Luv me 4 a ...b luv - part 21 on pg 25 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Do I need to repeat my comments all ova again>> 👏

Love ur fic lots 😳

Continue soon 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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oooh.....cho chweet..aakhir ashi ke andar ki sis jaag gayi.....i luv ashi teasin ranny nd tia ...nd then ranny nd tia gt tht cute embareesd expression ....jus like the old dayz...*kahan gaye woh din*....m waitin fr the next part ..... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dis was very very very sweet.....loved it
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do cont soon wit the nxt part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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payal you are getting better and better at this...😳 i was imaginning the whole scene😳the look on ranveer face when ashi walked in and his concern for tia ... 😳hat ashi might hurt h er.. wow this is better than remix.... now you really got me yearning for your next part...❤️❤️ thats the advantage of a fan fic you get yo read what you wished for... 👏

and payal you have prooved that dont need heavy diologues to make a fic endearing ... its sweet and simple ..itsa sheer delight to read your fic i wish simran was here she would be over the moon reading this part❤️

Edited by aparna_1988 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its very nice plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do contine the next part soon fast asap.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee parts payal.just loved it.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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really a good part...... 👏 [=D> 👏 ] 👏 [=D> 👏 ]
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank u all for ur comments....😛😛
nd yeah aparna di...i toooo wish...simi di wud hv been here.....missin her a lot 😭....dii cum bk soon plssss 😳

btw m posting the next part....hope u all njoy reading it....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I too soo wish dat Simi Di was here to read ur fic😳Wish to chee you bck soon Simi Di😳😳😳

Payal, me waitin for the next part😉

Edited by divya_92 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 4

ashi: hey bhagggu....waise timbo..thakur ko tumhari bahut chinta hai....woh
tumse bahut pyar karta hai....

tia: tia jaanti hai ...... tumhe tia se kya baat karni hai woh kaho....tia k paas
time nahi hai jise woh tum jaisi punk k saath waste kare...soo shoot..!!

ashi: hey hey hey timbo...calm down...! main yahan hum dono mein peace
karne aayi hoon....!!

tia: ashi, tumhe kya lagta hai, jo tumne tia k saath kiya, tia usse itni asani se
bhul jayegi...no way!!

ashi: main ussi k liye tumhe sorry bolne aayi hoon....

tia: tia ko tumhara sorry nahin chahiye....

ashi: tia tum mujhe jaanti ho na....main kayi baar anjaane mein....

tia: anjaaaane mein.....!!!! anjaane mein.. se tumhara kya matlab hai????

ashi: oh ho tia, decorations k liye ghar mein curtains lagvane ka kaam yuvi ka
tha rite....aur usne apna kaam time pe nahin kiya...main tumhare paas iss
barein mein baat karne k liye tumhare room mein aayi , par tum nahi mili....
aur fir meri nazar gayi tumhari dresses pe. and mere super genius dimag mein
ek idea aaya. aur woh idea yeh tha k main tumhari dresses ko as curtains use
kar sakti hoon....

tia: ashi, tia ko tumhari baat samajh nahi aa rahi hai....tumhara so called super
genius dimag hamesha tia pe hi pranks suggest karta hai tumhe???????....
ashi: oh ho tia....its soo simple...kyunki mera dimag bhi yeh jaant hai k tum ek
bimbett ho...

tia: kya?????

ashi: okay okay m sorry... hey sis, puhleese apni angel sis ko maaf kar do....

tia: you...you punk....tum aur meri angel ...... angel sis....kabhi nahi.noooo never......

then ashi jst hugged tia trying to show tht she was really sorry....

politely tia: ashi tum yeh kya kar rahi ho??

ashi: hey tia, v r gonna b sisters......i know k hum dono ek dusre ko bahut
mushkil se jhelenge, but i think k hum dono bahut achi tarah se ek dusre ko
understand kar sakte hai......i feel k although most of the times, tumhare brains
beauty nap le rahe hote hai....lekin fir bhi u r a fabulous person by heart...!!


tia surprised: ashi!!!!???

ashi: tia main jaanti hoon, tumhe yeh bahut wierd lag raha hoga...but i think k
jab tak hum dono apne iss relationship ko agreement nahi denge....tab tak
hum zindagi bhar aise hi jhagadte rahenge......aur tum most of the times upset
hoti rahogi....

so wat do u say????

tia: tia thinks......k shayad tum thik keh rahi ho..i agree wid u...

and they both shake hands...nd then they hug….

at this very pt. ranveer enters the room....nd ven ranveer sees them both hugging, he gets the shock of his life........!!!!!!!

commments plsssss...!!

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