I Only Want To Be With You-END+Sp Part! - Page 17

Originally posted by: avani_fan

caught u lamina 😉
tia is calling aashi 'aashi'
dont mind that OK!!!
btw g8 work lamina 👏 👏

well there r sisters now remember...soniya n sumeet r married n all na...and sometimes Tia does call ashi ..ashi too...she did on their bday....

hey all

Part 14 posted

please check it out n all me know what u think of this one..

one more part to go before the fan fic ends.....

lamina just read part 13+14......the dialogues were good in part 13 and this part was a subtle romantic part.....
good..... 👏 👏

fantalacious lamina you are awesome 👏

R: Ha..woh...(takes a look at the cake on the table top...the burned cake)😆😆 ....Ashi ko aise nahi kehna chahiye tha

This is my fav line from this part. Can just picture ranveers expresion!
😆😆😆

So sad....i really pity the guy! he cares so much for tia that he has to go thro all this crazy stuff.

Waitin for your next part!

Hey Lamina....its Awesome!!👏.....and as I said...u make the tia-ranveer romance much more interesting than the serial.....cant wait to read ur next part.....and the dialogues are perfect!!!just like they r in the serial......plz continue soon....😊

ya mads...i seriously hope Ranny gets his brains back soon...so that we can have some nice romantic Tia-Ranveer moments in remix..i am so waiting for that so happen

yaar Aparna..tia ka bhi toh sooch..Tia is actually COOKING for Ranveer.... 😆 😆 😆 ...can u imagine that .... 😆 😆

sapna u really mein rock.....u r 2222222222222222222 kool........pls continue

PART 15 - THE LAST PART

At the Ahuja Residence

.....Its 9.00PM

The whole house is in darkness ...since they want it to be a surprise for Ranveer when he walks in the house...everyone is in the house....sitting in the dark since 8.00PM when the bday party was supposed to begin

A: Hey Bhaggu!! Where is this Timbo and Thakkur???? 😡 😡 😡

Sumeet: Ha...bohot der ho gayi hai ...mujhe aab phikar ho rahi hai...

A:I am not sitting in dark anymore 😡 ...this is stupid 😡 ...mein jaake lights ON kar rahi hoon 😡

Soniya:Mummum...yeh kya kar rahi ho?...dont do it ...Ranveer ka surprise karab ho gayega sonu ...please ....Tia kitni mehnat ki yeh iss saab pe. ..please mummum. ..please...please

A:OK!!! OK!!! Yeh mom aur Timbo bhi na 😡 ....meri life destroy kar denge... 😡 😡

N: (Whispers) Kahi yeh saab hamare wajah se toh nahi hua hai na....? 😭

S:(Whispers)..Shayad hume saab ko baata dena chahiye hi kya hua tha.... 😭

Y:(Whispers too 😆 )...no way dudes ...we are doing no such thing ok!! ...i dont want to get any trouble with Ashi ...aur abhi agar batayen ge ...toh saare log hume pakadke maarenge ...so keep ur mouth stup ok!!! 😡

Aman:Yuvi....tumne Ranveer ko thik samay pe ghar bheja tha right??? 😕

Y:Uh!! 😕 Ha!! Aman ...of course ...of course...

P:Paata nahi ..Tia aur Ranveer kaha reh gaya...

M:Ha..Tia usually thodi late ho jaati hai 😆 ...par itni late kabhi nahi....

V:Ha....mujhe bohot phikar ho rahi hai

N:Kahi...woh...phaas toh nahi gaye ..road pe n all 😕 ...ya accident ...dacoits and all ...gabbar singh.. 😆

S:Kahi ...aliens ne toh nahi kidnap kiya na unhe 😕 😆 ...last night i was watching this movie...aur uss mein aaise hi hua tha... 😆 😆

A:Hey bhaggu!!! Kaise sample pieces tune is duniya mein bheje hai.... 😆 😆

Y:SID!!! 😡 NAKOOL !!! 😡 SHUT UP!!!! 😡

Next Morning...at the Ahuja House....

Ranveer and Tia walk into the house 😳 😃 ....only to find everyone has fallen asleep in the living room ....some are still holding balloons in their hands and the blowing pipes and all....

T:Ranveer....Tia ko lagta hai ...ki yeh saab saari raat hamari wait karke yahi pe soo gaye....

R:Ha!! aur...jab yeh jagenge ...tum humari khair nahi ...kaal yeh saab waise hi hamein kahi jaane de nahi rahe the ...aaj toh hamein pitkar hi chodenge...

T:Ranveer...Tia is sorry ...kaal inn saab ne meri wajah se tumhe waha rok kar rakhkha..

R:Its ok Tia 😃 ....aap yeh saab hamare liye hi toh kar rahi thi... 😃

T:Ha ...par aaj ki pitayi tumhare wajah se hone wali hai ...Tia tumse keh rahi thi na 😉 ....ki hame chalna chahiye 😉 ...saab hamare intazaar kar rahe honge.... 😉

R: (Raising his eyebrows)Achha 😉 ...aapne aise kaha tha?? 😉 ..hume toh nahi suna 😉 ...yeh aapne kaab kaha tha??.... 😉

T:Woh 😳 ...woh 😳 ...Tia ne aapne mind mein kaha tha 😉 😆

Tia smiles...and Ranveer smiles back..... 😃

T:Aab kya karen??... 😕

R:Paata nahi 😕 ...par inn saabko jagana toh koga ...phir dekhte hai ..yeh saab hamare saath kya karte hai....

T:hmmmm....Ranveer....Tia ko ek idea aaya hai... 😃

R: KYA!! 😆 (giving a surprised look)

T: Ranveer...... 😡

Ranveer comes close to Tia ...and kisses her lips...

T:Ranveer 😳 ...koi dekh lega... 😳

R:Saab so rahe hai...Tia.. 😳 😃

T:Tia...ko lagta hai..ki aab hume inhe jaga dena chahiye....

Tia and Ranveer wake all of them up.....

Sumeet: Tia...my princess..aur Ranveer...kaha the tum dono??? ...aur time kya hua hai??? 😕

Soniya:Tia..Ranveer...tum dono thik toh ho na??... 😊

M:We were so worried..what happened?? 😊

A: TIMBO!!! 😡 THAKKUR!!! 😡 WHAT IS THE MEANING OF THIS!!!! 😡 ...KAHA THE TUM LOG??? 😡 😡

Y: Ya dude...where were u??? 😡 We spent the full night here ...now i have a terrible back ache.... (looks at Ashi..trying to gain some sympathy..but she is too angry)

R:Woh ..woh hum aa hi rahe the...

T:...(Tia cuts in) woh hamari car kharab ho gayi.... 😃

A:...SO 😡 ...big deal 😡 ...tum hame call nahi kar sakte the 😡 ...mechanic se car repair kara lete 😡 ...taxi le lete.... 😡

Tia hadnt thought of all these options..when she came up with this solution....(as expected).. 😆 😆

T:Woh ...woh

A:Woh woh 😡 ..kya. 😡 ...thats the explaination?? 😆

T:Ashi!!! 😡 Enough ok!! 😡 Tia bata rahi hai.. 😡

A:toh kya ...Tia pari aapne batane ki speed increase kare gi.. 😆 😆

Soniya:Mummum...stop it 😡 ...Tia bata rahi hai na 😊 ...batao Tia.. 😊

T: Ha..woh ...woh ..car aisi jagah karab ho gayi ki hamein koi taxi nahi mili 😆

Tia never thought this fast.... 😆

R:Ha ....Tia thik keh rahi hai 😊 ...aur..aur hum..hum mechanic se baat kar rahe the 😉 ..phone pe... 😉 😆

Sumeet:Thik hai Ranveer 😊 ...Toh Tia ...agar Ranveer busy tha ...toh tumhe toh hame phone karke baata dena chahiya tha na..

T:Woh ...woh Papa ....Tia ..ha ...Tia ke phone ki battery dead ho gayi thi... 😆

A:Timbo ..tumhare brain ki tarah... 😆 😆

R:Ashi ..please... 😡

A:Fine..thakkur ...tumhare liye... 😊

P:Tia...toh kya tum aur Ranveer kaal saari raat road pe hi the car ke saath....?

T:.ha ...ha babes ..dekho na..Tia kitni tired ho gayi hai ..dekho Tia ko dark circle bhi ho gaye hai shayad ... 😆

Ranveer smiles at Tia's explaintion... 😆

Aman:Ranveer...tum thik ho na...? 😊

R:Ha bana..hum bilkul thik hai... 😃

Sumeet:Hume saab ke liye kaal ek bad night thi ...shayad kissi ne bhi kuch khaya bhi nahi hai ...aur Ranveer ki bday celebrations bhi kuch nahi hui...

Soniya:Kukreja 😆 ...tumne aaj pehli baar intelligence ki baat ki hai... 😆

Sumeet:Soniya ..aabhi toh tum bhi Ahuja ho ..atlest now stop calling me Kukreja.. 😡

Soniya:No!!! 😉 Never 😉 ...tum Makhija ho aur Makhija hi rahoge... 😆

Sumeet:I give up

Soniya:jab give up karna hi hai..toh try kyu karte ho 😉 😆 ...Taneja 😆

A:MOM!! 😡 Aab baas bhi kijiye 😡

Soniya:Ok mummum 😊 ...chalo 😃 ...saab chale Ranveer ke bday aab celebrate karte hai 😃 ..Ashi ne ek cake laya hai 😃 ...chalo dinning room mein chalte hai... 😃

Everyone goes to the dinning room....except Tia and Ranveer.. 😳 😳

R:Tia..aaj kaal aap bhi bohot intelligent ho gayi hai.. 😉 😃

T:Ha...tumhari company ke wajah se.. 😉

Ranveer laughs.....

R:Waise aaj pit te pit te hum baach gaye... 😃

T:Ha...Tia was really worried... 😃

R:Waise Tia..aap jooth aacha bol leti hai... 😉

T:True...dekho tumhari wajah se Tia ko kya kya karna padta hai... 😉

Ranveer smiles and comes close to Tia 😳 ..and kisses Tia 😳 ...on the lips... 😳

R: (whipers in Tia's ears) 😳 Tia 😳 ....aaj aap bohot acchi dikh rahi hai 😳 ...aur iss baar humein paata hai ki yeh dress humne aapko kaab present kiya tha... 😳 😳

Ranveer kisses Tia on the cheek 😳 and the walks towards the dinning room... 😃

Tia opens her eyes gently 😳 ..and smiles 😳 ..and then joins Ranveer 😃 ...in the dinning room to celebrate Ranveer's bday..... 😃

THE END

hey all

Part 15 - Last part has been posted above

there is a special part called unanswered questions coming up after this

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