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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
PART5
Ashi was now feeling bad that she had been rude to Yuvi.
Just then Karan came in and said,"Mumma'where is my dad?"Ashi,who was suprised by this question said "Karan just go to your room."
Karan-No you always say that i want to know where my papa is.Tell me.
A(yelling)-Karan,just shut up and leave I want you to go inside and sleep.
Sonia and Summet who were worried because they had not heard Ashi screaming at someone since a long time came running outside.When they saw that she was screaming at Karan they were even more suprised.
Sonia-Mummum,Why are you screaming at my darling grandson like that?
Sumeet-Ashi,is everthing alright?
Karan ran to Sonia and Summet snd Sumeet lifted Karan up and asked him.
Sumeet-Why did you make mumma angry?
Karan-Nanu,I just asked mumma where my Papa was.

Sumeeeet and Sonia just frowned and looked at Ashi who was now litrealy in tears,Sumeet handed over Karan to Sonia and hinted her to take him away.

Sumeet-Ashi,what happened to you you have never behaved in such a manner with Karan.I know his question must have hurt you,Ashi but you never behaved like thisI know something else is bothering you,what is it?Ashi remember that sorrows are divided if shared by all.what is bothering you Ashi?
Ashi-Papa,I was very rude to Yuvi today,because he was trying to know about my life.
Sumeet-Ashi,he's your friend and probably he was a bit worried about you,thats it.I think you should go and apologise to him.
Ashi-I was thinking so to Papa but-
Sumeet-but what?Are you waiting for Diwali?
Ashi-Papa!
Sumeet-go on
Ashi-Papa,do you think Im a good mom?sometimes I feel Im the worst mother in the world,depriving Karan of his father's love.
Summet-I think its in your genes to think so because remember even Sonia would think about the same,jokes apart Ashi I think your the best mom.
Ashi-But mamma is the best mom.
Sumeet-I think you are the best mom.


Sonia just watched from the door and smiled she was so used to it,Ashi and Karan bonded more with Summet than her,she was not jealous though because Tia and she geled perfectly.Ashi called Yuvi up who was still hurt by Ashi's words.He knew Ashi was hiding something from him so that he wouldn't get hurt ,but he was determined to know.

Axes and swords flash like day,

But harsh words forever stay.



Tring,Tring!
Ashi-Hello ,Is that Yuvi?
Yuvi-Hi,Ashi how are you?
Ashi-Yuvi Im sorry I hurt you,Please forgive me.
Yuvi-Its alright,but you have to face the punishment.
Ashi-Punishment? Ok!anything except telling you about my life.
Yuvi(unhappy)-Ok, you and Karan have to spend a day with me,maybe tommorrow.
Ashi-cool!We can meet at the Pioneer's Plaza tommorrow,its a new mall thats opened up.Will Nishi be coming?(though Ashi didnt want her to come)
Yuvi-No.She has some work.So ill be there at nine,sharp.
Ashi-Nine?So early,alright anyways you said sharp and it better be so.
Yuvi-As you say Ma'am
Ashi-Bye
Yuvi-Bye

Ashi then went to Karan who was still weeping as he had been yelled at by his Mom for the first time.


Ashi-Karan,sweetheart Im sorry,please forgive mamma.
Karan-Its ok mamma Im sorry,I made you feel bad.But I didnt mean to. I am bad boy.
Ashi(in tears at her childs maturity and innocence)-No Karan,You are the best son in the whole universe and I love you a lot. Ok we have to go to meet Yuvi uncle tommorrow morning,so if you want to go then you have to go to bed.
Karan-Yuvi uncle,yipeee.Mumma I like Yuvi uncle a lot.Do you like him?
Ashi(smilingly)-Yes, now go to sleep.good night.
Karan-good night.
Ashi smiled as she tucked her excited son into his bed,she didnt know about other things but they both liked being with Yuvi,well who could deny the fact that he was a darling to all girls.But she didnt know that his charm would work on kids also.She walked to her room lay on her bed gazed at the stars outside and remembered the days they spent together they were so happy.She remembered their first dance,kiss,proposal all these brought a smile to her face and she slowly feel asleep waiting for the next day so she could meet him.
Edited by rockingrebel - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
Hi 😊 😊
The next part is up hope you guys like it .There isnt much of Ashi-Yuvi here so you guys may find it boring,if so please tell me without any hesitation .
Edited by rockingrebel - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
awnnn!!!
great part!!!

love Ashi/Karan relationship....andSummet/Asih relationship!!


please continue soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44

Boring......have u gone nuts Abha....This part was the best amongst all the parts.....loved everything abt it.....fantastic....amazing....brilliant πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

The Ashi yuvi convo was nice...but Karan Ashi was chooooo chweeeeeet😳 πŸ˜ƒ....n even karan calling sumeet nanu was sooooo cuteeeeeee😳.....but the best was the sumeet ashi convo.....loved it lotssssssssss πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘...have always been wanting to see their bonding in Remix but unfortunately they hardly showed it......but u brought it out so well in ur fic πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

keep it up n plz write the next part soon πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 19 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: anvesha rulz

Boring......have u gone nuts Abha....This part was the best amongst all the parts.....loved everything abt it.....fantastic....amazing....brilliant πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

The Ashi yuvi convo was nice...but Karan Ashi was chooooo chweeeeeet😳 πŸ˜ƒ....n even karan calling sumeet nanu was sooooo cuteeeeeee😳.....but the best was the sumeet ashi convo.....loved it lotssssssssss πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘...have always been wanting to see their bonding in Remix but unfortunately they hardly showed it......but u brought it out so well in ur fic πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

keep it up n plz write the next part soon πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

Thanx a lot

Im happy that you liked it even I wanted to see Sumeet-Ashi bonding in Remix,they showed Tia-Sonia bonding but not Sumeet-Ashi one.So I put it in my fic

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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
hey abha,totally kool fic re πŸ‘ very very nice re 😊 plz cont asap.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: anvesha rulz

Boring......have u gone nuts Abha....This part was the best amongst all the parts.....loved everything abt it.....fantastic....amazing....brilliant πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

The Ashi yuvi convo was nice...but Karan Ashi was chooooo chweeeeeet😳 πŸ˜ƒ....n even karan calling sumeet nanu was sooooo cuteeeeeee😳.....but the best was the sumeet ashi convo.....loved it lotssssssssss πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘...have always been wanting to see their bonding in Remix but unfortunately they hardly showed it......but u brought it out so well in ur fic πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

keep it up n plz write the next part soon πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

i totally agree wid ashi😳😳dats wat i liked d most in ur partπŸ˜³πŸ˜›

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Posted: 19 years ago
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rocking part abha please continue soon πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
Hey Abha,

this part was totally rocking πŸ‘

Loved Ashi/Karan relationship 😳 😳

cant wait to knw who is Karan'z dad😳 πŸ˜‰

continue soon

Divz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
Hey Abha, jaldi se continue karo naa!!!


luv u hamesha hamesha hamesha,
Komal

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