Untouched (a fanfic) Last Part -- Pg 55

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honey_13

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Posted: 19 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: RTAY
HEY JUST TOO GOOD 👏 I REALLY LOVE 🤗 ❤️ IT RANVEER ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ THE NEXT SHAHJAHAN NOT BUILDING ANOTHER TAJMAHAL BUT A BIG BIG BIG MALL 👍🏼 TAT WAS REALLY VERY SWEET 😳 HEY WE ALL FORUM FRIENDS WILL VISIT IT ,OKAY 😉 😃 😆 BUT TIS IS REALLY COOL HEY WATS THE COLOUR OF TAT SHIRT? SKY BLUE, RIGHT!!!!!

😆 . Ya ..I hv seen Ranveer more in sky blue coulour .

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honey_13

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Posted: 19 years ago

#172

Hey Sweta 😛

sorry yaar I couldn't post yesterday coz I came online only for 10 mins .Kya karoo very busy with guests and all .

Today I'll try my best to post by midnight 😉 .

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Aisurya

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Posted: 19 years ago

#173

AWMAZING ,ASOME PLZ CONTINUE SOOOONNNNNN

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kriti

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Posted: 19 years ago

#174

dis is totally rocking 👏
totally rocking Reshmi 😳 😳
👏 i am completely speechless.....

continue soon

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honey_13

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Posted: 19 years ago

#175

PART 11

After the shopping episode , Ranveer did not get enough oppurtunity to spend time with Tia since she became busy with a project . And this gave Sid a chance to be around Tia since they were jointly working on that project 😉 . Sid suddenly became very studious to impress Tia (I know hard to digest 😆 ). He accompanied Tia everywhere on the pretext of helping her with her studies and the project . But whenever Ranveer saw them together , he felt very jealous and also ignored to some extent 😭 . The thought of losing Tia to Sid started disturbing him making his life miserable 😭 . He spent many sleepless nights since scary thoughts about Tia and Sid were haunting him 😕 🤢 😭 .

One day Ranveer and Varun walked into the canteen and imagine Ranveer's reaction when he saw Tia with Sid 🤢 . Although they were only busy peeping into the books and disussing studies , Ranveer felt terrible , very very jealous 😕 😭 . He didn't want to leave them alone even for a moment 😕 .

Ranveer --- Bana Tia waha par hain . Chalo na unhe join karte hain 😊

Varun --- Ranveer tumhe Tia ko join karna hain toh karo mein Vrinda se milne jaa raha hoon

Ranveer --- Bana please ……….hamare liye 😕

Varun --- Alright …Alright….Ranveer aajkal tum meri friendship ka bohot advantage lene lage ho … 😉

Saying this Varun went to join Tia and Sid alongwith Ranveer . But Tia didn't notice them and even Ranveer was hesitating 😕 --- so Varun had to initiate the talk -------

Varun --- Tia ..shall we join you

Tia --- Oh…Varun , Ranveer tum bhi ….Oh Sure !!! Why not ??? Sorry Tia ne tum dono ko dekha nahi tha .

Varun --- It's okay …mein samajh sakta hoon ki tum apni project mein busy ho

Tia expressed her appreciation for understanding her situation with a smile 😊 and after that there was a silence since none of them spoke . Sid didn't lift his head from the books even to look at them 😉 and Tia was tensed since she had to submit the project today itself 😕 .

Ranveer --- ( not knowing what to say started off with the most clich question) Tia aapki padhayi kaisi chal rahi hain ??? 😉

Tia --- Mat poocho Ranveer ….aaj hi project ka presentation hain 😕 . Agar Sid nahi hota toh pata nahi Tia kya karti . Sid ne Tia ki bohot help ki hain aur dekho ab bhi karr raha hain ..He has been so kind to Tia …

Ranveer --- (in his mind –kind my foot 😡 , Tia aap kab samjhengi ki yeh aapki nahi balki apni hi help karr raha hain)

Sid --- (lifting his head from the books) Tia inn books ki information insufficient hain . Humein library jake kuch aur books refer karna hoga ( he spoke as if he knew everything and he is a voracious reader ) 😆 😆

Varun and Ranveer were shocked at his comment 😕 .Their mouths were wide open but Tia seemed very impressed … 😊 .

Tia --- (responding to Sid ) Fine ..toh abhi library chalte hain

Sid --- Sufi Tia … 😉 (then looking at Varun and Ranveer ) Sorry guys maine tum logo ko notice nahi kiya …Kya karoo padhai mein doob gaya tha … 😆 .

Both Tia and Sid bid bye to Ranveer and Varun and rushed off from there . After they left -----

Ranveer --- Yeh Sid ko kya ho gaya hain…?? Yeh aise kyun behave kar rahe hain 😕 ????

Varun --- Agar Aashi ki language mein kahoo toh Sid par kissi scholar ka spirit ghuss gaya hain …(he said this laughing and making fun of Sid)

But Ranveer was not in a laughing mood .He was entirely pissed off with Sid 😕 .. Varun noticed that ---

Varun --- (consoling Ranveer ) Ranveer chill --- wo dono sirf project ke wajah se saath hain , unn dono ke beech aur kuch nahi hain …Tumhe kya lagta hain Tia Sid jaise ladke ko ghas dalegi …???

Ranveer --- Bana aaj humein pehli baar Arts na lene ka regret ho raha hain 😭

Varun --- Log sahi kehte hain pyaar insaan ko change kar deta hain . Kuchh log sudhar jaate hain jaise ki Sid , tumne kabhi usse studies mein itna interest lete hue dekha hain ??? 😆 Aur kuchh log spoil ho jaate hain …jaise ki tum ….

Ranveer --- Kyon humne kya kiya ???

Varun --- ( in a teasing tone) Acchha toh tumne kuch nahi kiya … …Toh party mein , shopping mein Tia aur Sid ko separate Karna ka plans kisne banaya tha ….and BTW tumne wo plans execute bhi kiya tha……kuch yaad aaya ???? 😉

Ranveer --- (still in Devdas mood ) Rehne dijiye bana …….waise bhi hum kissi discussion ke mood mein nahi hain 😕 ……

The project on which Tia and Sid were working together turned out to be a disaster 🤢 . Tia was working on one part and Sid on the other part . Seeing Sid's involvement in the project , Tia didn't bother to check Sid's part , she was very confident about him .When Tia completed the presentation of her part everyone was sure that their project will score full marks but thanx to Sid they didn't . He presented something which was not at all related to the topic 😆 , he made a big mess and it was too late for Tia to correct . And atlast Tia realized that she made a fool of herself by trusting Sid blindly 😕 .

Tia's hardwork didn't give her the expected results because of Sid .And Sid anticipating Tia's reaction didn't dare to come before her 😆 . And Sid was right in guessing for the first time , Tia was indeed burning with rage when she came back to her room after the class . And to add to her despair , Pri came to her with a worried expression on her face .

Tia --- Kya hua Pri tum itni worried kyun lag rahi ho ??? 😕

Pri didn't say anything .

Tia --- ( seeing Pri's expression ) Pri now don't say that ki tum koi shocking news lekar aayi ho . Tia had enough for the day , abhi abhi bohot bade shock se deal karke aayi hoon .

After hearing Tia's words Pri didn't want to add to her problems so she turned to leave . But Tia didn't let her go . On Tia's insistence she handed over a newspaper to Tia and rushed off from there since she didn't want to see Tia depressed and broken .

Tia read the first page and was totally shattered 😭 . She became numb for a moment not knowing how to react , how to respond to that news . She was filled with feelings of anguish , hatred , sadness and despair .

Negative thoughts started rising in her mind . But her thoughts were put to a halt by a yelling kinda sound --------.a person whose voice seemed familiar was yelling at someone ---------" How could you do this to me Mamma . Aisa karne se pehle aapne mere barein mein nahi socha . Aapne prove kar diya ki aap kitni selfish hain 😡 ". Tia was in a state of shock so eventhough the voice sounded familiar she was not able to recognize it , she didn't even think of it since she was not in that state of mind , she just rushed to the direction from where the yelling sound came from . What she saw added to her rage and brought tears in her eyes 😭 ……………..

What did she see ???? Any guesses ………………..