Luv me 4 a ...b luv - part 21 on pg 25 - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
i m really sorry payu for my late reply

and ya ur fic is supwerb
mindblowing
awesopmeeee

cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue da next part soon fast asap.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63

PART 6

The function starts…..Sumeet nd Sonia, being the bride nd the groom, were
seated nd ppl were cuming nd greeting them a gr88 life together….

meanwhile the beautiful daughters were getting ready….
both ashi nd tia were in tia's room….
tia: wow…!! Ranveer ki choice kitni pretty hai…..yeh dress toh un sab
dresses se bhi achi hai, jinka tumne aaj kachra kar diya….!!!

ashi: abb bass bhi karo behna….😉!!

tia: eww….puhleese sis is much betttter..!!

ashi: hey bhagggggu…!! btw ur dress is actually lukin pretty….😛

tia: oh yeahh….i know…ranveer ki pasand kabhi galat ho hi nahi sakti…..

ashi: c'mon now get ready fast!! Neeche guests aane shuru ho gaye hai…

tia: oh ho ashi…bass ho gaya ….. bass abb ek baar tia ko final touch up karne do…

ashi: hello makeup box…neeche mumma papa ki marriage ka function hai…
tumhari aur thakur ki marriage ka nahi….😆😆

tia blushes….😳

ashi: c'mon now main jaa rahi hoon, tum jaldi aao…..uffff

tia: ah..haan tum chalo tia bass aa rahi hai…

soo ashi…starts moving towards the hall….she is wearing an orange
sharara….nd is lukin totallllly hotttt…!!
yuvi saw her nd is stunned as he saw a completely different ashi cuming
towards him….
but instead….ashi goes ahead nd meets her parents…!!!
yuvi keeps standing there…😉

ranveer shook him….nd said: bana…..ashi wahan hai…yahan nahi…jaiye
kuch hello hi pshyco whacko kahiye……go go…😉😆😆

yuvi: huh…yeahh…main abhi aaya….

nd then ranveer turned nd tia was cuming down the stairs….
she was wearing a blue nd white coloured lehnga….nd was dressed
completely in the indan style…..

even ranveer was completely stunned by the beauty tia was reflecting tht
day….😛😛

she also went to her parents first…….ranveer followed her…..sonia nd
Sumeet both were very happy nd told both of their daughters tht the two of
them were lukin gorgeous….

ranveer was standing jst behind tia…..nd as she was bout to turn….she
tripped nd ranveer caught her in his arms……..😳

both were lost in each other's eyes….ven ashi interrupted….hey
bhaggu….tia..!!! be careful yaar….aise hi agar tum girti ludakti rahi toh
ranveer k liye problem na khadi ho jaye….**giggles**😆

tia: ah…tia is ok…thanku ranveer…

ashi: okay okay abb bahut romance ho gaya…bahut tariffe ho gayi….now
shall v proceed wid the function puhleeeeeese…!!

tia: oh haan…!! It'll get late warna….lets start…

ashi: yaa sure, lekin pehle yeh boys………..

tia: oh yeah….boys……..puhlessse vacate the hall

ashi: as the function is only for females…..!!!

tia: mmm yeah….

yuvi (very innocently)😛: ah haan…chalo guys…..lets leave….!!😉

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Edited by palo rani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
nice!!!! awesome !!!!! i wish main in sabko remix mein dekh sakti .......... 😭 😭
but no probs this is just great to read ur fic.......
continue sooon

love ya loads nd loads
sonam 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
wowwwwwwww....ur fic is so nice...i loved it so much
like sonam said wish ki inn sabko remix mein dekh sakti..."
nyways cont soon wit nxt part ....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
brilliant..kash yeh sab saach hotaa..i mean visually dekh patte....missing remixx...payal u really rock..praise to personally karni padegi.. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67




woowww ww 👏
its gettin realy xitin
i jus cant guess wats uv upto 😈
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
its very nice do continue soon fast asap.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
Hey Bhaggu!!!! "behna" 🤣🤣🤣 and den guys droolin ova da gals 🤣 aweosome part as always Payal 😳 continue choon
waitin for da next part 😃 😃

Divzie 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
nice n sweet part.
as i hv already said ur fic is superb. 👏

pls cont soon.

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