Luv me 4 a ...b luv - part 21 on pg 25 - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: simran22$

hey sweetheart finally our wait is over nd i m here..baby i m realy very proud of u..even u made us proud..luved to be knwn as ur frend...ur each nd every effort is extra-ordinary..nd u knw its all coz u beautifull human being its all coz of ur warm nd adorable heart..(jis mein meri bhi small si place hai..)remix wait ws kiling me..but ur fic made me alive..thanx to use bhi nahin kar sakti yaar..karoogi bhi nahin ..main tumhari precious nd pricesless gift ki insult nahin karna cahti....plz darling always remain the same..just u r perfect human being nd u define frendship... i agree with you ..

simran totally... payal is too sweet for words
Edited by aparna_1988 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
hi all....m reallly sry for this delay.......
thanxxx to all of u for all the comments......
me posting the next part....
keep reading nd keep njoyin......
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53

PART 5
ashi: hey hey thakur.....tumhe kya hua...


tia rushed to ranveer....


tia: ranveer ur okay naa...


ranveer: haan tia, hum thik hai....lekin humne jo abhi dekha....kya woh sach
tha ya hum sapna dekh rahe the?..............


tia: nahi, ranveer...woh sach tha...tia aur ashi ne yeh accept kar liya hai ki abb
hum sisters hai aur isliye hamare beech understanding honi sabse zyada zaruri
hai...aur jo bhi ashi aur tia ki choti moti fights hongi, woh hum apas mein hi
suljha lenge....


ranveer: sach mein........yeh toh bahut achi khabar hai....hum bahut khush
hai....ki aap dono ne apne iss naye rishte ki puri samajhdari se shuruwaat
karne ke baarein mein socha....


he hugs tia nd shows a thumbs up sign to ashi...who's glad over her decision
too....!!


after sum time they all were having their lunch...but ranveer was missing....yuvi
asked bout him...but before tia said sumthing...., ashi interupted nd said,
'ranveer kuch zaroori kaam se gaya hai jo thoda personal hai....'


yuvi was quite confused k ranveer ka aisa kaunsa personal kaam aa gaya but
then ashi signalled him tht he was out for some tia's work....


after they alll had had their lunch....sonia went to the parlour to get ready.
Sumeet went to his room for resting for a while...tia also went to her
room...ashi, yuvi nd sid went to ashi's room for discussing sum events....


In ashi's room:

ashi: ok yuvi...tum logo ja aaj shyam ka kya plan hai??

sid: hamare kya plan hai….aaj toh woh sangeet ka function hai naa…..toh hum bhi……

yuvi interrupts in b/w nd stopping sid frm saying nething further….:ah…ntn
much ashi.... tum log njoy karna sangeet function mein, ….. hum bass aise hi
thoda u know….guys guys mil kar…..kuch kar lenge..(acting like a
sweeeeeeeet innocent boy..)

ashi senses sumthing is wrong….
ashi: tum log sure ho na…..tum logo ka aur koi plan nahi hai…

yuvi: nahiiiii (making a sweet innocent face)
ashi thinks….yeh yuvi thik toh hai na…m sure yeh log aaj kuch gadbad karne
wale hai…!! main inhe tab hi handle kar lungi…!!

comments plsss....
Edited by palo rani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon fast asap.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
ur fic is amazing....
cont soon wit nxt part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
continue soon
this part was sweet
wanna see watz the gadbad

love ya
sonam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
tooooooo goood ....... 👏

eager to read the gadbad that yuvi is gonna do ....continue soon..... 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58

eager to know what surprise ranveer has in store for tia😳😳😉

please post a longer part

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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
Im soooo ***** for not being first to reply 😔 plz forgive me 😭

gettin back on commenting on ur fic,

As usual its mind-blowing,fantastic 👏 pehle post kyu nai kiyaa??????😉nyways, me waiting 4 da "gadbad" part 😆

continue soon,

waitin for the next part 😃😃


Divzie😳😳


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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
ur fic is fabb.
the way u portray each character is superb!!!!!
continue soon.

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