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Posted: 19 years ago
sappy..me just read ur entire story slwly along with comments
and its so funmny
btw guys i am good cook and can make chocolate cakes so if u want i can give u guys a treat wen i come to mumbai
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey lamina now its very difficult to wait. Please post story early.
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Posted: 19 years ago
fate offer accepted.sappy kuch seekha karo yaar! ๐Ÿ˜‰
well nice one lamina....ya the three musketeers kidnapped ranveer and he is trying to run away eh! ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 19 years ago
lamina gr8 again n this the curisity much bigger than before so cont fastttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey i think tias busy baking a cake ๐Ÿ˜‰
lamina as usual awesome fabfic and i must say you have wriiten it the way every character wus actually react i mean like every dialogue is like their one on the show.
you should be appointed remix dialogue witer.
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Posted: 19 years ago
PART 12



Yuvi, Sid and Nakool are still fighting over the food and drinks.....

Y: Shut up Sid!!! ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

S: fine ..main shut up kar leta hun ...par bday cool dude se toh pocho ke usse kya chahiya

Y:..ya right ๐Ÿ˜Š ....mein toh Ranveer dude ke bare mein bhool hi gaya tha ๐Ÿ˜† ...(Turns around to ask Ranveer)...Ranveer........

Yuvi turns around and Ranveer isnt there....Yuvi panics ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Y: RANVEER .....RANVEER KAHA GAYA?? ....OH SHIT!!!... ๐Ÿ˜ก

S: Aab hum kya karenge?? ๐Ÿ˜•

Y: Kya karenge ka kya matlab?? ๐Ÿ˜ก ....we have to find him ๐Ÿ˜ก .....NOW...MOVI IT!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

N: Ha dude...Yuvi thik keh raha hai....sara ghar dondh te hai

S: ya ..u r right...let search around ๐Ÿ˜Š

The guys search the house and the garden as well...and return back to the living room

Y: any sign of Ranveer???

S: No dude...meine saab jagh dhoond liye ๐Ÿ˜•

Just then Nakool comes in panting....

N: Guys....guys....

Y: Kay hua?? ๐Ÿ˜• ...sirf guys guys hi karte rahoge ya bolo ge bhi ๐Ÿ˜ก ....out with it Nakool!! ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

N: Bahar...Bahar Ranveer ki car nahi hai

Y: KYA!!! OH ON!!!

S: Woh gaya kaha hoga?? ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜•

Y: (Yuvi is frustrated with Sid now) ๐Ÿ˜ก ..Where do u think he will go Sid??? ๐Ÿ˜ก ...(realising that Sid hasnt figured it out yet) ๐Ÿ˜• ..Woh aapne ghar gaya hai ๐Ÿ˜ก ...Tia ke paas ๐Ÿ˜ก

S: OH NO!! ๐Ÿ˜ญ Aab usse surprise ke bare mein saab paata chal jayega ...aur phir Vrinda ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ .....

Yuvi waves his hands in the air ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ..as to signal to Sid "You Think" ๐Ÿ˜ก .... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

N: Aab kya kare ๐Ÿ˜• ...Meher aur ladkiyon ko baata de kya hua hai??? ๐Ÿ˜•

Y: R U CRAZY!!! ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก Agar Ashi ko paata chala ....no no ๐Ÿ˜ญ ...i cant let that happen ๐Ÿ˜ญ ...no !! ๐Ÿ˜ญ

N: Toh kyu na hum Tia ko phone kare aur usse baata de ki Ranveer wha aa raha hai?? ๐Ÿ˜Š

S: Ya thats a good idea ๐Ÿ˜Š

Y: i will ring her right now...

Yuvi tries to ring Tia..but her line is busy

Y:usski line busy aa rahi hai

S: aab?? ๐Ÿ˜• should we ring the girls up?? ๐Ÿ˜•

Y: No ...we cant tell them about this ...all we can do now is shut up and pray ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜† ...ke Tia sab sambhal le aur hume girls na pite ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Meanwhile at Tia and Ranveer's Home

Tia has just decided that she will bake another cake...She makes the batter and puts it in the oven for baking....

T: Oh God!!! Tia is soooo tired now ....Ek cake banate banate hi Tia was so tired aur uspe Tia had to make the second one ...Tia hopes ki yeh cake properly bane ๐Ÿ˜ญ ...Tia doesnt have the energy to make one more ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Tia is really tired and finds the first chair close by and slumps in it

T: Paata nahi Tia aab ready kaise hogi ...Tia cant even move ...But it was worth it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...Tia can do anything for Ranveer ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...Tia still remembers Ranveer's last bday ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...Ranveer was so happy when he saw the cake Tia got for him ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...Tia is sure he will be as happy this time too ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ....Tia will make this a wonderful bday for Ranveer ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Tia remembers Ranveer's bday last year ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ..(u guessed it right ..another flashback coming up...a real short one though) ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

FLASH BACK 2

Ranveer has been away on business trip to NY for THREE WEEKS!!! ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ...Tia had missed him so much ๐Ÿ˜ญ ...Tia was looking forward to him coming back ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...and they had to leave for a band concert that evening ....(yes they still played together...but not as often...Yuvi was the only one in the band who has pursued singing as a profession)...Tia wanted to spend some time with Ranveer before they took off ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

...but Tia's papa had intervened ๐Ÿ˜ก ....He spent that whole day with Ranveer going over some business deal ๐Ÿ˜ก ...Ranveer was feeling bad about this too ...He had missed Tia a lot too....

They had been staying at a farm house that belonged to a friend of Tia's papa....and it was Ranveer's bday the very next day.... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Tia wanted to do something special for Ranveer ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...she had missed him so much...so she had ordered for a cake to be delivered there that night ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...without Ranveer or anyone else finding out about it..... ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Just before mid-night....Tia knocked on Ranveer's door...Ranveer was sleepy after the long flight...jet lag and work that he had done...Ranveer was really sleepy when he opened the door....

R: (Barely managed to open his eyes)....Tia...Tia aap yahan kya kar rahi hai?? ๐Ÿ˜• ...woh bhi itni raat ko.. ๐Ÿ˜•

T:Ranveer...Tia wants to show u something...please Tia ke saath chalo...

R: Kya!! Tia aabhi?? ๐Ÿ˜• Kya hum subah nahi dekh sakte yeh?? ....Tia hum bohot thak chuke hai ...aur hame neend bhi bohot aa rahi hai

T: Ranveer..Tia knows u r really tired .....all because of Tia's papa ๐Ÿ˜ก ....but please come with Tia...this is really important ....please ...Tia ke liye


Now how could Ranveer say no to Tia ...and that too when she was asking him so many times for it... ๐Ÿ˜‰

R:Thik hai...chaliye ๐Ÿ˜Š

Tia took Ranveer towards the pool at the back side of the farm house

R: Tia...yeh aap hume kaha le ja rahi hai?? ๐Ÿ˜• ...(his sleepiness was going away really fast)...aapka irada kya hai?? ๐Ÿ˜‰

T: Ranveer... ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Tia took him to the pool side...there was a small table there...and on it was a cake ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

R: Tia...yeh saab kya hai?? ๐Ÿ˜•

T: Happy bday Ranveer!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

R:Tia...aapne hamare bday ke liye yeh saab kiya?? ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Tia noded and smiled ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...Tia then lite the candles...

T: Ranveer...cake nahi katoge?? ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Ranveer blew the candles and cut the cake ๐Ÿ‘ ...and they fed bits of the cake to each other ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Ranveer had lost all his sleep now ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ....and Tia wasnt sleepy either ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...they decided to stay out a bit and sit on the lounge sofa nearby...under the stars ๐Ÿ˜ณ ....Ranveer got a blanket (coz it was really cold) and they sat on the sofa ๐Ÿ˜ณ...and got comfy ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Ranveer was really happy to see Tia after so many days ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...and Tia felt the same way 2 ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...Ranveer couldnt imagine how beautiful Tia was looking in the moonlight.... ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Ranveer and Tia always knew they would be together ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...but Ranveer had never formally proposed marriage ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ....and now that was all that Ranveer wanted to do ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

R: Tia.... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

T: Ha Ranveer... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Ranveer got down on one knee and.... ๐Ÿ˜ณ

R: Tia...hum dono jaante hai ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...ki hum hamesha saath rahenge ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...par aaj tak...humne aapse formally nahi pocha hai....par aaj pochana chahte hai.... ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Tia realised what was coming up..and blushed ๐Ÿ˜ณ

R:Tia...kay aap humse shaadi karengi?? ๐Ÿ˜ณ ....hamari bewakufiyo aur gusse aur nadaniyon ke bawajood...?? ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

T:...YES!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Ranveer...Tia will marry you ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...tumari bewakufiyo aur gusse aur nadaniyon ke saath... ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ (Giggles)

Ranveer too smiled at Tia's reply ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...and held Tia in his arms ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

NOW BACK TO REALITY....

T: Woh din kitna wonderful tha ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...Ranveer and Tia were so happy ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ....Tia hopes Ranveer is as happy with what Tia has planned today as well ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...par...par Tia feels so bad ๐Ÿ˜ญ ...Ranveer aaj kitna upset tha ...he was waiting for Tia to wish him ...aur jab Tia ne wish nahi kiya toh ๐Ÿ˜ญ ...toh Ranveer was so sad ๐Ÿ˜ญ ...aur phir phone pe bhi toh Ranveer kitna upset lag raha tha ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Tia is feeling a bit low ๐Ÿ˜ญ and worring about Ranveer now

T: Shayad Tia ko Ranveer se baat karni chahiye ...even if Tia cant wish him ...kyuki surprise spoil ho jayega...Tia can at lest try to cheer him up ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...Tia cant see Ranveer so upset ๐Ÿ˜ญ ..........


Edited by lamina - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
sweet sappy.... ๐Ÿ‘ i thought the flashback cake would not have been able to be cut by a knife but i guess that didn't contain the stonemakres brand. ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago

Hey all

Part 12 posted

hope u like it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Edited by lamina - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
rikz....

Fortunately for Ranveer....Tia didnt make the flashback wala cake...she ordered it..so no need for that sp knief
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey that was really nice! Shaping up well!!!
The 3 amigos...yuvi, sid & nakool havent changed even 1 bit since school....as crazy as ever! ๐Ÿ˜†

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