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hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#161

😃 😃 ...thanx mads....me will try 2 keep up the standard...its a great honour 2 write ur fic
enuff of diplomatic dialouges,....in short..me will relly njoy writin...
gud luck 4 ur xams!!!! 😃

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mads

@mads

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Posted: 19 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: sudhag_1991
i totally luuuuved it!!

Thyanx a lot for loving it sudha.....n i cant continue it coz i'm busy wid my studies......😊but dont worry....sindhuja will do a good job....maybe evn better.....😊

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lalit1

@lalit1

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Posted: 19 years ago

#163

thanks sindhuja for continuing it

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mads

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Posted: 19 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: hellraiser
😃 😃 ...thanx mads....me will try 2 keep up the standard...its a great honour 2 write ur fic
enuff of diplomatic dialouges,....in short..me will relly njoy writin...
gud luck 4 ur xams!!!! 😃

Dats rite sindhuja....ekdum se formal mat bano ok?😉😆...n thanx for ur good wishes....hope i finish my exams superfast.....n hope i get time to read ur fic....😛

Edited by mads - 19 years ago

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hellraiser

@hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#165

guys im faintin wid fear...do read n tell me how it is..

it was evening
CCD was empty.
krish was cleaning up and preparin 2 close ccd.
he saw a shadow on the floor ..and looked up.
ashi was walking upto him a brave smile on her face
having memorised every expression ,every mood of hers,he cud tell that she had been crying.
he gave her a warm inviting smile.
shesmiled bak hesitantly and said"can i have a.."
"devils own??"
"yes..how did u know???"asked a surprised ashi
"well..ur a regular customer"he shrugged.and also the gurl whose every taste is imprinted in my memory..
she took her coffee and turned to walk away..
"uhh..wait"
"yes??"
"you..umm..you luk upset...wanna tell me abt it??"
she stood there undecide;desperately wanting a shoulder to cry on but unable 2 tell nyone.

he jumped across the counter n gave her a warm hug
"wateva it is...u r strong enuff 2 overcum it...remember tht there are ppl who will always luv u"

ashi nodded n walked away.
suddenly she turned bak 2 luk at him...wonderin y his presence reassured her.

wait till i tell sam abt this..im gettin closer n closer 2 havin u..now tht u hv noticed me..soon ull begin 2 trust me n then ..n then luv me....krish thought triumphantly

Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago

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Soumya Sen

@Mrs.Brett Lee

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Posted: 19 years ago

#166

HEll great fan fiction. I luv it. 😳 😉 Keep it up. 👏 👏 👏

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reema

@reema_19

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Posted: 19 years ago

#167

gr8 fic . i just lovd it . awesome work

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Priyanka

@priyankap

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Posted: 19 years ago

#168

this is jus gr8
continue 👏 👏 👏

Edited by spikypriya - 19 years ago

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mads

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Posted: 19 years ago

#169

AWESOME Sindhuja!!!!👏.....See....maine kaha tha na??? U'll write well......its not just good...i think its brilliant!!!😛 Keep it up....maybe i wont be able to read 4 the next few days...but will try to catch wenever i can ok??😊