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Posted: 20 years ago
#71

sumeet calls tia. she is with ranveer. they r talking abt so tia doesnt notice that phone is ringging

sumeet to himself: i know that u r upset with me but just pick up the phone

ranveer hears the ring

r: tia app ka phone

tia notices & pick up the phone

s: hey my little princess, how r u ?

t: papa app ko tia bhi yade hai. tia ko to lage ki app ko sirf pallavi hi yade rate hai

s: stop it. when will u stop critizing pallavi. infact she was the one who told me to call u

t: papa app ne tia ko phone isliya kiya kyuki pallavi ne app se kaha. gr8 tia ki life mai bas yahi remaining tha

s: u r impossible. tumhare saath ranveer hai kya abhi?

t: ha hai. voh tia se love karte hai aur tia ki care bhi karta hai. appki thare nahi hai

s: usse do muje baat karni hai

t: kyu pallavi ne kaha hai.

s: give him the phone

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Posted: 20 years ago
#72

ranveer taes the phone

r-hello sir

s-ranveer kya tum tia ko apne saath mere ghar dinner ke lye la skhte ho

r-lekin sir humhe nahi lagta ki tia manengi

s-ranveer tumne hanesha situation ko handle kiya hai.

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Posted: 20 years ago
#73

r: sir hum puri tarahe se try karenge par promise nahi karsakte

in meantime tia starts crying as she feels her father no more loves her

s: ranveer plz....

r: ek min hold kijeya

r(to tia) : app ro kyu rahi hai. tia plz rooona band kijeya

sumeet hears that tia is crying

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Posted: 20 years ago
#74

sid- but what yuvi?

(yuvi thinks 4 a moment and heads towards ashi's room, yuvi knocs at the door ,& mp opens it)

mp- kya chahiye he-man?😆

yuvi-i want to talk to ashi, its urgent .

ashi- hey bhaggu!! tum yahan is time ,arjun dekh lega to u r dead

yuvi-ashi kaya hum shade me jaake akele baat kar sakte hai?

mp-ashi no way tum ab nahin ja sakti😕

ashi-kyun nahin sweetheart😳 ofcourse main ja sakti hu.

suddenly someone at the door (knock knock..)

mp-who is it?

arjun- itna shor kyun open the door now!😡

mp-oh no ab kya hoga? tum dono quick cupboard me chup jao😕

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Posted: 20 years ago
#75

( both yuvi n ashi got inside the cupboard ,and mp locked it from outside and then u know 😉)

arjun-where is ur dear friend ?

mp-who ashi she she...😕

vrinde-she is changing in the bathroom, yes .

arjun-oh really....now look i dont want to hear any noise from this room , is that clear?

vrinde&mp- sure.

(mp closed the door and vrinda goes to open the cupboard)

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Posted: 20 years ago
#76

TIA - RANVEER

Ranveer puts the phone away...

R: tia aap kyu ro rahi hai?...kya hua?

T: ranveer ...Tia's papa has changed...aaj unhone tia ko sirf pallavi ke kahne pe phone kiya....he didnt call on his own...he doesnt love tia anymore

R:(wiping Tia's tears)...Tia aapke papa aapse both pyaar karte hai..aap unki princess jo hai...bas aab tode se nazar hai...par aapno se naraz bhi zyada der nahi rahte hai na

T: Ranveer...aab sab badal gaya hai..pehle agar tia upset hoti to papa would sort everything..par jab se pallavi aayi hai..papa doesnt love tia anymore...he only cares abt pallavi

R: Tia ...aaj aapko zhagda hua hai..bai is liye aapko yeh lag raha hai..dehkiye bas kuch hi time main sab thik ho jayega...hum hain ne aapke saath...hum aapko kabhi aise upset nahi rahne denge...hum saab solve kar denge....promise...aapko hampe vishwas hain na?...please ek bar smile kijiye na...hamare liye...please

Tia gives a sweet smile

R: Tia hum aapse bohot pyaar karte hai..aur hum humshe aapke saath rahenge...aapko kabhi dukhi nahi hone denge

T: Tia loves u too ranveer...thanks for being there for tia.

Tia hugs ranveer and he kisses her forhead gently

R: Toh aap chelengi na...hamare liye...(TIa nods)

Ranveers tells this to Sumeet..Sumeet decides to be nice to Tia after realising that she is really upset....while Ranveer is thinking of someway to really cheer Tia up

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Posted: 20 years ago
#77

r-tia ab aap apne room jayiye aur kal subhe ko class shuru hone se pehle humhe shed mein miliye.

t-par ranveer kal to koi band practice nahi hai.

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Posted: 20 years ago
#78

r: kya hum sirf band ki practice ke liya mil sakte hai. kya app ko humse daar lagte hai??(has a smile on his face)

t: no ranveer tia trusts u complitely. tia will come

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Posted: 20 years ago
#79

Its night...Tia has to meet Ranveer in the shed tomorrow and also go and have dinner with Papa and that tacky pallavi tomorrow....Tia is trying to sleep..but is too excited with the happening of the day to sleep....

Tia sneeks into Ranveer's room (like he did in tia's room before 😉 )

Aman and Varun are fast sleep

Tia goes and sits next to Ranveer who is sleeping and nudges him

Ranveer has been having a dream abt tia...so he still thinks its a dream

R: (mumbling in his dream)...Tia...hume aapko bohot miss kiya...aaj hum bohot kush hai

Tia realises he is dreaming and starts giggling and nudges him even more

Ranveer wakes up now...and sees tia in front of him...and is visibly confused as to whether he is still dreaming or is this real

Tia realises this and pinches him

R: ouch.....Tia..Tia...aap sach mooch yaha hain..hamare room main...Tia aap yaha kya kar rahi hai...aman aur varun jag jayenge....aur koi aag gaya toh

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Posted: 20 years ago
#80

t: tia ko neend nahi aa rahi thi aur tia ko lage ki tumhe bhi nahi aa rahi hogi. but tia was wronge

r: tia agar hum sote nahi to app humare sapne mai kaise atti

well tia is sitting on ranveers lap. he puts his hand around her

t: ranveer u r so sweet. tia loves u for this

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