up on cloud no. 9.....AY one shot

ok so this is my first attempt at writing(n may b the last too 😉 ).thanks to my wonderful frnds who convinced (or blackmailed me to write😡) its a part of the fic-a-thon😳

requested by: niyu (u better like it😆)

cocept :imagine uv has jst proposed to ashi..write abt their first official date [;;)]
genre: cuuuute..wht else ..

bear wid me plzz.....n plz b kind ....coz im a person who has never even read ne books.....i seriously dnno nething abt writing afterall the warnings read at ur own risk😉😆

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up on cloud no 9

she cudnt stop blushing......nd even tho she had decided not to tell neone about yuvi yet......the shade of pink on her cheeks n the twinkle in her eyes
was pretty obvious for whole universe to see......by now mp nd vrinda had almost gone crazy seeing ashi in this state........ashi had started behaving like a timbo....blushing n giglling n worst nt uttering a word......wenever they asked her sumthing she just smiled......mp was really worried ......on the other hand vrinda was quite happy to see ashi this
way.....infact she had always wanted see ashi like tht.....

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yuvi was busy working on sumthing in his room........just then sid entered.....the room was a total mess.....he asked yuvi," wats
going on dude....wat ru upto?" bt uv was completely in a different world …. all he said to sid was..... "get me two vanilla ice creams in
the evening ok"......sid went n stood rite in front of uv n said....its me ur roomate sid.....nt ice cream deilvery boy.......n frm wen hav u
started eating vanilla ice cream?? n y do u want 2 cups??n if u want them so badly we can go rite now.....its break time.......evening tak wait kyu karni hai??.....n b4 he cud cont his non-stop questionare ne more.....yuvi poured a glass of water on his head n now sid was really stunned......n in a very serious tone he asked uv ....."wats wrong wid u bro? ru alright?" uv burst out laffing..........."yeh anvesha banerjee ray ke side effects hai"....he said wid the hugest smile on his face ..... now sid had completely lost it......n he dint even
want nemore explanations from uv......coz he knew understanding uv at this time was far beyond his mental capacity......he just gav a pat on uvs back n said "i think u need sum sleep......jus relax n get well soon"......n before uv cud say or do the next adventure on him .....he ran as fast as he cud out of the room....

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ashi was all day in her room thinking abt last nite.....perhaps the fact tht yuvraj dev is her bf now nd she belonged to him .....hadnt sunken in......bt she knew one thing.....tht inspite of all the fites she had wid him.....she had always fantasized of him too ......b him fake.....bt still he was her he-man! n finally she came out of her thots luking at the clock......it was 5 pm......n she had a date wid yuvi at 7 .....suddenly her heart started beating so fast tht may b yuvi too wud b able b it in his room .....she dint know wat
to wear.....wat to talk to him......she was really nervous.....it was their first *official* date afterall......finally she took a few deep breaths .... she remembered uvs words from last nite " tum jaisi ho perfect ho" nd she knew wat she had to do.....she pulled out her favourite red tee n her black
capris......wore her shoes n she was all set.....before leaving she had a luk at herself in the mirror.....n inspite of wearing the same
stuff she wore everyday....4 the first time she felt she luked beautiful.....she knew she dint hav to change.....uv wud like her jus this
way or NEWAY!

she met him at the corridor as decided........coincidently even yuvi was wearing red......(n y wudnt it b red?red was the colour of
love afterall.....nd love was soo much in the air!!) they both laughed luking at each other......wearing the same colour....." hey bhaggu we both look like sum sleezy hindi movie filmsatrs who wud ne moment break into a song n start dancing around the trees.....wearing matching clothes !!!" she commented...... uv jus laughed......n ashi too was relieved tht finally after a whole day of "timboing" she was back to her normal self........uv held her hand n started taking her sumwhere.....ashi quitely let him take her......she knew he obviously was taking her to their favourite place.....the SHED!!! bt uv had sum other plans this time......ashis silence only broke wen they
walked past the shed......she asked him again n again wher they were going......bt yuvi preffered to just giv her a luk nd a smile.......nd
tht was more than enuff 4 ashi to trust him .....she din ask him nething else then......

finally they reached their destination......ashi was speechless luking at the sight......he had bought her to mauryas terrace......she had never known ne place in whole of maurya cud luk so beautiful.......this time ther were no balloons....no hearts.....no flowers ....no candles......none of the things which she had expected yuvi to arrange........all she cud see was an empty terrace a table n two chairs.......uv pulled out a chair 4 her n she sat down.......the moon had cum out by now.....n the stars were shinning
brightly.......ther was no need 4 ne other light.......the weather wasnt breezy bt still was pleasant n cool........on the table ther was no champagne or soft drinks ......rather ther were two cups of ice-cream....... her favourite vanilla ice cream wid fresh strawberries on it.......he knew she luved it.......he fed her the first spoon of ice cream nd even tho it was very mushy n so nt sumthing she wud do otherwise....bt still she did feed him back wid another spoon of her ice-cream.....they silently finished both the cups of ice creams
luking at each other......n seriosuly ther was no place 4 words in tht moment.....after they had finished.....yuvi bought his guitar
which he had kept in a corner of the terrace......bt before playing he said " im sorry ashi i cudnt get a music system here....this place
was too risky.....jumbos room is just below .....bt i sumhow managed to get u here.....i wanted to bring u here!!! so we cant dance......bt definately can hav sum music".....he said with a wink....... she got up from the chair......went close to him n said....."uv thers no need for nething else here……
this is best date u hav ever arranged 4 me........thers nothing articial or fake here.........everything is natural…. real n true ......just as my
feelings 4 u.......nd who says we dont hav a music system here? i hav the world best music player rite in front of me......n its of the
pyschotic brand u see"......she said tht wid her typical wicked smile.......uv acted a lil upset coz she called him a music system........he turned
his face away from her.......bt then only she knew how her psychotic system functioned......she gav him a tight hug .....n thts was wat
he was waiting for.....

this date was really special......ther was nuthing fancy abt it........the only decorators this time were the bright colourful stars.....n the moonlight nd a few clouds here n ther……who were all doing a great job by the way.....they both sat down on the terrace floor .....ashi cuddled up in his arm ....n rested her head on his shoulder.....n yuvi slowly played the strings of his guitar......he began singing her a slow version of bryan adams cloud no 9...... (slow n soft...... making sure no1 else except them cud hear)

clue no.1 was wen u knocked on my door
clue no.2 was the luk tht u wore
thts wen i knew it was pretty gd sign
sumthin was wrong up on cloud no 9

well its a long way up n we wont cum down tonite
well it may b wrong bt babe it sure feels rite
coz the moon is out n the stars r bright
n watever cumes gonna b alright
coz tonite u will b mine
up on cloud no9

(luking deep in her eyes he sang the last line)

we can watch the world go by
up on on cloud number 9

tht moment was so perfect.........n both knew this was going to stay wid them 4ever n even after tht........so they did the the most rite thing next.......they kissed..... n sealed tht date forever in their hearts.......wishing time cud freeze!!!

they were indeed up on on cloud number 9…….n they dint want to cum down tht nite……….

*** (not) the end ***😳

n now dont blame me if it was horrible......plz direct all ur shoes n tamatars n eggs to harshu niyu nitzie n smriti😆

do comment so tht i wudnt dare to write again😆

reading dis i would just say u should again nd agin dare to write...gr8 one...

thankgod,u finally posted.... lemme tell u d truth.i dint like it.coz


coz i luved it 😳 its amazing,awesomeeeeeeeeeeee 👏 mindblowing 👏
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do write oneshots 😳

aww it was so cute dnd u say u dont noe how to write 😆 dats wat i shud say now 👏

awwwwwwww its brilliant re 😳 u shud rite more 😆 c evry1 luvs it 😳 n i luv both version 1 n version 2 😛 will b requestion more frm u ;;);;);;)
neway its shoooooooooooo shweet ....n no the song[wich u dint rite] is certainly nt the best part..the fic as a whole is 😳
cudnt resist loggin in n rpelyin 😳 n u kno im strayin frm temptation to log in2 if 😡 see wht i do fr u 😆😳🤗

u maad maad maad girl 🤪 i cant believe daat dis is ur first attempt of writing anythng..its way tooo too perfect fo a bignner u chuppy rustem...its just awesmeee...and u knw waat i liked the most in it...the VANILA ICE 😛and even that whole thngy u wrote abt ashis confusion on wearing waat dress and finally ended up wearing the same old clothes coz she knew he wld lobe her nehw 😳and ur fic ka side effects are dng dis to me 😍 😍 😍the song fitted tooo so perfectly as if it was just meant for dem and d place he took her too was just awww...nw u better write loads of such awesme ficcys and be ready to be tortured by all of us....love yaa 🤗 🤗

awesum 👏 tooo gud rakhi keep writtin

Idiot hai re tu!!! U can write cho well n still u were doing cho much nautanki!!!!! Remember it suits only niyu! 😆

Coming to d fic....I dunno much about version1 or 2..but I loved what I read 😳 For the first time I read a completely sweet fic about AY...since most ppl(me included have them fighting) It was very cute to see ashi thinking about what dress to wear since it sooo unlike ashi...n only yuvi can make her behave like that!

It as also nice to read abt Yuvi's natural decorations...haila..I had never thought of the terrace before..so good use of the terrace! 😉
N yah...the ice cream was cho yummy! 😳

N I liked the song...it suits AY's feelings right after they patched up! N the idea of ashi just putting her head on his shoulder n yuvi singing it out to her brings out some nice images in my head 😳

after reading such a cute part .... 😳 who could posssibly say that u were writing for the first time....

excellent work yaar..... 👏

thank u so much guys......im really feeling great after reading all the comments 😃 ......n i must say i hav never felt so happy even after reading the comments i got 4 my vid mixes.....writing is different n definately much more satisfying .....n im so glad u all appreciated it 😳 ....i was feeling so embarassed after i posted it 😆 😆 😆 ..... coz ppl here r so talented n i stand now where in front of them....bt watever i cud manage to write im glad u all liked it......thanks a lott every1.....each n every comment meant a lott....thank u so much 🤗