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awesome lamina but plssssssss let ranveer and tia be together in your next part 😭

Hey nice one Lamina....u r making the Tia Ranveer romance much more interesting than dat of the serial😆......keep it up...and plz continue soon....👏....

PART 13

Tia is about to call up Ranveer....when the phone rings

T: Hello 😃 (Hoping that it is Ranveer and she can talk to him....)

M:Hi Tia. 😃 ..Its Meher 😃

T: Meher ....ha Meher bolo

M: Kua kya hua?? 😕 ...kissi aur ko expect har rahi thi?? 😕

T:nahi ...woh... changing the subject) tell Tia..is every thing ok??

M:ok....yahan saab thik hai 😃 ..everything is ready 😃 ...Tia tumhara cake ban gaya?? 😃

T:..woh ..nahi ...abhi tak Tia ka cake ready nahi hua hai 😭

M: Par Vrinda keh rahi thi ki jab uski tumse baat hui tab cake almost ready ho gaya tha 😕 😕

T:..ha ..Tia ko paata hai ...woh...woh care Tia se burn ho gaya 😭

M:KYA!! tumne cake burn kar diya 😕

A: (Ashi is at the Ahuja house and hears this) Kya!! Timbo ne cake jaala diya 😆 ...c what did i tell u MP....i won the bet 😉 😆

M: (Meher disregards Ashi's comment)...Kya! Tia cake jal gaya ....toh phir yeh cake???

T: Woh ..babes ...Tia ne phir se cake bake karne ke liye rakha hai

M:Kya 😕 ...dusara cake ...Tia are you sure yeh thik ho jayega?? 😕

T:What do u mean by that babes??? 😡 Tia kya itni stupid hai ki same mistake repeat kare 😡 ....dekhna ...iss time Tia ka cake perfect hoga 😃

T: Please god!!! iss baar Tia ka cake thik se ho jaane do...please!!!

M:Ok Tia...Tum...

Before Meher can finish her sentence...Ashi snatched the phone from her hand..

A:Hey bhaggu!!! Timbo....u r one of a kind...tumne cake jala diya...i knew it 😆

T:Ashi puhlese!!! 😡 Tia isnt interested in talking to you 😡 ...Tia has better things to do ..ok!!! 😡

A: Ya right!! Like burning the bday cake 😉 😆

T: Just SHUT UP!! OK!! 😡 😡 😡

A: Oh No!!! Timbo ne mujhe shut up kaha ...mein daar gayi 😉 😆

T: VERY FUNNY!!! 😡 😡 😡

A: Ok Ok!! and what is this about a second cake...dont tell me you are planning to burn another cake 😆 ...bechara Thakkur ..kaha phaas gaya 😆

T: ENOUGH!! ENOUGH!! OK ASHI 😡 😡 😡

A: Hey bhaghu!! iss timbo ko tumne itna imperfect kaise banaya 😆 ...now listen ok!!! 😡 ...i dont think your cake is ever going to be edible....we have to order a cake

T:No!! Tia is making the cake for Ranveer 😳 ...aur yeh cake perfect hogi 😳 ...Tia koi cake order karne wali nahi hai 😡

A:Gr8 toh iska matlab nahi cake is CENTURY mein ready hogi 😆 ...nahi koi bday....all thanks to Timbo the gr8!!!

Tia is really upset and angry now 😡 ...she bangs the phone 😡

A: Hello!! 😕 Timbo 😕 ...gr8..rakh diya.....aab ek nayi movie banani padegi mujhe ..."TIMBO KO GUSSA KYU AATA HAI!!" 😆

Meher is angry at Ashi's behavior 😡

M:Ashi 😡 ...This is not funny ok 😡 ..Tumne Tia ko hurt kyu kiya..?? 😡 😡

A:Huh!! 😕 Aab mein kya kiya?? 😕

M: Why did u have to hurt Tia like that 😡 ...woh Ranveer se bohot pyaar karti hai 😃 ...iss liye uske liye itne effort leke cake bana rahi hai 😃 ...tumhe usse taane marne ki kya zaroorat thi 😡

A:Look Meher...hum saab ko paata hai ki Tia Thakkur se pyaar karti hai...par that doesnt mean we have to ruin Ranveer's bday

V:Ha Ashi..tum thik keh rahi ho...lekin tum usse shanti se bhi toh samjha sakti thi..

A:Hey bhaggu!!! Mate Vrindeshwari 😆 ..tum bhi..ok fine...i will talk to her later and sort all this out....but can we focus on the problem at hand right now...we need to get a cake for the bday

P:Par Tia toh cake bana rahi hai na 😕

A:Ha Moti roli 😆 ...par Tia ka cake edible hone ke chances bohot kaam hai 😆 ...we have to go get a cake...MP can you come with me??

MP:Ok Ashi..mein tumhare saath chalegi 😊 (MP Hindi!!!! 🤢 )

Meanwhile...at Tia-Ranveer's house

Tia is really angry and upset by Ashi's comments 😡

T:That 😡 ..that loser 😡 ....woh Ahsi hamesha 😡 😡 ...hamesha Tia ko taunt karti hai 😡 😡 ...woh kabhi Tia se thik se baat nahi karti 😡 😡 ...oh oh!!! 😡 Tia is so mad at her 😡 😡

Tia starts pacing around the room... 😡 😡

T:Tia...Tia Ranveer se kitna pyaar karti hai 😳 😃 ...aur is liye Tia Ranveer ke liye kuch special karna chahti thi 😃 ....aur last time ki tarah Tia cake order nahi karna chahti thi 😃 😳 ..this time Tia wanted to cook a cake for Ranveer 😳 😃 ...on her own...and Ashi 😡 ...

Tia now starts feeling more sad and hurt than angry 😭

T:Koi bhi ...koi bhi yeh believe bhi nahi kar raha hai ..ki ...ki Tia cake bana bhi sakti hai ...pehle Kailash kaka 😭 ..phir Vrinda 😭 ...phir Meher 😭 ..aur aab Ashi 😡 ..no one understands Tia 😭 ...now one even tries to understand Tia 😭 😭 ...Ranveer ...Ranveer wish you could be here ...Tia is felling so sad 😭 😭 ...wish tum yahan hote 😳 ...aur Tia ko aapni bhahon mein hold karte 😳 ...whenever Tia is upset and Ranveer holds Tia in his arms 😳 ...everything becomes ok 😃 ..Tia feels better 😃 ....oh Ranveer!!! 😭 ..where are you?? 😭 😭 ...........

hey all

Part 13 posted

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awesome lamina so is ranveer on the way
plzzzzzzzzzz let them be together in the next part 😆

Just exact dialogues how the characters speak.......awesome

just read ur entire fic last nite......and its damn good 👏 👏 👏 👏....especially loved the yuvi and ranveer part.....plz continue soon

Just tooooooo good lamina👏......I mean though I'm not a Tia-Ranveer fan.....I thoroughly enjoy reading this fic....its too funny!!!😆😆😆plz continue soon.....😛

caught u lamina 😉
tia is calling aashi 'aashi'
dont mind that OK!!!
btw g8 work lamina 👏 👏

PART 14

Ranveer opens the door to their house softly.... 😭

R: Aab tak Tia shayad shopping ke liye chali gayi hongi 😭 😭

Ranveer decides to still go to their bedroom and check if Tia is there ....one last hope....

Ranveer goes to their room 😊 ...and sees it empty ...he is feeling dejected now ....he slowing walks to the living room and slumps into the sofa ....burying his face in his hands 😭 😭

R:Kaash 😭 ....kaash hum Yuvi bana ki baat sunke wahan na jate 😭 ..toh ..toh hum aab Tia se saath hote ...aur hum saab solve kar dete...

Ranveer is totally feeling low right now 😭 ...just then he smells something cooking.... 😕

R:Shayad kuch cake jaisi smell aa rahi hai 😕 ...shayad Kailash kaka cake bana rahe honge 😕 ...par Tia ...Tia kaha hongi ??? ...hume paata bhi toh nahi hai ki woh shopping ke liye kahan gayi hai ...warna hum wahan jaate ...unke paas 😭

Just then...Ranveer hears muffled sound of someone crying 😕

R:Yeh...yeh kya awaaz aa rahi hai??? 😕 ...shayad kissi ke rone ki hai.. ....hume chalke dekha chahiye 😕

Ranveer goes to see who is crying?? 😕 ...and where is the sound coming from?? 😕 😕 ....this leads him to the kitchen 😕 ...he peeps in 😕 ....and sees a burned cake on the table top 😕 😆 ...but he cant see anyone there 😕 ...he enters the kitchen to find out who is crying 😕 ....then 😊 ....he sees Tia 😃 ...on the floor 😭 ...crying.... 😭 😭

Ranveer is worried coz Tia is crying😭 but at the same time happy 😃 to see she is still in the house...

R:Tia 😃 ...Tia aap yahan 😃 ...aap shopping gayi nahi....??.. 😃 😃 😃

Tia looks up to see Ranveer.... 😃 ....just some time back she had wished Ranveer would be here 😃 😳 ...and now he was here 😳 😃 😳 ...how did he come home so soon??? 😕 😕

T:Ranveer 😕 ...tum yahan??? 😕 😕

R:Tia ...aap ro kyu rahi hai 😕 ...kya hua hai?? 😕

T: Ranveer ....woh Tia....

Ranveer goes and sits next to Tia 😳 ....wiping her tears... 😳

R: Kya hua Tia??? Sab thik hai na?? kya kissi ne aapse kuch kaha?? 😡 kya humne kuch kiya??

T:Nahi Ranveer 😭 ...tumne kuch nahi kiya 😭 ....woh Anvesha 😡 😡 ...Tia tumhare bday ke liye cake bana rahi thi ..aur.... 😭 😭

Tia gets up in anger 😡 😡 ...Ranveer 😕 stands up behind her too....

R:Kya aab Ashi ne kya kiya??? BTW aapko hamara bday yaad tha 😃 😃 ..aur aap hamare liye cake bana rahi thi... 😃 😃

T: Ha...woh 😊

R:Woh ..sorry Tia ...hum toh main problem hi bhool gaya ..iss excitement mein 😃 ...Tia...Ashi ne kya kiya???

T:Woh Ranveer 😭 ...uss 😡 ..uss Ashi 😡 ne kaha ki Tia cake hi nahi bana sakti tumhare bday ke liye 😡 ..how could she say such a thing to Tia??? 😡 😭

R: Ha..woh...(takes a look at the cake on the table top...the burned cake) 😆 😆 ....Ashi ko aise nahi kehna chahiye tha

T:Ranveer ...Tia knows ..Tia knows Tia hasnt been able to cook anything properly till now ...but ..but still Tia wanted to try and make the best bday cake for ur bday ....and Ashi 😡 ..Ashi doesnt even understand that 😡 ...toh kya hua ke Tia ne ek cake jala diya 😭 ..Tia is trying na 😭 ...aur second cake definetly perfect banega... 😊

R:Ha Tia 😃 ...aapne hamare liye 😃 ...itni saari mehnat ki 😃 ..hamare liye yeh hi bohot special hai 😃 ...hum aapko baata nahi sakte hum aaj kitne kush hai😃😃.........dusara cake??? 😕

T:Ha woh 😊 ...Tia ne aur ek cake banane ke liye rakhkhi hai 😃 ..oven main 😃

R:Tia 😃 ...aapne hamare bday ke liye itna saab kuch kiya..... 😃 😃

T:Yeh toh kuch bhi nahi hai 😃 ...aur bhi surprise hai tumahre liye... 😃 😃

R:Saach 😃 ....Tia 😃 ...hum aapko baata nahi sakte hi hum kitne bewakoof hai 😆 ...aapne hamare liye itna saab kuch kiya 😃 ...aur hum ....hum kya samajh rahe the... .

T:Kya hua Ranveer 😕 ...tumhe kya laga....?? 😕

R:Tia...woh ..woh hume laga ki aap humse aabhi pyaar nahi karti .....

T:KYA!! ..Ranveer ...tumhe aise laga ...Ranveer ..Tia loves u so much 😳 ..and will always love you 😳 ...phir kabhi bhi Tia se aisi baat mat karna 😃 😳

R:Ha Tia..humne kaha na ...hum bohot stupid hai ...

T:Nahi Ranveer 😃 ..tum stupid nahi ho 😃 ...Tia ke liye tum perfect ho 😳 ...aur hamesha rahoge... 😳 😃 😃

Ranveer and Tia smile at each other.... 😃 😳

R: Tia 😃 ...aab aap hume batayengi ki aap yeh cake kyu bana rahi thi?? 😊 ...humne aapse kaha tha na 😃 ....ki hamare liye jaroori nahi hai ki aap cooking bhi kare... 😃 😃

T:Ha Ranveer 😃 ...Tia ko paata hai 😃 ...par tumhara last bday itna special that hamare liye 😳 ...aur Tia chahti hai ke yeh bday usse special ho 😃 😳 ....Tia ne bohot soocha 😆 ...aur phir Tia ko laga ki kyu na last time ki tarah cake order karne ke bajay..is time Tia cake bana de 😃 ..iss liye .......par dekho na ...Tia ka surprise ruin ho gaya ...cake jal gaya... 😭

R:Tia....its ok..aap upset mat hoyiye 😃 ...please 😃 ....iss bara cake jaroor thik hoga.. 😃

T:Saach Ranveer 😃... ..tumhe Tia pe itna yakeen hai?? 😃

R:Tia hume yakeen hai 😃 ...ki Tia Sissodia 😳 agar koi bhi challenge le le 😃 ...toh poora karke hi chodti hai 😃 ...hume aap pe poora yakeen hai Tia 😃 ...aur rahi baat iss cake ki....

Ranveer takes a bit of the batter thats on Tia's nose and tastes it...... 😉 😳 😳

R:ummmmmmmmmm 😉 ..Tia bohot aacha hai 😃 ...ekdum sweet... 😃 😉

T: Saach...... 😃

R:Ek minute 😆 ...confirm kar lete hai.... 😆 😉 😳

Ranveer kisses Tia on the cheek 😳 😳

R: Nahi Tia.. 😉

T:Kya???

R: Ha hum galat the ....aapki cake sweet nahi ...woh toh aap ke wajah se sweet lag rahi thi... 😉 😳 😳

T: Ranveer 😳 ...tum bhi na... 😳 😳

Ranveer holds Tia's hand.... 😳

R:Hum bhi toh kya...?? 😳 😉 ...(Ranveer has a mischievious twinkle in his eyes) 😉

T:Ranveer 😃 ...tum bohot intelligent ho gaye ho.... 😃 😉

Ranveer released Tia's hand.... ...and smiles at her.....

T:...shayad boodhapa aane pe men intelligent ho jaate hai 😉 😆 😆

Tia tries to run away 😉

Ranveer takes a second or two to comprehend what Tia just said 😆 ...and stops Tia before she can run away... 😉 😳

Ranveer holds Tia from behind 😳 ...wraping his arms around her... 😳 😳

R:Accha!!! 😉 ..toh kya keh rahi thi aap Tia??.... 😉

T:Kuch nahi.. 😳

R: Tia... 😉

T: Tia ne kya kaha 😉 ..Tia ne toh baas itna ki kaha hi tum intelligent ho 😉 ....aab Tia ko jaane do 😳 ..Tia ko bohot kaam hai 😳

R:...nahi Tia..aap itni aasani se nahi jaa sakti 😉 ...aapko pehle punishment milni hai... 😉

T:Kya! ...punishment ....kis liye ...Tia ne kya hiya hai?? 😕

R: Kya kiya hai?? 😡 ..aapne hume bhoodha kaha 😡 ....hume subah se bday wish bhi nahi kiya 😡 ....aur hamara bday bhoolne ka pretend kiya 😡 ...aur aap phooch rahi hai aapne kya kiya... 😡 😉

T:Woh Ranveer ...woh toh Tia ne baas tumhare surprise spoil na ho iss liye kiya tha... ...u cant punish Tia for that...

R:Punishment toh aapko deni ki hogi... 😉

T:Kya! ..Ranveer kya tum saach mooch Tia ko punish karna chahte ho?? 😕

R:Ha...bilkul.. 😉 .

T:Thik hai ..Tia ko kya karna hoga... .

Ranveer sweetly plants a kiss on Tia's cheek 😳

R:Aaj hum saara samay sirf ek dusare ke saath bitayenge.... 😳 😳

Ranveer comes close to Tia... 😳

T: Par Ran....

Even before Tia can finish the sentence 😳 ..Ranveer kisses Tia on the lips 😳 ...gently... 😳

R:Ha 😉 ...aab batayiye..aap kya keh rahi thi...?? 😉 😳

Tia gently opens her eyes... 😳

T:huh!!! 😳 😳

R: (Ranveer smiles mischieviously) 😳 😉 Aap kuch keh rahi thi.... 😳 😉

T: (Tia comes to her senses) 😳 ..ha woh ..woh Ranveer ...saab log papa ke ghar pe hamara wait kar rahe hai..party ke liye...

R: KYA!! (...and Ranveer has so many romantic ideas in his head )

T:Sorry Ranveer ...Tia ne tumhare liye surprise party organise ki thi.....

R:Its ok Tia..waise bhi...aaj hum wahan pe guest of honour hai right?? 😉 😉

..well..as Tia said...Ranveer is intelligent...all thanks to the old age 😆 ...he comes up with a genious solution.... 😉

T:Ha... 😕

R:Toh hum aaj wahan late pohoche....actually .bohot late pohoche... to bhi koi aaj hame kuch nahi keh saakte... 😉 😉

T: ha par.... 😕

R:Tia...aaj hum bday boy hai...toh aaj hum jo kahenge wohi hoga right??... 😉 😉

Ranveer comes close to Tia and kisses her once again 😳 ...on the lips 😳 ...even before Tia can come to her senses 😳 ...Ranveer carries her off in his arms 😳 😳 ........