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Posted: 20 years ago

ranveer hears this & interrupts

r: sir woh tia ko ......woh .....haa..........hume kal tia ke saath bahar jana hai

s: tia kya tumhe ye baat karni thi

t:(looks at ranveer who tells her no to tell anything): ji papa

s: ranveer usme poochne ki kya baat hai........mai permission note sign kardonga......ok mai ek min ma aye

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r: tia app kya baat karne chati thi

t: tia papa se pooch na chati thi ki tia ke papa ne tumhare papa ke saath aisa kyu kiya

r: tia...app pagal ho gayi hai??....abhi abhi appke aur mr ahuja ke relation better hua hai...agar app yeh sab karengi toh pallavi iske fayda uthalegi

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Posted: 20 years ago

tia-ranveer

Tia:Tia ko koi farak nahi parta ki woh snake Pallavi kya karti hain.Tia aise nahi rah sakti.Tia ko papaa se puchna hi hain.

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Posted: 20 years ago

tia-ranveer

r: app samajti kyu nahi....waqt anepar hun khud mr ahuja se pooch lenga

t: lekin ranveer

r: tia app hume promise kijeya ki appabhi kuch nahi karengi

t: theek hai

r: aur waaise bhi itne stress app ki skin ke liye acha nahi....bhul gayi??

t: ranveer tia ke liye sab se imp tum ho...tia really loves u a lot

r: tia humare liye bhi app se zyade kuch nahi hai....app ke liye hum kuch bhi karsakte hai...i love u tia

t: tia loves u to ranveer

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Posted: 20 years ago

guys i soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo wish something like this really happens but looking at the way things are going i dont see anything good appening in the near future.i feel so bad.this sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo tacky😭

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Posted: 20 years ago
hey tia have faith....tia n ranveer love eachother too much....they will be together....they love eachother enough to face this and still not let their love get affected....plus like they say "this too shall pass" ...plus i like how priya(greatmaratha) put it....all these trials r part of love n they make the bond stronger...nice thought btw priya
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Posted: 20 years ago

Tia - Ranveer

Ranveer looks into Tia's eyes and says

R: Tia chale....hum ne aapke liye ek special surprise plan kiya hai

T:(smilling...big time)..ha chalo

Ranveer puts his arm on his waist and asks Tia to hold it..which she does happily

Ranveer takes her to a beach...there is no one around...just a single rug placed on the sand...with a small wooden table in there...lit with candles...and there is food and drinks there as well..soft drinks ofcourse...and small cassette/cd player right next to it...

Ranveer takes Tia's hand and guides her to the rug and they both sit down..ranveer opens the coca cola bottle (well they cant have champange now can they)...and pours it into two glasses....and passes one on to Tia and raises a toast

R: Tia ..yeh aapke liye...thanks for coming into my life and loving me so much

T: No Ranveer...this is for both of us...for completing eachother and being there for eachother through thick n thin

They have a sip....Ranveer puts on music in the player now...its the soft music that they danced to before (sorry couldnt think of any other music)...

Ranveer gets up and extends his hand...asking Tia to give her hand

R: Tia...kya aap hamare saath yeh dance karengi

T:(smiles and gives her hand to him)...Tia thought u would never ask....Tia has been waiting for this for so long...

They come close to each other and slow dance to the music..getting lost in each other's eyes...

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Posted: 20 years ago

tia-ranveer

they r just dancing lost in each others eyes...no one speak a single word..their eyes speak...........it start raining(i know it is too filmy but didnt have any other idea)

r: tia chaliye...late bhi ho gaye hai aur baarish bhi shuru ho gayi hai...hume school vapas jane chahiye

t: theek hai ranveer

they both reach school....it is 11:55 now .........

t: ranveer ...good night

r: tia ek min..........

he goes behind tia ..takes a chain which he had earlier gifted...puts it around her neck & kisses her neck

tia sees the chain is really touched

r: happy birthday tia

showing his wrist watch which strikes 12:00

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Posted: 20 years ago

There arjun sees them and shouts Sissodia

A:flunky tum yahan kya kar rahe ho.

ranveer as usual just stares at him.

Tia:puhlez tia ke pass permission hain

A:now the permission is over so back to ur rooms.

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Posted: 20 years ago

Hey

just going through the whole story............u ppl rock👏

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Posted: 20 years ago

tia-ranveer

t: arjun puhlez .....ranveer se rudely baat karne ban karo

a: u have gone crazy...................sissodia u will pay for breaking me & tia

t: arjun agar tumne ranveer ko punish kiya .toh .toh.toh tia tumse kabhi baat nahi karegi

r: jane dijeya tia........in jaise insaan se baat karne bekar hai...........app jaye app ke room mai...waise bhi late ho gaye hai aur kal subhe lecture hai

t: ok ranveer....good night

r: goodnight tia

tia smiles at ranveer & then giving an angry look to arjun leaves

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