Sirf Tum... pt. 27 pg. 40 LAST PART!!!!! - Page 7

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Posted: 19 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

this part is 2222222222222222222222 senti re 😭 cont asap




i totally agree!!!

but neway----Great part!!!!!


please continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
nice part komal it is mindblowing 😳 continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm,lagta hai meri first reply karne main sabko bahut probs hai 😡

kissi koh koi problem nahin hai dear...i wish jaise tumne iss baar phir first reply kiya waise hi tum next time bhi karo...

nd yeh komal the part was too good...nd really senti...or i should say touchy...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 10

After the mehendi, everyone went home. As for Ashi and Tia, well, they went to their rooms and changed. It was so late in the night. Sonia and Sumeet went to their rooms to check on them. After that, they went to their own room and soon fell asleep. Latty, Vrinda, Meher, and Pri also changed and fell asleep. All of the girls were staying at Ashi and Tia's house for the wedding. You'd think that everyone would be asleep since it was sooooo late, but somewhere in the house, 2 girls were still wide awake lost in their own thoughts.

It was a beautiful night. There was a full moon and you could see the stars shining. Ashi was sitting on her bed thinking about everything that was going on. After a while she turned over on her stomach and rested her cheeck on her fist. She just layed there for a while lost in her thoughts. So lost that she didn't even realize the noise that was coming from below her window. Suddenly, a ladder appeared at her window and someone was climbing up. Yet still, our Ashi was clueless. The person climbed in through the window and saw Ashi. The person went close to her and gently blew at the side of her face. Some of her hair came in her eyes, and still not paying any attention, she moved it slowly. Noticing that Ashi was paying no attention, the person went even closer to her and slowly moved her hair and kissed her on the neck. Ashi felt that. She quickly turned to see and before she could say anything, he hugged her really tight.

Ashi- Yuvi.... Yuvi kya kar rahe ho?! Hatto!

Yuvi- (letting her go) Kya hua tumhe? Kabse koshish kar raha hoon tumhaari attention idhar laane ke liye, lekin tum... pata nahi kin khayaalon mein khoi hui thi.

Ashi- Kabse matlab? Tum kitne time se ho yahaan pe?

Yuvi- Bas abhi abhi aaya. Yehi kuch 5-6 minutes pehle.

Ashi- Woh sab toh theek hai lekin tum aaye kaise. Mera door toh bandh hai. Aur neeche ka bhi door loocked hai. Toh phir tum... (turning around) WINDOW????!!!!! Yuvi, tum pagal ho gaaye ho kya?! Tum window se andar aaye??? Psycho tumhaara dimaag chutti pe gayaa hai kya?! Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh??? Agar tum gir jaate toh?!

Yuvi- Shhhh. Ashi relax. Aur thoda ahista bolo. Sab jaag jaayenge.

Ashi- uh... theek hai theek hai.

Yuvi- Haan toh kya keh rahi thi tum? Mujhe kuch hojaata toh, main gir jaata toh. Right? Ashi, main tumhaare saamen khada hoon. Eik bhi scratch nahi hai. I'm perfectly fine. See? (saying this with his arms wide open and sloly turning around in circles)

Ashi- Psycho, mujhe pata hai ki tumhe kuch nahi hua, lekin AGAR ho jaata toh? Tum normal insaan ki tarhaan door se nahi aa sakte?

Yuvi- Okay okay okay!!!! Next time, main darwaaze se aaoonga. Okay? Khush?

Ashi- Eik baat bataao. Tumne aaj mere saath argue yaan fight nahi kiya. Maine tumhe itna kuch keh diya aur tumne mujhe itni dry aur normal si reply di. Kyun? Kya baat hai? Mood theek nahi hai kya?

Yuvi- Mujhe kya hoga? I'm fine. And anyway Ashi, kya yeh zaroori hai ki hum hamesha argue karein? (in flirty tone) Aur raha sawaal mood ka, toh mera mood tumhare saath argue yaan fight karne ka nahi hai.

Ashi- Achha? Toh phir kis cheez ka mood hai?

Yuvi- Bataa doon?

Ashi- (impatiently) Bataao.

Yuvi- (moving closer and closer to Ashi until she couldn't go back any further and ended up sitting on her bed) Bataa doon?

Ashi- (nervously) Uhhhh... nahi. Rehne do. (stuttering) Mm.. Mujhe nahi pataa karna. That's okay.

Yuvi- Nahi, ab tumne pooch hi liya hai toh bataa deta hoon.

By now, Ashi was lying on her bed and Yuvi was getting closer and closer on top of her.

Ashi- Yuvi.... Yuvi... no. Yuvi... (rolls away from under him and he falls on bed)

Yuvi- Arre yaar. (grabs Ashi's hand as she was walking away from the bed. The he pulls her back on the bed. She falls back on the bed right next to him.)

Ashi- Yuvi... (she gently rests her head on his chest) Yeh sab achha nahi hai okay.

Yuvi- Relax sweetheart. Main tumhe kuch nahi karoonga. At least humaari shaadi tak toh nahi. 😉

Ashi- Psycho!!!

Yuvi- Chillax. (running his fingers through her hair) Ashi, how do you feel?

Ashi- Kya matlab?

Yuvi- Nahi, ab humaari shaadi ho rahi hai. And all these rasams, I mean, tumhe kuch strange toh nahi lag raha naa?

Ashi- Of course not! In fact, mujhe bohat achha lag raha hai. You know, everything is so exciting. Hum eik nayee life shuru karne waale hain. Eik saath.

Yuvi- Hmm. I'm so glad ki finally we're getting married.

Ashi- Me too!

Tia's room!!!

Ranveer had made the exact same entry as Yuvi. The only difference was, Tia heard him coming up. She quickly ran to the window to see what all the noise was. She was shocked to see Ranveer climbing up to her window.

Tia- RANVEER!!! (reaching her hand out to help him come in)

Ranveer- (coming inside) Thanks Tia.

Tia- Ranveer, tum Tia ki window se andar kyun aa rahe ho?

Ranveer- Woh, actually Tia, hume pata hai ki darwaaza toh locked hoga aur humaara aap se milna ka mann ho raha tha issiliye, humne socha ki hum khirki se andar aa jaate hain.

Tia- Ranveer, agar tumhe chott lag jaati naa toh Tia would never be able to forgive herself.

Ranveer- (concerned) Arre Tia. Aap toh rone lagin.

Tia- Aur nahi toh kya? Tumne Tia ko darra diya.

Ranveer- (smiling) I'm sorry Tia. Humne aapko darraya. Hume maaf kardijiye.

Tia- (goes and hugs him) Tia forgives you. Bas, Tia thodi si worried hogayee thi. Tia loves you Ranveer.

Ranveer- Hum bhi aapse bohat pyaar karte hain. Aap fikar mat kijiye Tia. Jab tak aap humaare saath hain, hume kuch nahi ho sakta. Sach.

Tia- Tia hamesha tumhaare saath hai Ranveer. Always.

Ranveer- Hum jaanthe hain. Waise aaj aap bohat pyaari lag rahin thi. Haldi lagi hui.

Tia- Oh Tia's god! Tum Tia ko poore time stare kar rahe the???

Ranveer- Aur nahi toh kya? Aapko nahi dekhenge toh kise dekhenge?

Tia- Ranveer!!!

COMMENTS!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
nice part komal continue soon i loved ashi yuvi part in this 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
waooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo 👏
wat a romantic part 😳
i loved d way yuvi was getting naughty 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nd tia helping ranveer 2 cum in,was way 2 phunny 😆
bechara humara bholabhala sidhasadha ranveer 😆 ek window bhi theek se climb karna nahin aata ,but yuvi got sum training on how 2 climb a window,i guess,wat say guys?? 😆 warna ashi to uska help nahin karne wali thi 😉 😉 use help karne ka wajah sayad woh use dhakke marke neeche hi phek deti 😆 so,meri yuvi ne training leke prepared hoke hi aaya tha 😆 i guess 😉 😉 **proud look** 😳 😳 cont asap wacko 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: aditisilawat

kissi koh koi problem nahin hai dear...i wish jaise tumne iss baar phir first reply kiya waise hi tum next time bhi karo...---aww,how chweet adi😳😳btw,tu to ym pe aatihi nahin,kabhi to aaja ym pe😉tujhse jyada bhagwanji ka darshan milna aasan hai,i guess,lol!!😆😉

nd yeh komal the part was too good...nd really senti...or i should say touchy...

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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
awesome part komal dear...loved to whole part starting fom the first line to the last line...
Uv nd Aashi part was cho sweet...really...
cont asap waiting for the next part to come but ha i'll be late to reply because i'll be offline these days may be for a week because of tests...
so bye nd take care
love ya
Aditi
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nd yeah this is to komal nd saya both...i'll come on ym after my tests than that we'll talk a lot...ok?

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