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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
wow ash..it was just fab..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 6...

wen tia-ranveer scene was on other side uv ashi scene was also on...so lets again go back ike u all know it was heavily raining.....here comes ashi-uv sequence...
uv and ashi r in d car...n obviously uv shud b driving d car but no ashiw as driving d car...she accepted 2 go wth uv onle on dat condition dat she wud drive d car.....becoz ashi remembered one incident wen dey in their ending days of coolege uv was driving d car n dey crashed down wtha tree dats y....lolz..
ranveer n tia leaves n wen ashi n uv sat in d car dat time...
uv: r us ure ashi tumhi chlogi...
ashi: ha syco....isliye toh meine tumhe kaha...
uv: lekin abhi bhi mujhe doubt hai...
ashi; doubt toh mujhe hai....ke abhi tak tumhara licence kaise tumhare saath hai...yaad hai ek time tumne tree ke saath gaaddi thok di thi...
uv: lekin woh toh poorani baat hai....ab meri driving bhot acchi hai...dekte hai tum aaj kaisa chalati ho...
ashi; ha ha dekh lena...
so ashi is drving .....
uv starts whistling thier favourite whistle tone of their 'album....he suddenly remmebers dis aftera long tims...
ashi: hey yeh toh hamre album ka hai rite nah...
uv: haa...
ashi; hey i was thnking kyun nah hum sab jab phirse mil gaye hai toh apna band phirse chalu kare......it wud gr8
uv; hey sufi idea......awesome...chalo kal milte meine ranveer ko kal phone kar deta hu......woh tia ko bhi inform kar dega...
ashi: yeahhh theek tahkur timbo inform kar lega
uv; ek baat bolu
ashi; bolo...
uv; tum abhi tak nahi badli...
ashi; meine toh aisi hi rehne wali hu...lekin tum thodese badal gaye ho...thoda aur amjdar ho gaye ho../..lol
uv: tumhara matlap kya hai
ashi: hey hey just chill ...mein sirf mazak kar rahi hoon.....

hey guys w8 abhi aage bhi uv ashi ko aur hai.....nxt part will b coming sun u all think kya uv ke ashi koi bhi ke dil mein abhi tak love feeling hai ke nahi...agar ha toh koi bhi uska ikrara karega ke nahi...see next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
part 6...

wen tia-ranveer scene was on other side uv ashi scene was also on...so lets again go back ike u all know it was heavily raining.....here comes ashi-uv sequence...
uv and ashi r in d car...n obviously uv shud b driving d car but no ashiw as driving d car...she accepted 2 go wth uv onle on dat condition dat she wud drive d car.....becoz ashi remembered one incident wen dey in their ending days of coolege uv was driving d car n dey crashed down wtha tree dats y....lolz..
ranveer n tia leaves n wen ashi n uv sat in d car dat time...
uv: r us ure ashi tumhi chlogi...
ashi: ha syco....isliye toh meine tumhe kaha...
uv: lekin abhi bhi mujhe doubt hai...
ashi; doubt toh mujhe hai....ke abhi tak tumhara licence kaise tumhare saath hai...yaad hai ek time tumne tree ke saath gaaddi thok di thi...
uv: lekin woh toh poorani baat hai....ab meri driving bhot acchi hai...dekte hai tum aaj kaisa chalati ho...
ashi; ha ha dekh lena...
so ashi is drving .....
uv starts whistling thier favourite whistle tone of their 'album....he suddenly remmebers dis aftera long tims...
ashi: hey yeh toh hamre album ka hai rite nah...
uv: haa...
ashi; hey i was thnking kyun nah hum sab jab phirse mil gaye hai toh apna band phirse chalu kare......it wud gr8
uv; hey sufi idea......awesome...chalo kal milte meine ranveer ko kal phone kar deta hu......woh tia ko bhi inform kar dega...
ashi: yeahhh theek tahkur timbo inform kar lega
uv; ek baat bolu
ashi; bolo...
uv; tum abhi tak nahi badli...
ashi; meine toh aisi hi rehne wali hu...lekin tum thodese badal gaye ho...thoda aur amjdar ho gaye ho../..lol
uv: tumhara matlap kya hai
ashi: hey hey just chill ...mein sirf mazak kar rahi hoon.....

hey guys w8 abhi aage bhi uv ashi ko aur hai.....nxt part will b coming sun u all think kya uv ke ashi koi bhi ke dil mein abhi tak love feeling hai ke nahi...agar ha toh koi bhi uska ikrara karega ke nahi...see next part
lvu ash
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
ash,waiting eagerly 4 d next part.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
👏 hey awesom plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do cpont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
awesum part ash.it's toooooooooooooooooooooooo gud.pls cont fast asap. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
tahxn a lot for liking it

luv ash
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
yeahh iw ill sure continue sun
luv ash
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
wow ash..it was awesum..mind blowing..beautiful...see i have no words to express..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.with tia n ranny's romance..plzzzzz.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
part 7

part 7...(sry guys i got late)
in last part i asked u all questions but no1 replied neways ...question was ke kya abhi bhi ashi aur uv ke dil love feelings hai ke nahi..aur hai toh kya woh dono iska ikarar karege ke nahi

here comes d nxt part...

as u all know it was raining....now rain stops....uv asks ashi..
uv: can now atleast drive d car...
ashi; lekin mujhe abhi bi doubt ho raha hai...
uv; dont wry kuch nahi hoga....
ashi; theek hai ...lekin agar kuch hua den bhaggu bhi tumhe mujhse nahi bacha payega
uv; okie okie...
dey swap their seats..
uv wasdrving d ar very swiftly.....
uv said in his mind...
uv: ooo ashi pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya .....jabse tumhe mila hu tabse kuch different feel kar raha hua....pata nahi kya abhi bhi mein tumse pyar karta hu...
on other side ashi said in her mind
ashi: bhaggu uyeh kya ho raha hai...uv se jabse phir mili hu tabse mujhe kuch aur mahesoos ho raha hai.....hey bhaagggu kya hai yeh..pyar??
den uv asks ashi
uv; kya tumne kuch kaha
ashi: nahi...kya tumne kuch kaha
uv: nahi...

scene change...

remember guys tia n ranveer were hugging each other...
v go back here...
dye den goes back 2 d car
tia: ranveer kya tum mera hamesha saaath nibhoge
ranveer; ha tia.....ab hum dono ko koi juda nahi kar sakhta...
tia: lekin ujhe abhi bhi dar lagta hai ke koi tumhe mujhse chin legajaise us shy ne pehle kiya tha...
ranveer; tia tum kyun dar rahi ho...woh sab past hai....hume aaj ka sochna \chahiye...mein hu na tumhare saath
finally tia''s house comes tia gets out of d car n even ranveer...dey huggg each otehr n tian leaves
tia luks back n wave ranveer
ranveer also waves her back n den leaves...

scene change...

now again 2 uv and ashi...

uv: ashi tumne achanak yeh newspaper ka kaise business chalu kya...aur writer bhi kaise bani...i wonder
ashi; hota hai uv aise changes sab mein aate hai....mere mein bhi aa gaya....
koi bhi helop chahiye s mamle mein den just call me
ashi's hosue comes
ashi gets out of d car
waves uv n uv aslo waves her back n he leaves

now wat will happen nxt day....kya uv aur ashi ikarrar karenge aopne pyar ka....kya tia aur ranveer iv aur ashi ko saath lkyenge ...kya ranver aur tia aise jhi hamesha saath rahenge ge lets see ....

luv ash

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