Dil kya karein???Part 20(last part)Pg 26 - Page 17

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Posted: 19 years ago
reshmi i read d last 2 parts 2gether.nd both were rocking 👏
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do cont fast.

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Posted: 19 years ago

EXCELENT . I HAVE NO WORDS TO SAY ANY ANY THING I CAN ONLY DO DIS 👏

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karol thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
it was really very nice. puhlease send the next part soon. 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee reshmi 👏
pls cont asap. 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesum part reshmi. 👏 really a gr8888888888888888888888888888888888 part. 👏 yuvi ashi patch uop scene was choooooooooooooooo chweet. 😳 😉
plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago

PART 16




On the night before their marriage Tia called Ranveer



Ranveer --- ( who was in a sound sleep ) Oh –ho ab itni raat ko kisne phone kiya..??(then picking up the phone) Hello !!! 😕 😕


Tia --- Hi !!!! Ranveer ….


Ranveer --- (on hearing her voice he gets excited and comes out of the sleep) Tia ....aap.....itni raat ko.... 😛 😛 (then mischeaviously) Kya baat hain Tia.....aap humein miss kar rahi hain na ??? 😉

Tia --- Haa Ranveer .... aur Tia ko neend bhi nahi aa rahi hain ....Tia kal ke barein mein soch rahi thi....


Ranveer --- Isme sochne ki kya baat hain ...... Kal ke baad aap Tia Sisodia ban jayengi aur phir koi bhi humein alag nahi kar payega . 😛 😛

Tia --- Woh sab thik hain Ranveer .....Par kal ke baad Tia ki life puri tarah se change ho jayegi . Kal ke baad Tia ek wife hogi , bahu hogi , bhabhi hogi aur Tia ke around saara atmosphere bhi change ho jayega . Kya Tia in sabhi relations aur responsibilities ke saath justice kar payegi . Ranveer.....Tia ko darr lag raha hain. 😊

Ranveer --- (softly consoling her ) Tia aapko darne ki koi zaroorat nahin . Hamari Tia bohot achhi hain , samajhdar hain aur aap har responsibility ko handle kar sakti hain , jaise aap humein handle karti hain .Aur Tia hum hain na aapka saath dene ke liye , hamesha . 😉

Tia --- Oh ...Ranveer ....Tumse baat karne ke baad Tia ab better feel kar rahi hain .... 😛 😛

Ranveer --- Tia aap bilkul chinta mat kijiye aur so jaye varna aapko dark circles ho jayenge. (saying this he laughs and this brings a smile on Tia 's face ). Aur waise bhi kal raat hum aapko sone nahi denewale ....
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Tia --- (blushing ) Ranveer yeh tum kya keh rahe ho ???? 😳 😳


Ranveer --- Jaise aapko kuch pata hi nahin .....Madam kal hamari suhagraat hain aur suhagraat ko koi nahi sota . 😉😉


Tia --- ( now badly blushing ) Ranveer Tia ko neend aa rahi hain ...Okay Bye .....Good night ....( and she keeps the phone ). 😳

Ranveer --- Tia ....Suniye toh ...(and realizing that she has already kept the phone)
Tia aaj toh aap bachh gayi kal hum aapko chhodne wale nahi hain ......😉 😉

Edited by honey_13 - 19 years ago
honey_13 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 16 posted
Sorry guys for the small part --- no time yaar
I'll try to write a long part next time.
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow reshmi..awsum..and thanx a lot for cont..luved this part..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee reshmi jaan the fic is realy taking a nw direction
i just loved it
and soory for repliying late and im replying on for the lst 3 parts
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey reshmi plzzzzzzzzz cont kar na yar plzzzzzzzz if possible now kyun ki pata nahin ajj ke baad when would i be onlline so plzzzzzzzzzzzz 😳

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