unlucky in love,new part,part 28,page 67 - Page 31

Originally posted by: gsoni

Both parts were awesome Saya!!!
Wasn't Harsh ever taught not to read other people's messages??? (at this part the first thing that came into my mind was the movie Dil Mange More when Shahid was about to read the mail and diary 😆 ) --lol😆😆u r rite gopi😳😉par agar harsh yeh nahin parta then.........uhhhhhhi am not gonna tell u,will be revealed in next parts.
can't wait to find out what happens next
please continue soon


Much Luv <3
Gopi

Originally posted by: sweetyvidya

Plzzzzzzzzz yaar aisa joke mat kiya kar-but maine joke kiya par 2 parts bhi post kiya na,nd woh bhi 2gether 2 day😉😆so,hope i am 4given!! [/QUOTE]

Edited by sayanti_ashiuv - 19 years ago

Originally posted by: esha17_love

plz continue

thanx esha,yeah,i will😳😛

Originally posted by: rockingrebel

Hey sorry Saya I couldnt reply soon but the parts were awesome mindblowing!
👏 -thancheew abha nd no need 2 say sorry sweety😳😛
I think Tania is good 😛 -yesh,she is,actually u know wat,she loved yuvi soo much dat she took those steps😉😳but she is not negetive 2 dat extent like d kekta actors do😆total vamps😡🤢uuurghhhh🤢😡she is a positive charector,i just brought sum shades of gray in her charector,dats it,but dat 2 was 4 a very short period of time😃😛lol!!enough of my lectures,hope u hv not slept😆

And continue soon What did cute Harsh baba see 😕 ???????????????????????????????????????????-harsh baba??😆😕

Originally posted by: picadally

hey read all da parts cont soon u no wat u shud do u shud post 1 part everyday.

everyday a new part??neways,t***x 4 d comment!!!!!!!!!😳😛

Originally posted by: iloveashi

NICE PART SAYA 👏 PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE SOON I WANT TO KNOW WHAT MADE HARSH SHOCKED 😉

thanx shilpa

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

part-19

tania,tum kahin nahin ja rahin ho-yuvi was 2 serious,tania has never seen him so serious......she was really scared now........

she said-par yuvi.........

taniaaaaaa,plz no more urguments......nd i am sorry 4 hurting u like this....par.........

shhhhhhhhh yuvi,kuch maat bolo,i know y.u love ashi. i know yuvi,mujhe pata hai wat is true love......

tania paused 4 a moment while saying this.......

but she managed 2 complete her sentence finally-ashi is perfect 4 u yuvi,usse jyada tumhe khush aur koi nahin rak sakegi tumhe......😳nd if u r thinking ki main bahut hurt hue ho u r wrong yuvi,yeh sab to chalta rehta hai na.........its okay

nd tania was trying hard 2 hide her tears......yuvi noticed this

tania said-aur hum dono..yuvi,humdono frnds to rehenge na........

tears were now running down 4m tanias eyes😭yuvi wiped them nd hugged her tight........she cudnot control her tears now.nd was crying uncontrollably in yuvis arm..........

i am sorry tania,i am really sorry-yuvi said

yuvi,plz dun be.its okay........

actually v were in d same skool,maurya high,wen v first met v hated each other like nething.....but mujhe pata hi nahin chala wen i fall in love wid her.......wen i dated her was d best time of my life.......par v broke up.life has never been d same until u met me,but..but........ meeting ashi again after 7 years.......i hv realised dat i still love her.meri feelings uski liye kabhi bhi change nahin hua tha.........

okay,okay,i got it..now goooooooo nd tell her.pata nahin kabhi phir hum dono ki mulakat hogi ya nahin,but u will be in a very special place of my heart always............😳

saying this tania pushed yuvi......she was smiling,but the smile was not cuming 4m her heart,there was sorrow in her smile......

meera came 2 tania nd kissed her 4head-khush rahon beta.jab bhi ji chahega yahan chale aana,maine humesha tumhe aapni beti mana hai aur aage bhi manti hi rahoongi......😊

meeras eyes were moist.........

so was tanias nd yuvis........

nd saying both meera nd yuvi goodbye tania left.......

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harsh,tumne kisiko tang to nahin kiya na??-ashi asked him after she returned

nahin mom,main bilkul acche bacche hokar tha,aap chaho to kaks se pooch lo-harsh made an innocent kinda face😉

okay,okay,good boy.....-ashi stroked his hair 😳nd ordered d servant-khana laga do......

harsh said ashi-mom😛

haan harsh,bolo😃

woh main na aapka cell switch on kiya tha game khelne ke liye...

accha...wat??😕

woh aapko kuch msgs aaye the.......

kiska??-ashi was eager😳

ranveer uncle aur dad ka-harsh replied

aur kisika nahin??-ashi was sad😭

no mom,aap chaho to inbox check kar sakte ho aur dad ne kahan hai aapko phone kar ne ke liye........

okay,kool...😕

memsab,khana laga diya hai-d servant informed ashi

haan,okay,hum aa rahen hai,harsh....chalo.

ah,mom mujhe thoda loo jana hai,aap jaiye,main abhi aata hoon-harsh replied wid a naughty smile

okay

nd ashi left........

but harsh ran 2 ashis room nd called sumone 4m ashis cell-hallo......haan,main bol rahan hoon...........plan A successful.......now wat abt plan B??okay,kool👏👏great plan,i must say.........😆😉okay,haan,aab rakhta hoon,warna mom yahan pe aajayenge nd i am dead then......😆

nd harsh kept d cell in d place it was nd ran 2wards d dining room

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