new remix fanfic ....page 14part 11 - Page 8

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hey awesom plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont asap 😳 😳 😳

awesome part ----I the loved Tia-Ranny scene
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

tahxn a lto guys

lvua sh

awesome part ash,loved d way u hv expressed ashi nd yuvis pyaar aur takraar bhare ristaah 😳 hats off 2 u 👏
plz cont asap. 😳

tahxn a lto sayanti

lvua sh

wow ash..it was awesum..i can just imagine everything..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon..

yeahh kutie iwill sure socntinue

luv ash

hey part 8...

now part 8...

recap....uv drops ashi at home n even ranveer drops tia at home

now ...

it is 22nd may...
ashi n uv ahd decided 2 get 2 gether for again starting their remix band....its morning

ranveer wakes up....he first calls tia...she picks up her phone...she is till sleepy at present also so she ...
tia: she yawns n says hello....kaun hai....
ranver; kya hume itna jaldi bhool gaye...
tia: ooo ranveer ...sry tia actually abhi bhi bhot sleepy feel kar rahi hai./..
ranveer: its okie tia....yoh aapka kya programme hai aajka...
tia: kuch khas nahi aage ek aur afshion show aanewala hai bas abhi uski taiyaari chalu karneki hai..
ranveer: oooo theek hai toh kuch nahi rahene dijiye..
tia; kya hua humne socha ke aaj sham ko hum dono kahi bahar jaaege..
tia; i m so sry ranveer ...theek hai ek kaam karte hai....aise bhi filhaal tumhari company bhi abhi chalu hui hai na...
ranveer; ha toh..
tia; toh tumna kaam karna aur mein apna ....agar mera jaldi khatam ho jayega den tia will call u or else saturday ko pakka jayege ..
ranveer; aare haan thank god aapki wajese hume yaad aaya ke hamari toh ek meeting hai aur wo hum bhool gaya...theeekk hai agar hamari meeting jaldi kahtam ho gayi to hum aapko call karte hai...
tia; theekk hai bye ranveer n tia loves u a lot..ranver; bye i love u 2...

scene change...

ashi calls uv...
it was 9: 30 n uv was still sleeping due 2 last nite...
till 1min phone rings but uv didnt pick up d phone...
den finally he does...
uv; heello kaun hai itni subah ...
ashi; hey syco mein ashi ..9:30 ho gaye aur tum abhi tak so rahe ho.....very bad...
uv; wo kya karu jab bhi der se sota hu tab der se hi uthta hu...koi uthane wala bhi nahi ahi re(uv used 2 stay indiff house due 2 his tensions wth hsi dad...but stilld er was a realtion b/w him n his dad)
ashi; theek hai theek hai ...i ms ure tumne ranveer ko bhi phone nahi kiya hoga..isliye abhi karna bhi amt mein abhi karne hi wali hu....meine sirf tumhe time n jagah kehene ke liye phone kiya hai...
uv; toh bolo...
ashi; pehle toh mujhe yeh poochna hai ke agar hum tumhare ghar rakhe toh chalega ,....
uv; kyun nahi .....aise bhi mein akela hi hoon...
ashi: theek hai toh final aaj sham ko 7 baje tumhare waha aur hum logo bahar se hi kuch dinner ke liye manga lenge...
uv; theek ashi bye...
ashi: bye aur sona mat uth jana tumhe office bhi jana hai(she is tellina s if she is his wife )...
uv: ha ha nahi soooga...
bth disconnects d phone....n uv again sleeps back...

2 b continue..

so abi tak kisine nahi ashi ya uv ne ek duje pyar ka ikrar kiya...lets see aage kya hoga n guys if it is bad den also tell me so dat i can improve in my next part
hope u all njoy dis part...
luv ash

i just read ur last 2 parts together.it's toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gud. 👏 eagerly wating 4 ur next part.
plz cont fast asap.

tahxn a lto rimli yeahh sure will post next aprt sun

lvu ash