unlucky in love,new part,part 28,page 67 - Page 33

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Patience😡 We r loosing dear if you dont cont soon I will kill you trust me.😈

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

patience,patience 😉 sabar ka phal meetha hota hai,u see 😉

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Psycho, maine abhi parts 16-19 padhe. Hey bhaggu!!! Awsome babes!!!! And Harsh, haila! Kya chaloo bachha hai re. 😆 Jaldi continue karo. I want to know what Harsh's next plan is. 😆

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Congo Saya Di,

ur fanfic has reached 50 pages 👏
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are cont jaldi naa saya eager 2 no wat happens next 😊 😊
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Yaar ab tu finally bata tu cont karogi ya nahi 😡 😡 😡
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saya dear congrats on or fic making half century 😛 nd yesh cont soon
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Congrats on 50 pages Saya!!!!

please continue soon
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thank u so much gies,actually it is coz of u all dat my fic reached 50 pgs,thanx a ton.
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Have a Very Happy Diwali Saya 😊. Plzzzzzzzzz aaj to cont kar de 😊
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part-20

mom,mom,moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooomm,uthiye na,plzzzzzzz-harsh was screaming nd was continiously shaking ashi

ashi was in a very deep sleep,after so much efforts of harsh,she opened her one eye😆-kya hua harsh??subah subah kyun jaga rahen ho mujhe??😡😆

subah??????????😆hey bhaggoo😕😆mom,hv u lost it??9 baj chuke hai..............-harsh said-kya hoga aapka??hey bhaggoo,meri mom ko thodi akal de dena,bhaggoo,plzzzz😆😆

shut up harsh-ashi was abt 2 yawn,but sumhow she managed 2 stop it-tum mujhe bula kyun rahen the??

harsh replied wid a smile-jara dekhiye to mom kaun aaya hai😛😃

ashi saw d person nd said-tum????????????????😕wat r u doing here?

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ranveer,tia kitchen main busy hain,jara dekhna door pe kaun hai-tia was shouting

haan tia,hum dekhte hai,aap fikar maat kijiye😊

ranveer put d newspaper on d table nd headed 2wards d door

he opened it nd was shocked

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par neal??tum yahan pe kya kar rahen ho??ah,i mean tumne to kahan tha ki tumhe kuch kaam hai-ashi was still locked in neals powerful arms

oh,actually ashi,mujhe jyada kuch kaam nahin tha mumbai main,nd i was missing both of u,specially harsh ko.so i came here😃-neal said after they broke apart

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bana??aap kya janna chahte hai hume kuch samajh main nahin aarahan hai-ranveer was confused

dekho dude,main bas iitna janna chahti hoon ki ashi kahan hai??-yuvi was desparate

matlab?obviously neal aur harsh ke sath aapne ghar main,yeh kaisa sawal hai bana.............😆😉

dekho bro,mujhe pata hai tum sab jante ho,aur ashi harsh ko llekar kahin gayee hai,nd neal bhi nahin hai,main peechle 3 din se use try kar rahan hoon phone par,par mil hi nahin rahan hai,i also asked sonia aunty nd sumeet uncle,but they r not ready 2 say nething,so,main yahan aa gaya,nd i am sure u will help me......😉

dekhiye bana-ranveer was quite serious now-hume pata hai aap kya kehna chahte hai....par ashi chahti hai ki hum kisiko uski pata na bataye.aur.........

ranveer,1 sec.plz-it was tia

she came nd placed her hand on yuvis shoulder-yuvi,par hum tumhe bata sakte hai,kyunki yuvi,sirf tum ashi ko khush rakh sakte ho,sirf tum. aur tia aur ranveer ke liye ashi ke khushi se barkar kuch bhi nahin hai...........😳

then 2 ranveer-yeh tumhe ho kya gaya hai...........camel,tumhara dimag kahin kho gaya hai kya??😆tum yuvi ko batana nahin chahte ho...............

woh humne socha neal.........😕

ranveer,plzzzzzzz,now wat wid neal??😡

then she said 2 yuvi-yuvi,aaj main tumhe ashi ki life ki sari sacchaiyan bata dungi........

matlab??-asked a very confused yuvi😕

well-tia paused 4 a moment-well yuvi,ashi aur neal sirf acche dost hai,nothing else............

wat??😕

yes yuvi,meri baat dhyan se suno tum,haan yeh sach hai ki neal ashi ko chahta hai,use bahut pyar karta hai,but ashi ke taraf se aisa kuch nahin hai...........she is just a very good friend wid him........😊

par..par..........harsh?????????????????????

well yuvi,harsh ashi aur neal ki son nahin hai

wattttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt??????????????????????? ??????

yuvi almost screamed😕

yes yuvi.....aaj se 5 saal pehle ashi aur neal ek baar nainital gaye tha kuch kaam se.nd uhan pe do family,jo picnic karne gaye the,unka bahut bara accident hogaya nd koi bhi nahin bacha except ek chotasa baccha,jo unmain se hi kisi ek woman ka hoga.........nd d baby was crying really badly.....ashi aur neal bhi uahn the wid police inspector mr.joshi.aur ashi ne bas aisehi us bacche ko aapni goad main utha liya,nd phir he stopped crying........aur ashi ko wo baccha bahut accha laga,even neal ko bhi.ashi wished 2 adopt d kid,nd neal to kabhi bhi ashi ki kisi bhi baat par na nahin bolta,aur isbaar to uske bhi haan pehle se hi tha........dats it....they adopted d child nd named him harsh.......par harsh isbare main kuch bhi nahin janta..coz tab wo bahut hi chota tha,kuch 6 or 7 month ki............well,yuvi.dats it,maine tumhe kuch sab bata diya...........

no tia,aapne sab kuch nahin bataya-ranveer was listening 2 tia till now,but he spoke up after tia finished-agar yuvi ko iitna kuch pata hi chal gaya,to aaj hum inhe wo 7 saal pehle ki ghatna ke baare main bhi baata denge,jiske liye ashi aapne apko abhi bhi jimmedar samajhti hai,aur agar yuvi usse gussa karke na chale jate,to aaj yuvi aur ashi - dono sath main hote................😳

~~FLASHBACK~~

COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well gies,i will write d flashback in d next part nd will reveal y ashi still feels gulity..till then comments..........nd waise bhi my fic came 2 an end,soon,i will finish it...............

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