender silver ring on her finger..
"i luv u ...will u go steady with me?"
how cud she refuse him...
she nodded...her eyes sparkling with happiness..
he hugged her....wanting nothin else
she remained in his arms..her heart flowin wid joy..
yet...yet she cud not shake the feelin of dread

Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago

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shelly

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Posted: 19 years ago

#294

ahh u wrie soo gud
love it best part forever
hop it happens in reality too

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lalit1

@lalit1

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Posted: 19 years ago

#295

oh man nice continuation but since when did u start writing romantic fics
i m waiting for your supernatural fics

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ashi912

@ashi912

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Posted: 19 years ago

#296

It is awesome!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 You rock! Plz continue plz plzplz

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sonia ajit prasad

@s_aangel

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Posted: 19 years ago

#297

its tooooooo 3 4 5 & so on & so times gud. actually no u r just best. yuvi-aashi ka story isse acha to ho nahin sakta.
pleasssssssssssssssssssssse continue. dont keep us waiting like this.

happy remixing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Radhika Shree

@nigam_radhika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#298

wow its awesum!! i just luved it!! 👏

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annwesha

@sudhag_1991

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Posted: 19 years ago

#299

why dread??? 😕
but ur fic totally ruuulz!!! 👏 👏

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hellraiser

@hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#300

ashi walked bak 2 her room...hugging her happines..
a huge smile on her face...
she stopped at the window n looked out..
a nite breeze chilled her cheeks..
she stood lost in the beauty of the nite........
"hey girlfriend..."a voice whispered...hugging her around the waist....
ashi laffed affectionately...
she turned in his arms..facing him...
her honey eyes nd his coal black ones merged....lightin up into flame..
her hands went up 2 his shoulders...n gently caressed his neck..
he pulled her closer.....
so close...she cud feel his warm breath on her mouth..
he placed his lips on hers..
the kiss began in sweetness n reached a passion.............

wheels screeched to a halt..
bright yellow headlites lit their startled faces..
the car door opened.....
yuvis shocked face was a testament of the trouble they were in............

i know..i know..ppl....long time...but finally the nxt chapter is up.......cudnt stop writing ..have an addiction 2 it......no matter who reads or who doesnt..i keep writin..
hope ull like it...do leave a review...

Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago

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