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Posted: 20 years ago

Tia is in seventh heaven....but ranveer is tense..about the truth that he has to tell tia..it will be only a matter of time before arjun finds out..anf if arjun tells about it to tia..tia will never forgive him...he will lose her..forever...he prays in his mind...asking god and his daata to give him strength...and please dont take his tia away from him

Tia and ranveer enter the dome room...

T: Ranveer, Tia is so happy today...this is the best bday party tia has ever had...tia can imagine a better present that being with you...tia will treasure this always

Ranveer is thinking.."tia...after what i tell you..i am scared that this might be the worst day of ur life...please forgive me tia..please"

Tia sense Ranveer is tensed about something

T: ranveer..kya hua..saab thik hai na..tum tia se kuch baat karna chate ho?

R: ha tia...hum aapse kuch bohot important baat karna chahte hai...

T:(looks at him wide eyed..and smiles)..ranveer bolo...tia is here for u na...everything will be ok

R: tia..joh hum aapko batane wale hai..uske baad shayad kuch thik na ho..shayad aap hame kabhi maaf nahi karengi

T:(now totally worried)kya hua ranveer...please tell tia..tia is getting really worried now

Ranveer tells her about how his father commited suicide and how he decided to take revenge ..by hurting the daughter of the person responsible...and thats y he came to the school

T: ranveer..khon hai woh....kiske wajah se tumhare papa ki death kui?

R: tia....jo insaan hamare daata ki maut ki liye responsible hai....woh ...woh insaan aapke papa hai tia..mr sumeet ahuja...aur hum yahan unki daughter yani aapko hurt karne school aaye the

Tia is too shocked after hearing this..she doesnt know how to react..she wants to say something...but no words come out of her mouth..tears start rolling out of her eyes

Ranveer continues

R: tia....hume maaf kar dijiye..please tia...hum kabhi aapko yeh batake hurt nahi karna chahte the...tia please hamare vishwas kijiye....hum aapse bohot pyaar karate hai...aur hum aapko kabhi hurt nahi karenge

Tia is still motionless..all this is too much for her to digest

R:tia...tia hume jab aapko pehli baar dekha...tabse hame aapse pyaar ho gaya...par jab hame pata chala hi aap mr ahuja ki beti hai..toh hame decide kiya..ki hum jo aapke liye feel karte hai..usse bhul jayenge...humne koshish ki ke hum sirf aapse farz ..aapne maksad pe focus kare....par sach kahe...toh hum kabhi aapne feeling ko bhool hi nahi paye...hum jabhi aapko kisi aur ke saath dekete toh hurt hota tha...hamesha...jo bhi karte...saab ghum phir ke aap pe hi katam hota...par phir bhi hum samajh hi nahi paaye...ki hum aapse inta pyaar karte hai

T: (manages to says only one word)..Ranveer...

Tears are rolling down her eyes continuosly....why did this happen...ranveer of all people....why

R:tia...us din jab aap school a letter chod ke chali gayi....tab humne jaana ki aap hamare liye kya hai

T:revenge ka ek mohra na..ranveer( tia says sadly)

R:nahi tia....tab hume jaana ki hum aapse bohot pyaar karte hai..hum aapko kabhi rote hue...hurt hote hue nahi dekhe sakte...jab hum aapki ankhon mein ansoo dekhte hai...toh hum yahan dard hota hai (pointing to his heart)..dil mein...tia us din jab hum aapke saath the ...hum saab bhool gaye....hamare farz..hamara maksaad...yaad raha toh bas yahi...ki hum aapse bohot pyaar karte hai..aur hamesha aapke saath rehena chahte hai....par jab hum ne daata ki tasvir dekhi....toh hum bohot guilty feel karne lage...hame laga hi hum unse dhoka kar rahe hai...aur hum samjh hi nahi pa rahe the..ki hum kya kare....kisi choone..pyaar ko ya farz ko....aur is liye...hum khoye khoye rehene lage...aur aap bhi upset rehne lagi....phir jab hum ira se milne gaye....tab unse milke ke baad hume ehsaas hua..ki hum kabhi bhi aapko bhul nahi sakte...

Ranveer looks into tia's teary eyes....he is really worried..he knows that he has hurt tia a lot...will she ever forgive him...ranveer think.."i have to tell tia..how much i love her..the only person that matters to me know is tia..please believe me tia"

R:tia us din....hume daata se mafi mangi...aur unse kaha..ki hum pyaar ho chunte hai...hume decide kar liye...ki hum aapne revenge ho bhool jayenge...tia hum uss din aapse yahi batane aaye the....ki hum hamesha aapke saath rahenge....kabhi aapko hurt nahi karenge......par us din aapne bet ki baat karke....hamare pyaar ko thukra diya....tia humne aapko kho diya...tia aapko khoke humne jaana ki aap hamari zindagi ho...hum aapke bine nahi reh sakte....hum aapke bina nahi ji sakte..tia please kuch toh boliye....tia aapki khamoshi hame maar dalegi..please

T:ranveer....tumne tia ko bohot hurt kiya hai....tia bohot confused hai (still crying n upset...ranveer too has tears in his eyes...he is scared that he has lost tia for ever)....ranveer...kya tum tia se sacch much pyaar karte ho....ya usse sirf hurt karna chahte ho...kya tum tia se aaj bhi revenge lena chate ho

R: tia...nahi tia....aab hum aapse koi revenge nahi lena chahte....tia hamare liye aapse aur aapke pyaar se bhadkar kuch bhi nahi hai tia..hum aake bina rahi jee sakte...tia hum saab kuch bhool chuke hai ..revenge ke baare main....tia hum aapse bohot pyaar karte hai...aur hum nahi chahte the..ki hamare bheech kuch aise secrets ho..jo hume alag kar de

Tia looks into ranveer's eyes....she realises that he is telling her the truth...but it still is not easy for her to deal with the situation

T:ranveer..tia doesnt know what to say or do anymore...tia is hurt....and tia confused....ranveer..tia know her papa...tia's papa cant be responsible for ur papa death ranveer..(almost asking him rather than telling him)...he cant be na

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Posted: 20 years ago

R: tia...aab iska koi importance nahi hai..hum bhool gaye hai saab revenge ke bare main....aab hum aapko kabhi hurt nahi karenge...aur re ahuja ko bhi kabhi hurt nahi karenge..hum aapke ankhon mein ansoon naho dekh sakte tia....please hame samajh ne ki koshish ki jiye....hum baas farz ki sooch rahe the...par jab se aap hamari zindagi mein aayi hai...hamare liye aapse important koi nahi hai....please hamare nadani ko maaf kar dijeye

T:ranveer..tia needs to know this..are you sure tia's papa was responsible...as your sure that there is no mistake or misunderstanding here..please tell tia...tia has to know

R:(realises that tia is really bothered about this and wants an answer)...ha tia...hame poora yakin hai...hum bhi aaj tak wish karte hai..ki kash aisa nahi hota

T(crying): tia ke papa issa nahi kar sakte...tia ke papa kabhi kissi ko itna hurt nahi kar sakte

Ranveer holds her face in his hand...and shakes his head...

R:kash yeh saab jhooth hota..kash aapke papa hamare daate ki maut ki zimedaar nahi hote...par tia....hum bhool gaye hai yeh saab...hamare vishwas kijiye

T:nahi ranveer...agar tia ke papa tumare papa ki maut ki liye responsible hai...toh tia is feeling responsible too....tia has to clear this....tia is feeling guilty too....tia cant go on like nothing happened tia cant....ranveer...tia doesnt know what to do

Ranveer is even more scared now that he has lost tia....will she go away from him forever....how can he stop her..what can he do

R:tia please....i am sorry tia....humne jab yeh aapko bataya..toh hum yeh nahi chahte the ki aap guilty feel kare...guilty toh hum feel kar rahe hai....ki aaj tak humne aapko saach nahi bataya..aapse hamare revenge ki baat chupayi...tia hum aapko khona nahi chahte the....tia hum saach mooch revenge ke baare mein saab bhool gaye hai....tia aab hamari zindagi aapse hai...aapki khushi se hai...

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
hey..sorry if the post is too long..😭..let me know i will delete the last one and the one coming up...really sorry again.😭..got the idea..and got writting...ended up being too long😭 ...hope i havent upset anyone here
Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago

TIA RANVEER

Now tia is in dilemma...who should she choose..who should she stand by...she loves ranveer..the person she has loved ever since they first met...the person who is her life....her world..her happiness....or her father...the person who brought her into this world...gave her every luxury...treated her like a princess...true ranveer has forgotten about his revenge....but that doesnt ease anything....will things ever be normal?

R: tia..please kuch kahiye...tia hum vaade karte hai ki aaj ke baad aapse kuch nahi chupa yenge...tia hum aapke papa ko kabhi hurt nahi karenge...tia hum aapko aise nahi dekhe sakte ....hum aapko nahi kho sakte tia..aapke bina hum maar jayenge...

T: ranveer...tia doesnt know what to do..tia doesnt want to lose you either....but tia has to find out what really happened...tia cant choose between u and papa...tia cant take one person side against the other..tia cant see anyone hurt ..tia loves both u and papa...

R: tia what has happened ...is in the past...hum usse bhoola chuke hai...tia hum nahi chahte ki aap kabhi bhi hurt ho...hum nahi chahte ki aapko hum mein se kissi ek ko chunna pade...kya ab pehle jaise hum dono ke saath nahi rah sakte...?

Tia realises that she has to find out what really happened...she cant get either ranveer or her papa get hurt ...tia realises thar ranveer truely loves her...she still trusts him...she knows now that he would rather go through pain on his own than see her hurt...she can see it in his eyes..that he is telling the truth...that she means to world to him....and that he is making such a big sacrifice for her...but somehow..somewhere she is still feeling guilty about the pain ranveer went through..she wants to help him get over it...the only way she can think of...being there for him...loving him..helping him heal...and finding out the truth...tia's papa cant be responsible for this...but then who is?....tia will clear this...

T:ranveer ..tia cant lose u either..tia loves you..tia knows now that u will never hurt her...tia trusts you....tia will be there for you through all this...tia promise...everything will be ok...promise (hoping and praying in her mind that everything gets sorted soon)

Tia and Ranveer wipe eachothers tears and hug...each promising to themself that they would help heal the hurt that the other one is going through

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago

i am just trying out fro the first time plz tell me whether its fine or not

yuvi-ashi

yuvi: ashi,maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki main kabhi life me tumse itna pyaar kar sakta hoon,par ashi jab se hum dono close aaye mujhe pata chala ki tum mere liye kya ho

ashi: main tumhare liye to sirf ek foolish bet hi ho sakti hoon yuvi,u have hurt me,but i am not like u,i forgive you but ab main me kabhi tumpe trust nahi kar sakungi

yuvi: ashi plz aisa mat kaho plz give me just one chance ashi,plz i love you,agar tumne kabhi mujhse pyar kiya hai,1 second ke liye bhi,then plz ashi give me just one chance to prove that i love you so much that anyone cannot,mere jitna pyaar tumhe koi nahi de sakega plz ashi ......

ashi thinks for a while and suddenly remembers aditya's words:

" anvesha shayad tumne notice nahi kiya, i have really started liking you.."

then ashi says...........

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Posted: 20 years ago

arjun decides to take maximum advantage of this situation.

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Posted: 20 years ago

y no one is cont...lamina plz cont na.

well i m posting one part

here it is:

both of them again head towards the party......sumeet is waiting for them

s: tia where had u gone???????(smiling)i know both of u want to spent time with each other but now plz dont leave party again

tia doesnt know how to react as she promised ranveer to b with him but she love her papa & cudnt b rude to him.....ranveer notice this

r(to ahuja): sir hum toh bas aisa hi gaya the.....acctually

s: ranveer i didnt asked for explanation.i know u will take care of my little princess ........common now enjoy the party

ranveer also cudnt see sumeet being so nice to him

there arjun makes a entry

arjun to tia: tia when u r free i want to talk to u..plz dont say no

tia see to ranveer..ranveer knows that arjun was planning to tell tia abt the revenge but he was releved that he had already told her...he just nods telling tia to talk

arjun is really angry to see tia asking for permission to ranveer

t(to arjun): ok ..today after party

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Posted: 20 years ago

yuvi - ashi

ashi- nahi yuvi ...........mera dil chahta hai ki main tumpar trust karu lekin mera brain ............it doesent allow me to trust u anymore . main phir se kisi bet ka hissa banna nahi chahti

yuvi - thik hai ashi .........main samjh sakta hoon coz kisi ka jab trust break ho jaata hai toh phir dobara trust karna kitna difficlut hota hai ...main jaanta hoon (and he remembers the hurt yamini had given him). thts why i wont force u to trust me ........lekin main tumse or khud se ek promise karta hoon tht tumhara khoya hua viswaas maain wapas lekar rahunga or ek baar phir hum saath honge .................thts my promise ashi

ashi just looks at him and try to believe wat yuvi told her .............yuvi also just stare at her with watery eyes ....................

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Posted: 20 years ago

tia-ranveer

tia goes with arjun,

arjun tells tia abt ranveers plans

tia-arjun tia ko yeh sab already patah hai

arun-wat

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Posted: 20 years ago

tia-ranveer

tia:ab agar tumhari baat khatam ho gayi hain to Tia ko ranveer ke paas jana hain.

Tia goes leaving a shocked arjun behind.In the party tia goes to sumeet

Tia(with a serious look):Tia ne apse kuch akele mein baat karni hain party ke baad.

Sumeet:Kya hua tia

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