THE OTHER SIDE OF LOVE- mads,hellraiser

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Nishi

@nishi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 19 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: hellraiser
whew...im relieved..i wuz relly terrified...

😆😆😆 terrified of what !!!!!!!!!!

arre yeh koi board exam thodi naa hain , aur apne friends se kyaa darna !!!! btw do we look like hitler's khaandaan to you 😕

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Amrutha rao

@Anvesha

Explorer

Posted: 19 years ago

#172

Hey, good job 😊 hellriser,I am waiting for next part.

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mads

@mads

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 19 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: nishi

😆😆😆 terrified of what !!!!!!!!!!

arre yeh koi board exam thodi naa hain , aur apne friends se kyaa darna !!!! btw do we look like hitler's khaandaan to you 😕

😆Exactly Yaar!! Main kya koi bhootni hoon????😆 N u're writing beautifully!!

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amrita

@get_amrita

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#174

plz do tell me dat kya is story ka koi end hai!
amrita

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shelly

@uvcraziestfan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#175

gr8 i just read d whole thing krish is wat u call a true character plzzz give it a happy ending sindhuja 👏 n yeah mads d story line is too gud 👏 👏 👏
shelly

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hellraiser

@hellraiser

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#176

okkkk..nxt part....sorry if im conc 2 much on krish n ashi..but ull c other charac soon enuf...

days grew short
every wakin moment of krish wuz filled wid ashi..ashi n only ashi
ashi came 2 talk to him whenever she was down ..
these few and far away moments made krish ecstatic enuf 2 ignore sam ...

one such day.....

yuvi is so totally wacked out..
how can he think i need time 2 think over my feelings..???in fact he needs time to go to a psychiatrist..hey bhaggu...but i miss him......but i wont tell himm..
i cant....
hes the one who broke up..he shud apologise..

ashi had gone from talking to krish to talking to herself..
when she came out of her thoughts...she found krish still gazing at her..
"im so sorry krish ..i have to go....bye...thanx 4 listenin 2 my ravings"

krish nodded
anger made him incapable of speakin
yuvi....he wassuch a big thorn..all ashi does is talk non stop about him....
....how do i get rid of him....??
krish's pschotic brain started working..n thee came an evil grin on his face..

i know...i know....that was bad..but kya kare..me facin xtreme writers block...will do better nxt post

Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago

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shelly

@uvcraziestfan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#177

it was gud but plzzzz bring uv ashi back i misss em 😭

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aditi

@aditiyuvi

Voyager

Posted: 19 years ago

#178

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....sindhu............tooooo good yaar....plz continue...u arent bad even 0.1%....u r 100% fabulous yaar....plz continue....and dont make me wait for too long 😳 😳