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ashi912

@ashi912

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Posted: 19 years ago

#281

thank god.it was all a dream .ashi-yuvi r together rite/
BTW,awesome fic as usual.

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sonia ajit prasad

@s_aangel

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Posted: 19 years ago

#282

omg! shock ke baad shock. hellraiser aap shocks dene mein Phd. karna chahate hai kya.
a very good 1 though.
waitinggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg!

happy remixing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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annwesha

@sudhag_1991

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Posted: 19 years ago

#283

gud dat it was a dream!!
plzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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hellraiser

@hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#284

yet another part of this luvely fic which ive totally destroyed....

there was a secret smile on ashis face all day long...
the memories of yuvi enveloped her like a warm hug....
as if morning had dawned n melted the cold dew in her heart....
a new beggining ...long anticipated...patiently awaited....
a young gurl's crush..her first luv....
she was in love all over again...
she recognisd the symptoms perfectly....
the increasd heart beat when she saw him...
a glow in her face wen she thought of him...
admiring his gorgeous locks...
wishing she cud run her fingers through them...
unable 2 think of anything xcept him...
wondering if he still luved her...desperately prayin tht he did....
the change was not unnoticed by yuvi......
fer him...it was the early days of their 11th class all over again.....
mebbe history did repeat itself....
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meanwhile it was trouble in paradise fer krish n sam......
sam was beautiful...had attitude n a gr8 sense of humour
it was a dangerous conbination....
guys were attracted 2 her like moths 2 fire..
yes...u got it rite...
krish was jealous...
"y r u painting ur nails...r u goin out on a date??"
"what?do i need a date to paint my nails.???"
"well...u certainly arent doin it fer me..."
"krish ur driving me up the wall......"
"ya..thts wht i m now rite???sumone who just irritates you....well ill take my irritating self outside n u can go on paintin ur nails fer whomever ur goin out with"he left in a huff
sam leant her head against the wall...
y doesnt he understand tht i luv him not sum imaginary guy whos attracted 2 painted nails....

tht was totally in pieces i know....but me not in mood 2 write...every one goin away....lalit,mads,shobha,tia,rikz....so im totaaly sad n feelin bad

Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago

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shelly

@uvcraziestfan

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+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#285

haha dat was cho cute ashi uv part was awesome sam krish part was cute painting nails it was nt in peices i was betta u alway remain in dat no wirtting mood plzz u give out ncie product den i liked it no i loeved it keep continuing like dis

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shelly

@uvcraziestfan

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Posted: 19 years ago

#286

hope some1 read smy fic like dis too:(

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Nishi

@nishi

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+ 4

Posted: 19 years ago

#287

"y r u painting ur nails...r u goin out on a date??"
"what?do i need a date to paint my nails.???"
"well...u certainly arent doin it fer me..."
"krish ur driving me up the wall......"
"ya..thts wht i m now rite???sumone who just irritates you....well ill take my irritating self outside n u can go on paintin ur nails fer whomever ur goin out with"he left in a huff
sam leant her head against the wall...
y doesnt he understand tht i luv him not sum imaginary guy whos attracted 2 painted nails....

😆
so krish thinks that girls paint their nails when going out for a date !!! 😆 😆

anyways nice part ! 😉

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Radhika Shree

@nigam_radhika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#288

awesum!!waitin 4 d next part!! 👏

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hellraiser

@hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#289

ok guys ..heres da nxt part....

ashi gave yuvi a flirty smile as he passed her..
he was in his seventh heaven.......
the days without her had been hell
now it looked like they wud patch up again........

ashis cell beeped..
ashi hun..meet me at the shed in 10 min..
luv yuvi..

guessin wat this was all about...
ashi had a huge grin on her face...
for the first time in her life she wanted 2 b feminine
she wanted 2 dress fer him...

he donned his tux ..
adjusted his bow tie...n went 2 the shed..
to chk all the arrangements..

all perfect......he grasped it tightly in his fist ..
n waited fer 2 arrive......
the door opened........
she swept in spredain a magic spell around her..
she was dressed in a floor length white gown...
the edges trimmed with black crepe roses.....
her hair swept high on her head..2 loose red wisps curling onto her cheeks.....
the sight of her rendered yuvi speech less.......

the music began playing....
dun wanna argue...dun wanna fite...
for the last time baby...im tellin u...
all i want is u!!!

Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago

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shelly

@uvcraziestfan

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+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#290

she swept in spredain a magic spell around her..
she was dressed in a floor length white gown...
the edges trimmed with black crepe roses.....
her hair swept high on her head..2 loose red wisps curling onto her cheeks.....
the sight of her rendered yuvi speech less.......

brilliant makeover season chal raha hai

the music began playing....
dun wanna argue...dun wanna fite...
for the last time baby...im tellin u...
all i want is u!!!

aww cho chweet n cute dis is perfect noone can write betta dan u mindblowing awesome im speecheless too
gimme some of ur brainz for my english etst tomm yaar😆😆😆its amazing
did i add alld adjectives😉
n den i say im speechless
gr8 going yaar

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