Sirf Tum... pt. 27 pg. 40 LAST PART!!!!! - Page 25

Great part!

hmm....even more embarrassing stories...continue soon must see those

ohhhh! komal di good part 😉
par abh jaldi continue karna huh???? 😃
don't take more than 3 days to write a part 😳
puhleese 😳
warna i'll have to wait sooo much to only read one part
cool part cont soon ok 👏

greattttttt......plzzz continue sooooon... 👏

ok komal da net prob is fixed nd i read the part nd must say yaar its gr8 👏 aur haan uppar tera naam maine komal ki jagah kamol likh diya uske liye s***y woh papa ke mob se type karte waqt mistake ho gayi thhi i'll edit it rt now...

Part 27

MP- I know! Ashi, remember jab Parth 2 years ka tha aur main isse dress karne ki koshish kar rahi thi, toh yeh kitna fast run kar raha pure ghar mein. My god! Main iske peech bhaag ke tired hogaayee thi but yeh, he kept going and going. Poore ghar mein only in his diaper!

Ashi- I know Boxer. I remember. I had to hold him down so you could dress him. (both start laughing)

Parth- (annoyed by what they were talking about) MOOOOOM!!! How embarrassing!!! (to MP) Mausi, at least mere friends ke saamne toh yeh sab nahi bolo.

Ashi- What friends? Tumhaare friends ki isse bhi zyaada embarrassing stories hain humaare paas.

Wondering what friends he's talking about??? Okay. Time to meet the rest of the bachha party. Sid-Meher's twins - Rahul and Akshaye. Vrinda-Varun's kids - Naina, Kanak, and Ajay. Pri-Sanjay's kids - Mahima, Vijay, and Atul. MP-Aman's kids - Saumya and Tushar. Latty- Nakul's kid - Suraj. Last but not least, Tia-Ranveer's kids - Sonali, Sangeet, and Pari.

Sonali- (hearing this comes running to Ashi) Mausi mausi.

Ashi- Yes sweety?

Sonali- Aapko hum sab ke baare secrets pata hain?

Ashi-MP-Meher-HAAN!!!!

Sid- Meher.

Meher- Haan?

Sid- Woh dono carbon copies kahaan hain?

Ashi- Carbon copies? What?

Meher- Don't be confused. Woh Rahul aur Akshaye ki baat kar raha hai.

Yuvi-(coming over with the twins) Carbon copies? Nice man. (give each other high fives)

Rahul-Akshaye- DUUUUUDDEEEE!!!!! Don't call us that.

Sid- What? Easier hai. Anyway, tum logon ne apna lunch khaaya?

Rahul-Akshaye- Yes dad!!!

Sid- Thank god. Tumhaari mom mujhe maar daalti agar usse pata chalta ki tum dono ne lunch nahi kiya.

Yuvi- Dude, tum Meher se darrte ho kya?

Sid- Nahi dude. Actually, usne mujhe kahaa tha ki carbon copies humaare saath sports khel rahi hain isiliye I have to make sure ki woh dono lunch kar lein.

Yuvi- Okay dude.

Vrinda- Hi guys. Kya ho raha hai?

Sid- Kuch nahi. Just... you know.

Vrinda- Okay. Achha Rahul, Akshaye, tum dono mere saath chalo. Tumhaare Ranveer chaachoo cricket match shuru karne waale hain aur tumhaare saare friends tum logon ka wait kar rahe hain. Come.

Rahul-Akshaye- Okay buaa.

Sid- Wait man. Ranveer dude match start kar raha hai? Toh let's go Yuvi.

Yuvi- Yeah, you go. I'll just be there.

Sid- Okay dude. (goes to Meher) Let's go.

Meher- Kahaan?

Sid- Cricket khelne. Chalo. (they both go over there with their kids)

Yuvi-(goes behind Ashi and hugs him from the back) Hi.

Ashi- Hi. Tumhe kya hua?

Yuvi- Matlab?

Ashi- Tum aaj kuch zyaada romantic nahi ho rahe?

Yuvi- Nahi. I think baaki sab dinon se kam.

Ashi- Whatever. Kya problem hai?

Yuvi- Problem yeh hai ki sab humaara wait kar rahe hain cricket ke liye. Toh aap chalne ka kya lengi ma'am?

Ashi-(laughs) Chalo.

The game was almost over. Ranveer's team was winning. Ranveer's youngest daughter was at bat. She was only 3 so Ranveer went up with him to help her bat. Varun was balling.

Vrinda-(Commentator) Yeh aaya ball or woh maara...SIXER!!!!!! Aur jeet gaayee game Ranveer ki team!!!!

Pari- YAYYYYYYY!!!!!!! PAPPPPPPAAAAA!!!!!!

Ranveer-(picks her up and kisses her on the cheek) Dekha, humne kahaa tha naa aapse. Aap hume zaroor jeetaayengi.

Tia-(comes running to Ranveer and kisses Pari on he cheek) Mumma's so proud of you baby!!!

Pari- Mumma, Pari ne kitna achha sixer maara naa. Aapne dekha?

Tia- Of course baby. Mumma ne dekha. You were too good!!!

Mahima (Pri's daughter)- Pari!!! Wow!!! Kitna achha shot maara tumne.

Pari-(Ranveer puts her down) Of course angel. Pari ke papa ne jo uski help ki thi isiliye. (goes to Ranveer and pulls on his pant leg)

Ranveer-(he bends down) Ji? Humaari Pari ne hume bulaaya?

Pari- Papa Pari loves you!!!! (kisses him on the cheek and hugs him) (to Mahima) Chalo angel Niana aur Sonali Di ke paas chalte hain. (Naina is Vrinda's daughter and Sonali is Tia's older daughter)

Mahima- Okay. Let's go.

Ananya- Mumma, can I go play with Saumya and Kanak? (Saumya is MP's daughter and Kanak is Vrinda's other daughter. Ananya, Saumya, and Kanak are just like Ashi,MP, and Vrinda)

Ashi- Haan Shona. Go ahead.

Ananya- Thanks mumma.

Parth- Dad, can I hang out with Rahul, Akshaye, and Vijay? (Vijay is Pri's son)

Yuvi- Yeah big man. Go have fun.

Ranveer-(to Tia) Tia, aapko eik baat bataayein hum?

Tia- Haan.

Ranveer- Humaari shaadi ke baad aur humaare bachhon ke baad vhi, aap hume bilkul wohi Tia lagti hain jo Maurya mein thi.

Tia- Tia toh bilkul bhi change nahi hui. Lekin tum bohat change hogaaye ho.

Ranveer- Kaise?

Tia- Tum Papa banne ke baad aur bhi zyaada cute hogaaye ho.

Ranveer-(laughs and comes closer to her) Achha.

Tia- Ranveer, sab dekhenge toh kya kahenge?

Ranveer- Kya kahenge? Shayad aapne sab ko nahi dekha. Woh dekhiye.

Tia looks over and sees all of her friends. Latty and Nakul were teaching their son how to walk, Varun and Vrinda were feeding each other, Meher was sitting on a swing and Sid was pushing her and they were talking and laughing about something, Pri and Sanjay were sharing an ice cream cone, Aman was riding his bicycle and MP was sitting in front of him and they were laughing about something and MP's hair kept on flying into Aman's face, and Ashi Yuvi were chasing each other. Actually Yuvi was chasing Ashi. Eventually Yuvi fell and didn't bother to get up and Ashi laughed and sat down on the grass next to him. Yuvi pulled her down and they were both lying on the grass looking up at the clouds. All of the kids were with each other and they were playing their little kiddy games.

Tia- Oh Tia's God!!! You know what Ranveer, Tia ne abhi abhi eik baat realize ki hai.

Ranveer- Woh kya?

Tia- 5 years hogaaye hain but these guys? They're still the same. Koi bhi nahi badla.

Ranveer- Hum jaante hain Tia. In sabko dekh ke, aapko nahi lagta ki hume bhi kahin hona chahiye?

Tia- Kahaan?

Ranveer- Wahaan. (points to the boating area of the lake. You know the Dil Ki Yeh Dhadkan waala) Chalein Tia?

Tia-(smiles) Hmm.

About 3 hours later, all the friends got ready to leave. Their kids got tired and fell asleep. After all of the kids were strapped in the back seats of the cars, they all stepped back and looked at their kids.

Yuvi- Guys, kitna strange hai naa? Aaj se 5 saal pehle hum sab Maurya mein students the. Humaare parents aur teachers hum bacche kehte the. And today, we're standing here, aur apne kids ko dekh rahe hain. It's so hard to believe ki hum log, jo apne parents se thodi si privacy lene ke liye excuses dhoondte the, aaj khud parents ban gaaye hain. I mean, it's totally sufi! (everyone smiles)

Ranveer- Haan banaa. Kitni sahi baat ki hai aapne. Waise aap sab ne eik baat notice ki.

All- Kya?

Ranveer- Dad ban ne ke baad Yuvi kitni achhi baatein karne lag gaaye hain naa. (all laugh)

Tia- Guys, Tia can't believe ki even 5 years later, hum sab bilkul bhi nahi change hue. Oh Tia's God!!!

Ashi- Hey Bhaggu!!! Timbo, sab kuch badal skta hai lekin hum log nahi. Understand? Duh-uh!!!

All- (put hands in) REMIX ROX!!! Humaari generation and yeh new generation. Future ke Mauryans aur Remixers.

The End!!!!!!! Comments!!!!!

what??? Are you guys serious? No camments!!!! Tum sab ne mera dimaag khaaya to continue and no one replies. Thanx alot!

wow perfect ending komal !!!!!!!! awesume loved it do keep writin 👏

yipppe me first to reply 😃 😃 😃 dont komal u ll get more replies soon

hey ppl. No I'm not continuing this. I'm just planning on reading my old FF so I commented to keep it on the 1st page. I ended this a while back.