'What took you so long?'AYFIC*(PT 15PG22) - Page 7

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Posted: 19 years ago
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HI guys PART7 is up .Ok this is a bit boring I felt so while writing it.The worst part is that it doesnt have Ashi in it 😭 .
But I didnt want Nishi to behave like a jilted lover afterall she's Yuvi's friend she cant be bad 😡 so I thought I couldnt keep her single and added the Vishal part to it(it was always on my mind).
Hope you guys like it.
Please tell me if you dont Ill make it interseting in the next parts.
Ok now for the best part
Ok Karans father will come in the next part.(Part8)
Which will come soon. 😊 😊 😊
Cant wait to write it.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
phew,finally 😳 😳 yuvi told nishi d truth 😳 😳 great part abha 👏 pleej cont asap.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
nd d part was not boring at all 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
excellent excellent part..... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
great part!!
not boring at all

please continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
gr88888888 part 👏
i didn't found it boring...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ok Karans father will come in the next part.(Part8)
Waiting to post it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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jaldi,jaldi,jaldise post karo,cant wait 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART8

If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you.

- Courtney Kuchta -


Yuvi was thinking of this poem as he was exictedly getting ready to go to Love Zone club where he promised to meet Sid,Nishi had never seen Yuvi so happy though she was a bit sad she smiled to see her love smile.Yuvi left for the Love Zone to meet Sid with his parents,Nishi and Vishal.

At the Ahuja Residence.

Tia had come over with Ranveer and Nikhil. She and Ashi were arguing on what they have to wear.
Tia-Tia thinks that she should wear Mamma's orange dress and you punk you should Wear Mamma's Pink dress.
Ashi-Timbo! How many times have I told you not to think it could be dangerous you see and me wearing pink?No way.I think I should wear my black dress and you should wear that green dress it goes with thakurs shirt(Ranveer had just entered).
Tia looked back to Ranveer and smiled.
Tia-Not bad Camel,after our marriage your tastes have improved.
Ashi and Ranveer-Ya right!(slowly)
Tia-Are Karan and Nikhil dressed?Do they also have a dresscode?
Ranveer-Yes tia they do have a dress code.Suit!and they are dressed in them.
Ashi and tia then looked at two cute boys dressed in Black suits and red shirts.
Ashi and Tia-Wow!
So finally Tia and Ashi also get ready Tia is Wearing a green knee lenght frock with a chain and green pendant and green earings,she was looking gorgeous but Ashi looked mind blowing in her black drees with some crystals on them ,her jewellery which consisted of a chain and earings were also crystals.Sonia was dressed in an orange dress and Sumeet in a Black suit and orange shirt.They all went for the party to be greeted by Yuvi,Sid,Meher,Pri and Yash(Pri's hotelier husband).
Yuvi looked at Ashi and was amazed by her beauty she carried herself so perfectly and there were no flaws in her she was just perfect.
Sid then went on to the stage and asked the dg to stop the music everone on the dance floor grumbled.
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Sid-Sorry guys,but I have an important annoncement to make all of you must be wondering why I called for a party,right?
Everyone-Yeah!
Sid-Chillax guys I am telling you,(he hinted Mehar to come up on the stage and Yuvi showed him thums up 👍🏼 sign and gave him the go ahead look.)
Sid-Ok guys Mehar and I have finally decided to tie the knot the next week.
Everyone-Yipeee! Great,Wow.I have a request to make,especially to Ashi,Yuvi,Tia and Ranveer,can remix perform in our wedding?and also now?
Ashi,Tia and Ranveer-Now?
Yuvi-(coming forward with a piece of paper,and people behind him are holding the instruments.)Here are the lyrics and the insruments.
Ashi,Tia and Ranveer-you knew about it.
Yuvi-ofcourse,Sid is my best friend.
Ashi-Duh-uh How could you forget both of them are psychos.
Nikhil and Karan(coming forward)-what is remix?
Yuvi-remix is a band that all 4 of us used to play in school.
Remix played then all of them were enjoying ,the elders Sonia and Sumeet,Meera and Yashwant,and other elders left as they were too tired,Karan and Nikhil left with Sonia and Sumeet.
It was early morning 3 and they were all still dancing,singing and rejoicing.Yuvi and Ashi had danced together.Ashi was sitting with Vrinda and discussing something when she got a call and excused herself,Yuvi saw this and he knew that it was the perfect time to tell Ashi his feelings.He gathered his courage trying to ignore the fact that she may refuse.
Ashi was looking around when she saw a tall man she knew coming towards her it had been around 3 or 4 years since she saw him,she looked surprised, she didn't want to see his face again after what he had done to her friend.She was disgusted by his sight.?
He had some papers in his hand he throw them on the table .
Man-hi,Ashi
Ashi-You?what are you doing here?
Man- Nuthing I just came to take my son away from you,where is he?I want him back you see.

Ashi's heart sank when she heard those words from his mouth,she prayed to god to not let him do so.She thought,"It would be better if god asks my life than Karan."

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part abha,pleej cont asap.

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