Untouched (a fanfic) Last Part -- Pg 55 - Page 12

hi reshmi, thanks a lot for valuing my opinion....👏

i ve reread this pt..and i loved ...really lovedthe first para..ranvir thinking about tia was awesome

i am really trying very hard to pick and choose a particular para that i liked about this pt... i cant...coz each and every para is just as good...

the wonderful thing about your fic is you have captured the essence of remix and each and every character is well defined

thanks to you we are not missing remix we can just imagine the scenes youve written and voila !!!!!!! its there..

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i hope lamina is reading this fic..

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part reshmi 👏 plz cont asap.

reshmi plz cont soon yaar.
aur kitna wait karwaegi?

hey rimli please wait yaar...its worth it...it takes a lot of effort to come up with such a beautiful story..please let her take her own time....she will come with brilliant scenes ....

PART 7


Hearing the knock Pri opened the door .


Pri --- Hi Ranveer 😊

Ranveer --- Hi !!! Aaj aap bohot acchii lag rahi hain 😊

Pri --- Thax Ranveer . Tum bhi bohot handsome lag rahe ho 😛

" Aur Tia kaisi lag rahi hain " questioned Tia who in the meanwhile came out dazzling in a red dress . 😛

On looking at her , Ranveer was dumbstruck 😕, he couldn't take his eyes off from her . All he managed to utter from his mouth was " Bohot pretty , hamesha ki tarah "

" Agar Tia pretty nahi lagegi toh aur kaun lagega " said Sid in style , who was now in seventh heaven since Tia was his date😃 . Sid was wearing a very colourful and bright costume and was looking like a joker😆 . He kneeled in front of Tia and offered her a red rose which he had hid behind his back all this while . 😃

Sid --- (with attitude and style) A rose for the most beautiful rose in Maurya .

Tia --- ( smiling and accepting the rose ) Thanx Sid …So sweet of you ..

Sid --- Oh…oh..it's okay Tia . Mein toh aise surprises deta rehta hoon ..you know..I am so cool. Isliye toh Maurya ki sabhi ladkiyan mujhpe marti hain.

Ranveer --- Oh ..ya…???

Sid--- (stammering) Yes…Haan…I mean bilkul ….( after that lending his hand) So Tia …shall we ???

Tia readily accepted his hand and Ranveer felt very bad , let down and miserable . And seeing the red rose in Tia's hand he felt like uprooting a rose plant and pricking Sid's face with all the thorns. 😆

When all 4 of them reached the venue , the party was on . Varun and Vrinda who were dancing saw them and joined them .

Vrinda --- Hey Tia tumne aane mein itne deir kar di

Tia --- Ya babes …Tia kissi party mein time pe nahi jaati . Aakhir Tia Ahuja hona koi aisi waisi baat nahi hain . 😛

Ranveer --- (smiling) Ji bilkul 😉(and then turning to Varun) Waise Aashi aur Yuvi kaha hain ???

Varun --- Ranveer ..tum sab ke yaha aane se pehle un dono ke beech bohot bada hungama ho gaya tha . 😕


Pri ---Wowwww….ab kal college mein discusision ke liye gossip mil gaya …..Jaldi batao na kya hua ???? 😆😃




Varun --- Wo Aashi aur Yuvi apne respective dates ke saath dance kar rahe the . Aur phir Yuvi ne sabke saamne Aashi ke dancing stype pe comment pass kiya and that made Aashi upset as well as furious😡 . Aur revenge lene ke liye Aashi ne dance floor par drink gira diya and Yuvi slipped and fell down . And they both started fighting like animals holding each other's neck . Kissi tarah se hum sab ne situation sambhal liya . Par iss incident ke baad se wo don party mein dikh nahi rahe hain …pata nahi kaha chale gaye ?? 😕


Ranveer --- Kaha gaye honge 😕??? I just hope ki wo dono ek doosre ke samne na aa jaye , warna dobara problem ho jayegi . 🤢

Varun --- Come on guys , ab wo sab chhodo . Let's dance yaar . The music is rocking .

Pri --- No …no…pehle food counter chalte hain . Pata ne aaj kya-kya varieties khane ko milenge . I just hope ki waha chocolates , ice-creams aur pastries bhi ho. 😆

Tia --- Pri …..agar pastries aur chocolates honge toh bhi Tia tumhe wo sab touch bhi nahi karne degi . Kya tum bhool gayi …..we are too sweet for sweets😊 . Hum food counter dance ke baad jayenge aur we'll have only low calorie food ….samjhi..

Pri --- (sadly) Okay Tia … 😭

Then they all hit the dance floor .
Tia was dancing with Sid and Ranveer of course with Pri . But his eyes were only on Tia who was laughing all the way at Sid's jokes and she seemed to enjoy his Company 😛. Seeing Tia so close to Sid, Ranveer succumbed to his devilish feeling and came up with an idea to separate them 😉. And for that first he had to get rid of Pri .

Ranveer --- Pri ..agar aap chahe toh food counter ja sakti hain , philhal Tia aapko notice nahi karr rahi hain aur hum bhi unhe kuch nahi batayenge … 😛

Pri --- ( happily) Really Ranveer ….Oh Thank You so much …Tum bohot cute ho (saying this she leaves or rather runs off from there to her favourite place ) 😃

After Pri left , Ranveer was waiting for the right oppurtunity . After some time Tia felt thirsty , so Sid went to fetch her a drink . Seeing that Ranveer went towards Sid .

Ranveer --- Arrey Bana…aapki party kaisi chal rahi hain

Sid--- Awesome dude ….You know…Tia is so hot …dance karte waqt maine jab usse hold kiya tab mujhe electic current ke jhatke lage.😃

Ranveer --- (in his mind --- jhatka toh ab hum aapko denge 😉) Waise Tia aapke approach ko koi response de rahi hain na nahi ???

Sid --- No Bro …wo sirf mere jokes pe hass rahi hain ….usse win karna easy nahi hain 😕

Ranveer ---Waise Tia bohot nazuk lagti hain ,unhe aise boyfriend ki zaroorat hain jo manly ho , jo unhe harr problem se bacha sakke . Isliye Tia ko win karne ke liye tumhe kuch aisa karna hoga jisse Tia ko lage ki tum soft nahi tum hard ho -


Sid --- I think you are right Dude …..Waise mujhe kya karna hoga ???? 😕

Ranveer --- (pretending) Dekhiye Sid humein ladkiyo ke barein mein zyada experience toh nahi hain , yeh toh aap behtar jaante hain . 😆

Sid---- Hmmmm….(after thinking for sometime ) .Dude …ab mujhe pata hain ki kya karna hain 😛😉

Ranveer --- Kya ???😉

Sid ---Dude ..mein itna bada fool toh nahi hoon ki apna secret tumhare saat share karoo 😉


Ranveer --- Thik hain …jaise aapki marzi 😉



Ranveer didn't know what Sid will do now . But he knew that he has instigated Sid to do something foolish . And Sid being Sid canot be expected to come out with a brialliant idea ….....or will he ??? 😉


And what does Sid do to win over Tia ---- Just wait for the next part.

Part 7 posted

I will be waiting for the comments guys ... 😉

awesome part honey,plz cont asap.

yipe,me d first one 2 reply 😃 😛

hey reshmi,awesomeee part re 👏 plz post fast.