Imaginary scenes - Page 2

I am really glad u all liked it....and esha that was a really good scene....and guys just making 1 point clear anyone in the forum can continue or start an altogether different scene using whichever characters he/she wants....its solely an individuals choice....and a request everyone plzzzzzz try ur hand on this.....so tia, lamina,sayeri and all the others plzzzzzzzzzzz try writing sumthing I am sure all of u will be good at it.

anvesha tht wasa superb scene yaar .............. i mean i can actually visualise it as the dialogues and the attitude was very much simialr plz write sum more scenes on yuvi and aashi .............i juss love thescenes between them

eesha even urs writing was damn good plz continue both ofu

hey....

this tia -ranveer story is the same on written by wild_fire4444 from secundarbad on remixgang website....

hey guys tere was a big mistake which i commited . actually the last part which i posted was not meant to.i posted with out cheaking wat m i posting actually it was this one. thanks to lamina i knew my mistake. lamina u were right that part was posted by wild fire from remix gang. so i have deleated it. sorry for inconvience. thank u again lamina if u had not notice it than i wud never realize the mistake

it is tias 18th birth day party . ranveer works hard to decorate the entire place

at party:
tia enters. she is wearing red dress .tia enters with his dad , soina aunty & ashi(same day of birth) she is looking really pretty . ranveer has a big smile on his face. but the smile vanishes as soon as he sees arjun. sumeet calls him
tia: thank u soo much sonia aunty. tia loved this place
s: tia i didnt decoreted it . it was ranveer how did all this
ranveer was a cute smile & was expecting thanks
t : sonia aunty tia feel that she should cut the cake now
r(was sad abt tias behaviour but cont to smile): theek hai tia. hum abhi cake mangate hai
he goes & cake comes
sumeet(to tia & ashi): both of u cut the cake toghether
t: no papa. tia will cut this cake first
sumeet: but tia
ashi interrupts: uncle let her cut as such she can do very few things
sonia: ok sweet heart cut it
a:( to sonia) mom it is too boring here . i m leaving with my friends
before sonia can ans she leaves
tia cuts the cake .all starts clapping. ranveer is also happy, arjun is standing just behind tia
she gives 1st pieceto her papa
s: happy birth day my little princess
as he is abt to feed tia she says
t: no papa . it is too sweet for sweets
2nd one to soina aunty. she was just abt to trun around & give to arjun sumeet intrerupts
s: u r finding ranveer right? he is here. go give him
ranveer is on top of world.
tia gives a sad expression to arjun & say: yes papa
arjun thinking : sisodia u will pay for comming to this party
tia feeds it to ranveer . as she was abt to leave ranveer catches her hand . she turnd around
a small cake piece is in his hand
t( very potilety): no ranveer...........
before she cud complete r says: plz tia , humare lia
she accepts & eat it
arjun is burning now
sumeet: common tia . all r dancing . u & ranveer join( i love sumeet for bringing tia-ranveer toghter)
before tia says r: chale tia
forwards his hand
tia has to execept as her papa r there
she gives a sorry kind of expression to arjun but arjun smile saying that it is ok
ranveer-tia starts dancing it is a slow dance like they did in practice
they r really very close
tia is just looking at flore while ranveer cant take eyes from her
r: tia
t:hhhhhhhhh....
r: ajj app bohut pretty lagrahi hai
t( something is pinching her): thanks
t: excuse me plz & she leaves the hall
as the hall is very crowed no one notices it except ranveer. he follows her
outside tia is crying. ranveer sees it
r: app roa kyu rahi hai
t(wiping her tears): none of ur bussiness & she moves to go inside but our hero catches her hand & makes her close to him & says
r(tears r roling down her eyes): app ko pate hai na hum apko rote hua nahi dekh sakete
t(frees herself): tia ko pate tha ki tum cheater ho par ajj yeh bhi pate chal gaya ki tum liar bhi ho
r: hum cheater hai??????? humne kisko cheat kiya???????
t: tumne tia ko era pe cheat kiya
r: yeh app se kisne kaha????????
t: tia ko sab pate hai ki tumne tia se revenge lene ke lia tia se pyar ka natak kiya aur us din vrinda ne bhi tumhe era ke ghar dekha tha
ranveer is shoked
r: aur iskeliya tumne bet ki bat ki juthi baat ki
tia nods her head. ranveer is too shoked but more happy
t: phela tumne tia ko cheat kiya aur abb tum pretend kar rahe ho ki tum tia ki care karte ho
ranveer just hugs tia while she cannot do anything
rr: humne app ko cheat nahi kiya . hum to era ko ye khena gaya the hum app se kitna pyaar karte hai. i really love u tia
tia is very happy to hear this & say tia bhi tumse bahut pyar karti hai
they seperates
ranveer wipes her tears &her on neck &says
r: happy birthday tia
t: ranveer ajj take tia ko itna accha gift kabhi nahi mile
r: hum bhi kise ke birthday par gift nahi mile. abb chale

esha

ita alright esha

be careful next time

btw take a look at my fan fic yuvi ashi one

TIA – RANVEER

Imaginary scene 1

hey...here is another one on Tia's bday...a totally different take though...coz this is pre-bday 😃....Hope its not too long and draging for all of u...................

It's the day before Tia's bday. Ranveer wants to do something special for her. The last few days have been full of ups and downs for them. He did manage to spend some time with Tia while helping her with the bday preparations….yes, they weren't alone….but at lest they were around each other…and then there had been bad times…having to see Tia with Arjun and covering up for them...(little did he know that it wasn't easy for Tia either)

Ranveer gets an idea for a nice gift and goes ard Maurya high looking for Tia. He bumps into Meher

R: Meher, Aapna Tia ko kahi dekha hai

M: Tia has gone to the coffee shop with that stupid Arjun. Pata nahi when she will get out of this madness

Ranveer is a feels bad after hearing this….but he doesn't want this to stop him for giving Tia the special gift. He says bye to Meher and goes to the Coffee shop.

He sees Arjun and Tia together …he feels hurt seeing Tia with Arjun …but goes towards them.

R: Tia, hum aapko kabse dhond rahe hai

Tia is still feeling hurt and angry by what happened between them…but lately she has been finding herself thinking about Ranveer a lot…she reprimands herself…saying "Tia stop thinking about Ranveer...he doesn't care about you…stop acting to stupid"

T: Ranveer, what r u doing here…what do you want?

R: Tia, Aapke papa aapko dhund rahe hai…unhone hume phone kiya tha...unhe lag raha hai ki aap hamare saath hai…woh hum dono se milne aa rahe hai…jaldi chaliya hamare saath

Now Tia worried…she has the shocked expression on her face…with mouth wide open and eyes popping out ;)

T: Papa….papa hamse kyu milene aa rahe hai... oh my god…what will Tia do now….tension so much tension….this is not good for Tia's skin

All Ranveer can do is roll his eyes at the statement (thinking …Tia hasn't changed one bit…hoping that she stays this way always…even if she is silly at times)

Arjun is wondering about Ranveer's intensions…but even before he can interrogate Ranveer ...Tia cuts in

T: Arjun, Tia is sorry par Tia ko Ranveer ke saath jaana hoga…I am sorry babes...please try and understand… Tia will make up for this…please

A: Tia its okay… it's not your fault…we will meet after your dad goes away

Tia and Ranveer walk away leaving Arjun behind

Tia and Ranveer are walking toward the school…..Ranveer starts walking in a different direction at one turn

T: Hey you. what do you think u r doing…Tia thought Tia's papa is waiting for us at school…where do u think u r going?

R: Tia we have to go some place before we go to school. Please come with me

T: What!! Tia is not going anywhere with u dehati camel

Ranveer raises his eyebrows and asks tauntingly

R: Kyu aap hamare saath aane ke liye daar gayi?

Tia gets angry after hearing this and retorts

T: Tia Ahuja kisi se nahi darti...let's go...just hurry up ok

Ranveer takes her to their special place…the garden where they had a nice time together

T: Ranveer tum Tia ko yaha kyu leke aaye ho…What r we doing here?

Ranveer is really sweet to Tia now….

R: Tia kaal aapka bday hai…hamare paas inte paise nahi hai ki hum aapko koi expensive tofa de sake…par hum chahte the ki phir bhi aapko koi tofa de…simple sa hi kyu na ho …hum jaante hai ki aap hume like nahi karti aur who sab hamare beech that woh jooth tha… jooth hi sahi, par kabhi, yeh place aapke liye special thi…..iss liye hum aapko yahan lekar aa gaye

Tia gets really emotional after hearing this…she looks into Ranveer's eyes and says sweetly

T: Ranveer, tumne Tia ke bday ke liye itna soocha…uske liye thanks

..and smiles looking at him…

R: Tia kya aap apni ankhen band karengi please

T: kyu?

R: Tia hum nahi jante ki aap hume trust karti hai ya nahi…par please is baar hamara vishwas ki jiye...hum aapko hurt nahi karenge

Tia closes her eyes….Ranveer leads her into the dome where they had danced before

R: Tia ab apni ankhen kholiye

Tia opens her eyes….the whole room is lit with candles and there is a small cake at the centre with a candle lit in it. Tia has tears in her eyes after seeing this

T: Ranveer tumne Tia ke liye itna sab kuch kiya…kyu…Tum to Tia ko hate karte ho na…?

R: Tia, Hum aapko hate nahin karte…humne aapko kabhi hate nahi kiya hai…aapne joh hamare saath bet ke liye date kiya uske baad bhi

T: Ranveer tum Tia ko hate nahi karte?….. (she says inquiringly)…phir tumne Tia ko two time kyu kiya Ira ke saath…kya woh saab jooth tha?

Ranveer is totally confused at this point

R: Ira ..two timing….yeh aap kya keh rahi hai….Tia humne aapko kabhi two time nahi kiya…

T: Ranveer …Vrinda ne tumhe Ira ke saath dekha tha….aur usne Tia ko yeh bhi bataya ki tum Tia ke saath sirf koi revenge lene ke liye ho…kya yeh jooth hai?

R: Tia…Ira hamare liye ek dost se zyada kuch bhi nahi hai…ha hum unse milne jaroor gaye the...par just as a friend…aur Tia hum aapse itna pyaar karte hai ki hamare liya aapse aur aapki khushi se badkar kuch bhi nahi hai…phir hum aapko kisi ke liye...aur koi bhi revenge ke liye kaise hurt kar sakte hai…..Tia humne hamesha sirf aapse pyaar kiya.. aur ab bhi bahot pyaar karte hai…

Ranveer eyes get all teary…and Tia too has tears falling down her cheek…Ranveer continues…

R: Hurt toh aapne hume kiya….humse pyaar ka naatak karke...ek bet ke liye…aur phir bhi hum apna pyaar nahi bula paye

Tia starts crying at this point…managing only to blurt out a few sentences ….

T: Ranveer………Tia…Tia ne jooth kaha tha….Tia ne koi bet nahi lagayi thi…Tia ne bhi hamesha sirf tumhe hi pyaar kiya hai…Jab Vrinda ne Tia ko Ira ke bare main bataya toh Tia was really hurt…and angry….Tia felt betrayed...Tia didn't know what to do…u had been acting so strange and distant before this...and Tia didn't know what to make of all this….and Tia was so upset that Tia lied …to you and everyone ……….and to Tia too…Tia said that Tia didn't love u…but it was a lie….Tia is so sorry that Tia didn't trust you…Tia hurt you….Can you ….can you forgive Tia….Please ……please forgive Tia.

Saying this Tia hugs Ranveer….Ranveer too is overwhelmed by all this….realising that all this time they loved each other and were away from each other…just because of a misunderstanding

Ranveer wipes Tia's tears and holds her in his arms…

R: Tia….humne aapko maaf kar diya…it wasn't ur fault alone…I was equally responsible…we should have spoken to each other about this and cleared the matter…I should have told you about my problem and u should have told me what Vrinda told u….it could have prevented us from being separated from each other…

Ranveer looks into Tia's eyes….and then asks her

R: Tia do u have any feelings for Arjun? (hoping and praying for her to say no…even when he knew that it would be answer too)

T: Ranveer…Tia likes Arjun…but just as a friend…..he has been there for Tia when Tia was hurting…but that's all he is….Ranveer…Tia only loves you…only you

Ranveer is really happy after hearing this…seeing Ranveer smile after such a long time brings a smile on Tia's face too

R: Tia lets make a promise to each other….lets never hide anything from each other again…I wont be able to bear being away from u again

T: Promise…Tia cant imagine her life without u too….Tia wants to be with u always

Tia and Ranveer look into each other's eyes romantically and hug.