Dil kya karein???Part 20(last part)Pg 26 - Page 16

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Achha come on yaar. You said thanx for the comments naa, so now continue. PLZZZZZZZZ!!!!! I'm dying to know what's going to happen next. Come on babes. Jaldi jaldi! 😉


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Posted: 19 years ago

PART 15



Ranveer --- ( astonished) Yeh sab kya ho raha hain .......??? 😕 😕


Both Tia and Yuvi pull back and on seeing the shocked expression on Ranveer's face Yuvi decides to have some fun.

Yuvi --- ( putting his arm around Tia ) Can't you see bro .....mein tumhari hone wali wife ke saath romance kar raha hoon. 😆 😆

Tia is shocked on hearing this and she looks at Yuvi with a question mark on her face . Yuvi winks at her without letting Ranveer see that and Tia smiles realizing that he is just pulling Ranveer's leg.
😛 😛

Ranveer --- ( going near them and removing Yuvi's hand from Tia's shoulder ) Bana , aap hamari mangetar ke saath flirt karna band kijiye .(in a jealous tone)

Yuvi --- Flirt ...no no Ranveer ......let me correct you…jab ek insaan kissi doosre insaan ko chedta hain toh usse flirting kehte hain . Lekin yahan toh sab kuch mutually ho raha tha toh usse tum flirting kaise keh sakte ho …..isse toh romancing kehte hain…(then looking at Tia ) kyon sweetheart....??? 😆 😆

Tia just smiles at this – actually enjoying the jealous reaction on Ranveer's face.

Ranveer --- Bana ab bas bhi kijiye humein tang karna


Yuvi --- You know bro ....you are right .....(then looking at Tia ) Tia humein Ranveer ko disturb nahi karna chahiye ....yahan se chalna chahiye .....chale Tia ( he says this lending his hand to Tia which she readily accepts) 😆 😆

They both walk downstairs leaving Ranveer alone with his thoughts . 😕 😕
After they leave , a smile crept over Ranveer 's face realizing how stupid he was to think this way about Tia and Yuvi even for a moment , he understood that they are just kidding with him . After that he followed them and went and sat beside Tia . 😛 😛

Ranveer --- (whispering ) Tia .....aapke aur Yuvi ke beech aisi kya important baat ho rahi thi ???
Tia --- ( still in the fun mood) Ranveer ....Yuvi ne tumhe bataya toh tha naa??? 😛 😛

Ranveer --- Tia mazak mat kijiye .....hum jaante hain ki aap dono hamari taang kheech rahe the .....aur waise bhi hamare shak ke wajah se hum aapko ek baar kho chuke hain …ab dobara hum aise galti nahi karenge ….humein aap par pura bharosa hain .....

Tia --- (getting emotional) Oh Ranveer .....you are soo sweet 😛 😛

Ranveer --- (cupping her cheeks) Sweet kaise nahi honge , jab itni sweet ladki hamare saath hain ......(then realizing he is shifting from the topic) Tia ab aap topic change mat kijiye aur hume bataye ki kya baat hui aapki Yuvi ke saath. ???

Tia --- It's a suspense ..Tumhe kuch hi time mein pata chal jayega
Ranveer --- (a bit annoyed) Tia ..thik hain....aaj hum wait kar lenge .....par shaadi ke baad yeh sab nahi chalega . Aapko apni saari baat humse share karni hogi . Baatein chupane se hi rishte bigadte hain…
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Tia --- (again in the fun mood) Ranveer ....Tia sochegi
Ranveer --- (annoyed) Tia ....!!!! 😕 😕
Tia --- (looking straight into his eyes and with feelings ) Ranveer Tia tumse kabhi kuch nahi chupayegi ....fine..
Ranveer --- (softly) Promise
Tia --- (cutely and looking into his eyes) Tia promise

Ranveer --- Tia agar aap humein is tarah dekhenge toh hum bhool jayenge ki hum itne saare logon ke beech hain . Aur agar humse koi galti ho gayi toh humein blame mat karna. 😳 😳
Tia ---(blushing pink) Ranveer …!!!! 😳 😳

Now she is looking even more beautiful with pink cheeks that Ranveer just couldn't stop looking at her . And they both get lost looking at each other

Meher --- (seeing them ) Ahem....Ahem.....

And they both get out of their gaze

Aashi ---(teasing them) Hey Bhaggu …kuch log yeh bhool jaate hain ki is planet mein unke siva doosre creatures bhi hain..

Tia and Ranveer were blushing like anything since their parents were also around.

Then the ceremony starts and they all have a blast dancing and singing . Everyone is introduced one by one in the song and they come and dance including Tia and Ranveer's parents . Finally even Ranveer and Tia dance with everyone clapping and whistling for them . Then Yuvi comes to make an announcement

Yuvi --- People …People ..attention ..please ((then he pauses and looks at Tia . Tia lifts her thumbs up wishing him luck which Ranveer sees and he realizes that the suspense would be unfolded soon))
Guys ....aaj ka din hum sab ke liye bohot special hain …hum sab ne bohot enjoy kiya …aur is speacial day pe mein aap sab se kuch kehna chahta hoon .( After pausing a bit) .
Guys Yuvraj Dev ek aisa ladka tha jo pyaar mein believe nahi karta tha . Woh ladkiyon ko chicks kehta tha , unke saath time – paas karta tha aur usne kabhi kissi serious relationship ke barein mein socha bhi nahi tha . Phir ek ladki uske zindagi mein aayi aur usne ladkiyon ke barein mein uska conception hi badal diya---- woh ladki sabse alag thi ....no....alag thi nahi ....hain , jo mujhse ladti bhi hain toh usme bhi uska pyaar jhalakta hain . Log usse paagal bhi kehte hain ......(pausing again) , haan woh pagal hi to jo who bina kissi relation ke kissi ki bhi help karne ko ready rehti hain . Aur mein us paagal se bohot bohot pyaar karta hoon . Aur aap sab jaante hain ki woh kaun hain ....then coming near Aashi and kneeling down)
Aashi please be my wife
(then similing ) Please marry me ..... wacko



Aashi got very emotional on hearing this which is very unlike Aashi . She just couldn't say anything . She goes close to him and hugs him tightly 😳 😳

Aashi --- (pulling back and wiping her tears) Phycho tum pehle is tarah se mujhe propose nahi kar sakte the ?????. Mein kab ka haan kar deti .... 😆 😆

Yuvi --- (smiling at her attitude ) Wacko mujhe tumhari yehi baat bohot acchi lagta hain 😛 😛

Saying this he hugs her again . Everyone except Tia –Ranveer gathers around them to congratulate them .

Ranveer --- Aapka surprise humein bohot acchha laga
Tia --- Ranveer …aaj Tia bohot khush hain 😛 😛
Ranveer --- ( going close to her ) Tia ab sabka dyan humpar se hatke Yuvi –Aashi ki taraf hain 😳 😳
Tia --- (realizing what he is upto) Ranveer back –off , iss room mein hamare alava doosre log bhi hain

Ranveer moves even more closer . Tia's heart started beating faster . Then he kissed her on the lips gently .
😳 😳

Tia --- (pulling back from the kiss and a bit annoyed ) Ranveer ..What is this ....???? Tumhe iss baat ka bhi khayal nahi hain ki is room mein hamare parents bhi hain.
😕 😕
Ranveer --- ( annoyed) Tia humein lagta hain ki hum aapse jitna pyaar karte hain utna aap humse nahi karti 😕 😕

Tia --- (hurt and looking at him with tears that are about to flow) Ranveer aaj tumne keh diya .....phir dobara mat kehna ki Tia tumse love nahi karti . Tia tumhe apne life se jyaada love karti hain . 😭
Ranveer --- (holding her face in his hands) Toh Tia aap humein apne kareeb kyon nahi aane deti
Tia --- (innocently ) Woh isliye kyunki Tia ek ladki hain aur Tia shy feel karti hain .....

Ranveer looks at her adoringly and gives a quick peck on her lips once again and this time Tia doesn't retort . 😳 .But realizing Tia's embarrazing position he doesn't go further .
Ranveer --- (interwining Tia's hands in his) Tia humein maaf kar dijiye 😊 😊
Tia --- Ranveer Tia tumpe angry nahi hain , Tia tumpe angry ho hi nahi sakti ..... 😛 😛
Ranveer --- Tia humein bhi chalkar Aashi aur Yuvi ko congratulate karna chahiye

And they both join the crowd around Aashi –Yuvi to give them their Best Wishes.

Edited by honey_13 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 15 posted
Sorry for posting late , but I hv tried to make up by posting a pretty long part .
I hope you like this part.
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow reshmi..it was awesum..the romance was too gd..
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏😊wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!very nice part esp the conversation between tia and ranvir..........
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Posted: 19 years ago

👏👏i am completely speechless again...its gr88 awwesom fantastic toatlly th best i mean how can someone write so nicely yaar plkzzzzzzzzz koi mujhe bhi likhna sikha do mujhe to likhna hi nahi ataa
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Posted: 19 years ago
mind-blowing part.....pls cont soon
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