Untouched (a fanfic) Last Part -- Pg 55 - Page 13

awesum part reshmi.
plz cont soon wid some ranveer-tia romantic situation.

i love ranvir in your fic 👏 waiting for your next pt

wonder what sid will do?????????????? what ever it is i am sure it will be something very funny and stupid

thanx a ton for writing this fic👏 your fic is terri fic

awsoem parrrrt yar just loved it i just wish to se how wold sid win over tia ........in the most funny manner 😆
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plzzzzzzzzzzz multiply thiese cakps wid 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 times mera cuha kharab hain 😭
but puhlease jaldi likhna

tia wearing red dress😉brings back lot of fond n memories like salsa dance

tia really looks so ravishing in red

awesome part Reshmi 👏
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Gawd!!!!!! IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOO SWEET AND QUITE HILARIOUS

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too gud Reshmi

awesome part Reshmi👏

wonder wht Sid'z upto now 😳

n how wht will Ashi Yuvi end up wid😳 😉

continue soon

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excellent part reshmi plzz cont soon

wowwwwwwwwwwwww mind blowing part reshmi. 👏 pls cont soon.

PART 8




Sid--- Tia ye lo tumhara juice 😊

Tia --- Thanx Sid . Waise tumhe aane mein itna late kyun hua ???

Sid --- Kyunki mujhe apne liye drink bhi to lena tha 😉

Tia --- Sid kya tum Tia ke saamne drink karoge ??? 😕

Sid --- Yaa ..of course …Tia mein sirf drink hi nahi smoke bhi karoonga .(saying this he took a cigarette out and lit it Rajnikant style and started smoking) 😆

Tia --- (feeling suffocated) Drinking tak toh thik tha . Par kya tum nahi jaante ho ki active smoking se zyada passive smoking harmful hota hain . Tumne Tia ke saamne smoke karke Tia ki skin ko , health ko harm karne ki koshish ki hain . Tia tumhare saath yaha ek min bhi nahi ruk sakti . BYE…..😡

Sid---- Tia…Tia…Iam sorry …wo maine aise hi….meri baat toh suno 😕



But Tia remained unmoved . She rushed out of the party and went to the garden . Ranveer had followed her all the way. Sid had also followed her but he went the wrong way . 😆



Ranveer --- Tia aap yahan kya karr rahi hain ??? 😉

Tia --- Ranveer kuch mat pucho ….Lekin Tia kyun complain karr rahi hain . Sab Tia ki hi galti hain …Tia ko Sid ke saath aana hi nahi chahiye tha .😕

Ranveer --- (smiling and then pretending to be worried) Kyun Sid ne aisa kya kiya ??? 😉

Tia --- Uss loser ne Tia ke saamne drink kiya aur smoke bhi kiya …Tia jaanti thi ki uska screw thoda dhila hain par Tia ko laga ki wo acchha ladka hain , par aaj ke baad Tia uska face bhi nahi dekhna chahti ..

Ranveer ---(pretending to be concerned) Tia …hum aapse pehle hi kehna chahte the ki Sid acchha ladka nahi hain…...par phir hume laga ki hume aapke mamle mein interfere nahi karna chahiye .Tia aapko leke Sid ke intentions thik nahi hain … 😉


Tia --- Ranveer Tia Sid ke saath sirf party mein aayi hain , usse date nahi kar rahi hain . Aur waise bhi iss whole world mein koi ladka nahi hain jo Tia Ahuja ko win kar sake 😛


Ranveer ---(in his mind ------ Lekin hum aapko jeetke rahenge ..Tia…) 😉


While saying this Ranveer saw Sid coming there searching for Tia . But before Sid could see them -------


Ranveer --- Tia humein lagta hain hume andar chalna chahiye aur party enjoy karna chahiye


Tia --- Thik hain..lekin Tia Sid ke saath dance nahi karegi 😕

Ranveer ---Lekin hamare saath to karengi naa 😉




Tia smiled and nodded her head in yes😛 . They both went inside and danced together . After sometime the music slowed down .Ranveer placed both his hands on her waist and Tia around his neck . She was so close to him that he almost breathed in her fragnance and her hair was falling on his face . He felt an urge to pull her into a hug and carress her body😳 but his thoughts were interrupted when Tia pulled back since the music started playing fast again . Tia was very lively , she danced to the tunes with lot of energy . By the end , she was sweating but still dancing. Ranveer's eyes were all set on Tia while she was dancing 😃. She danced and danced and Ranveer who never used to stay late for a party danced with her till 2.00 in the morning.

And all this time Sid kept searching for Tia everywhere except the party .😆 😆




Today Ranveer realized that he could not see Tia with someone else . He knew he did the wrong thing by instigating Sid and then lying to Tia but still he did not regret it😉 . Hadn't he done that he would not have been able to spent the wonderful time with Tia . He also realized that he could do anything which he had never done before for her .


And now he knew that what he felt for her was nothing but LOVE😳 .