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Posted: 20 years ago
sappy..me just read ur entire story slwly along with comments
and its so funmny
btw guys i am good cook and can make chocolate cakes so if u want i can give u guys a treat wen i come to mumbai
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Posted: 20 years ago
hey lamina now its very difficult to wait. Please post story early.
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Posted: 20 years ago
fate offer accepted.sappy kuch seekha karo yaar! 😉
well nice one lamina....ya the three musketeers kidnapped ranveer and he is trying to run away eh! 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
lamina gr8 again n this the curisity much bigger than before so cont fastttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
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Posted: 20 years ago
hey i think tias busy baking a cake 😉
lamina as usual awesome fabfic and i must say you have wriiten it the way every character wus actually react i mean like every dialogue is like their one on the show.
you should be appointed remix dialogue witer.
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Posted: 20 years ago
PART 12



Yuvi, Sid and Nakool are still fighting over the food and drinks.....

Y: Shut up Sid!!! 😡 😡 😡

S: fine ..main shut up kar leta hun ...par bday cool dude se toh pocho ke usse kya chahiya

Y:..ya right 😊 ....mein toh Ranveer dude ke bare mein bhool hi gaya tha 😆 ...(Turns around to ask Ranveer)...Ranveer........

Yuvi turns around and Ranveer isnt there....Yuvi panics 😭

Y: RANVEER .....RANVEER KAHA GAYA?? ....OH SHIT!!!... 😡

S: Aab hum kya karenge?? 😕

Y: Kya karenge ka kya matlab?? 😡 ....we have to find him 😡 .....NOW...MOVI IT!!!! 😡 😡 😡

N: Ha dude...Yuvi thik keh raha hai....sara ghar dondh te hai

S: ya ..u r right...let search around 😊

The guys search the house and the garden as well...and return back to the living room

Y: any sign of Ranveer???

S: No dude...meine saab jagh dhoond liye 😕

Just then Nakool comes in panting....

N: Guys....guys....

Y: Kay hua?? 😕 ...sirf guys guys hi karte rahoge ya bolo ge bhi 😡 ....out with it Nakool!! 😡 😡

N: Bahar...Bahar Ranveer ki car nahi hai

Y: KYA!!! OH ON!!!

S: Woh gaya kaha hoga?? 😕 😕

Y: (Yuvi is frustrated with Sid now) 😡 ..Where do u think he will go Sid??? 😡 ...(realising that Sid hasnt figured it out yet) 😕 ..Woh aapne ghar gaya hai 😡 ...Tia ke paas 😡

S: OH NO!! 😭 Aab usse surprise ke bare mein saab paata chal jayega ...aur phir Vrinda 😭 😭 .....

Yuvi waves his hands in the air 😡 😡 ..as to signal to Sid "You Think" 😡 .... 😆 😆

N: Aab kya kare 😕 ...Meher aur ladkiyon ko baata de kya hua hai??? 😕

Y: R U CRAZY!!! 😡 😡 Agar Ashi ko paata chala ....no no 😭 ...i cant let that happen 😭 ...no !! 😭

N: Toh kyu na hum Tia ko phone kare aur usse baata de ki Ranveer wha aa raha hai?? 😊

S: Ya thats a good idea 😊

Y: i will ring her right now...

Yuvi tries to ring Tia..but her line is busy

Y:usski line busy aa rahi hai

S: aab?? 😕 should we ring the girls up?? 😕

Y: No ...we cant tell them about this ...all we can do now is shut up and pray 😭 😆 ...ke Tia sab sambhal le aur hume girls na pite 😭

Meanwhile at Tia and Ranveer's Home

Tia has just decided that she will bake another cake...She makes the batter and puts it in the oven for baking....

T: Oh God!!! Tia is soooo tired now ....Ek cake banate banate hi Tia was so tired aur uspe Tia had to make the second one ...Tia hopes ki yeh cake properly bane 😭 ...Tia doesnt have the energy to make one more 😭

Tia is really tired and finds the first chair close by and slumps in it

T: Paata nahi Tia aab ready kaise hogi ...Tia cant even move ...But it was worth it 😃 ...Tia can do anything for Ranveer 😳 ...Tia still remembers Ranveer's last bday 😳 ...Ranveer was so happy when he saw the cake Tia got for him 😃 ...Tia is sure he will be as happy this time too 😃 ....Tia will make this a wonderful bday for Ranveer 😃

Tia remembers Ranveer's bday last year 😃 ..(u guessed it right ..another flashback coming up...a real short one though) 😆 😆

FLASH BACK 2

Ranveer has been away on business trip to NY for THREE WEEKS!!! 😭 😭 ...Tia had missed him so much 😭 ...Tia was looking forward to him coming back 😃 ...and they had to leave for a band concert that evening ....(yes they still played together...but not as often...Yuvi was the only one in the band who has pursued singing as a profession)...Tia wanted to spend some time with Ranveer before they took off 😃 😳

...but Tia's papa had intervened 😡 ....He spent that whole day with Ranveer going over some business deal 😡 ...Ranveer was feeling bad about this too ...He had missed Tia a lot too....

They had been staying at a farm house that belonged to a friend of Tia's papa....and it was Ranveer's bday the very next day.... 😃

Tia wanted to do something special for Ranveer 😳 ...she had missed him so much...so she had ordered for a cake to be delivered there that night 😃 ...without Ranveer or anyone else finding out about it..... 😳 😉 😃

Just before mid-night....Tia knocked on Ranveer's door...Ranveer was sleepy after the long flight...jet lag and work that he had done...Ranveer was really sleepy when he opened the door....

R: (Barely managed to open his eyes)....Tia...Tia aap yahan kya kar rahi hai?? 😕 ...woh bhi itni raat ko.. 😕

T:Ranveer...Tia wants to show u something...please Tia ke saath chalo...

R: Kya!! Tia aabhi?? 😕 Kya hum subah nahi dekh sakte yeh?? ....Tia hum bohot thak chuke hai ...aur hame neend bhi bohot aa rahi hai

T: Ranveer..Tia knows u r really tired .....all because of Tia's papa 😡 ....but please come with Tia...this is really important ....please ...Tia ke liye


Now how could Ranveer say no to Tia ...and that too when she was asking him so many times for it... 😉

R:Thik hai...chaliye 😊

Tia took Ranveer towards the pool at the back side of the farm house

R: Tia...yeh aap hume kaha le ja rahi hai?? 😕 ...(his sleepiness was going away really fast)...aapka irada kya hai?? 😉

T: Ranveer... 😳 😳

Tia took him to the pool side...there was a small table there...and on it was a cake 😃

R: Tia...yeh saab kya hai?? 😕

T: Happy bday Ranveer!! 😃

R:Tia...aapne hamare bday ke liye yeh saab kiya?? 😃

Tia noded and smiled 😳 😃 ...Tia then lite the candles...

T: Ranveer...cake nahi katoge?? 😃

Ranveer blew the candles and cut the cake 👏 ...and they fed bits of the cake to each other 😳 😃

Ranveer had lost all his sleep now 😃 ....and Tia wasnt sleepy either 😃 ...they decided to stay out a bit and sit on the lounge sofa nearby...under the stars 😳 ....Ranveer got a blanket (coz it was really cold) and they sat on the sofa 😳...and got comfy 😃

Ranveer was really happy to see Tia after so many days 😃 ...and Tia felt the same way 2 😃 ...Ranveer couldnt imagine how beautiful Tia was looking in the moonlight.... 😳

Ranveer and Tia always knew they would be together 😃 ...but Ranveer had never formally proposed marriage 😳 😃 ....and now that was all that Ranveer wanted to do 😃

R: Tia.... 😃

T: Ha Ranveer... 😃

Ranveer got down on one knee and.... 😳

R: Tia...hum dono jaante hai 😃 ...ki hum hamesha saath rahenge 😳 ...par aaj tak...humne aapse formally nahi pocha hai....par aaj pochana chahte hai.... 😳 😃

Tia realised what was coming up..and blushed 😳

R:Tia...kay aap humse shaadi karengi?? 😳 ....hamari bewakufiyo aur gusse aur nadaniyon ke bawajood...?? 😳 😃

T:...YES!!! 😃 Ranveer...Tia will marry you 😳 ...tumari bewakufiyo aur gusse aur nadaniyon ke saath... 😳 😳 😃 (Giggles)

Ranveer too smiled at Tia's reply 😃 ...and held Tia in his arms 😳 😳 😃

NOW BACK TO REALITY....

T: Woh din kitna wonderful tha 😳 😃 ...Ranveer and Tia were so happy 😃 ....Tia hopes Ranveer is as happy with what Tia has planned today as well 😃 ...par...par Tia feels so bad 😭 ...Ranveer aaj kitna upset tha ...he was waiting for Tia to wish him ...aur jab Tia ne wish nahi kiya toh 😭 ...toh Ranveer was so sad 😭 ...aur phir phone pe bhi toh Ranveer kitna upset lag raha tha 😭

Tia is feeling a bit low 😭 and worring about Ranveer now

T: Shayad Tia ko Ranveer se baat karni chahiye ...even if Tia cant wish him ...kyuki surprise spoil ho jayega...Tia can at lest try to cheer him up 😃 ...Tia cant see Ranveer so upset 😭 ..........


Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
sweet sappy.... 👏 i thought the flashback cake would not have been able to be cut by a knife but i guess that didn't contain the stonemakres brand. 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago

Hey all

Part 12 posted

hope u like it 😃

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
rikz....

Fortunately for Ranveer....Tia didnt make the flashback wala cake...she ordered it..so no need for that sp knief
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Posted: 20 years ago
Hey that was really nice! Shaping up well!!!
The 3 amigos...yuvi, sid & nakool havent changed even 1 bit since school....as crazy as ever! 😆

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