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Thank you very much for the comments. It really inspired me . I couldn't post yesterday because of my lan problem . Iam posting 2 parts today to make up for yesterday.

PART -2

Next morning at the airport.

Suraj –Well Tia tum ab bhi chaho toh apna decision change kar sakti ho

Tia—Suraj shut up

Suraj –Okay Tia.

Then the flight was announced . Tia and Sumeet said bye to Suraj and went to

board the plane.

In the plane Tia was thinking about her angels.

Tia ---( in her mind) Aaj Tia apne angels se 6 years ke baad mil rahi hain . Itne years mein kafi badal gaye honge dono. Tia hamesha unke contact mein rahee hain mails and phone ke through . But milna kabhi nahi hua. . Woh dono apne work commitments ki wajah se Tia ki engagement mein bhi turn up na kar sake. Tia hopes ki jab Tia unse milein tab unke paas Tia ke liye time ho.

Sumeet –- (noticing that she was lost) Princess ….kya soch rahi ho

Tia --- Yehi ki kya sab kuch pehle jaisa hoga . Kya Tia apne angels ke saath woh sab kar payengi jo Tia pehle college days mein kiya karti thi.

Sumeet --- Of course … Tia …..Tum chahogi toh Pri aur Meher tumhe mana nahi kar Paayenge chahe woh kitne busy kyon na ho

Tia --- (hugging him) Ohh……. Papa …Tia loves you

Sumeet --- (smiling) I love you too my princess.

After landing they got into the car and drove home. As soon as they reached home Tia went straight to the bathroom to freshen up , after that got ready and left to Pri's house.

After reaching Pri's house Tia rang the doorbell. Pri opened the door and found no one there. So she went inside. The bell rang again . She opened the door again to find no one. Now she got frustrated and was about to bang the door------ then she saw Tia standing in front of her with a big smile on her face.

Pri --- Tia …Tia …tum …..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tia --- Kya sirf Tia ..Tia …karti rahogi ya aage bhi kuch bologi.

Pri --- Oh my God !!!!!! Tia it's you …..It's really you …Oh my god …….I can't believe it.( And then she hugged Tia not able to contain her happiness).

Tia ---(coming inside) Pri..Pri…calm down …….

Pri --- (both sitting down on a sofa) Oh.. Tia I am soo happy to see you after so many years.

Tia --- Even Tia is . Pata hai angel Tia ko dar lagta tha ki kahi tum change to nahi hui.. Par Tia is so happy that tum bilkul nahi badli. Sirf ek baat ke na badalne ka regret hai….

Pri --- Kya????????

Tia ---(loudly) Pri tum aur bhi moti ho gayi ho

Pri --- ( laughing) Par ab mujhe iska koi regret nahi hain ..

Tia --- (with surprise) Pri … angel .. yeh tum kya keh rahi ho …tum thik to ho na.(putting her hands on her forehead to check whether she was fine)

Pri --- Ha.. mein bilkul thik hoon ..aur happy bhi…Mein apni zindagi usse tarah se jee rahi hoon jaise mein jeena chahti thi. . Maine patli hone ke liye kya kuch nahi kiya—dieting , exercise etc etc. Par kya hua…kuch nahi…Yeh sab mein ek cute boyfriend ke liye karti thi. Aur aaj mera life partner mere saath hain. Usne mujhe waise hi accept kiya jaise main hoon and maine bhi usse uski saaari goodness aur badness ke saath accept kiya hain. Uske liye mein is whole world ki sabse beautiful ladki hoon and mere liye woh mera sab kuch hain.

Tia --- Wow Pri Iam so happy for you ….. aur tumne itni badi baat mujhe nahi batayi …

Pri --- Mein tumhe surprise dena chahti thi…Aur waise bhi kal hi usne mujhe officially propose kiya tha.

Tia ---( with anxiety) By the way…………….kaun hai woh

Pri --- Who ek restaurant owner hain. Mein uske restaurant mein roz khana khane jaati thi

Tia --- ( Laughing aloud) Aur is tarah se tum dono ko ek doosre se pyaar ho gaye.

Pri --- Ya right!!!!!!( laughing)

Pata hain Tia woh zyada handsome nahi hain …aur mujhse jyada mota hain ….Par woh world ka sabse acchha insaan hain aur bahut cute hai. Mein hamesha uska gaal khechti rehti hoon . Mein kya………….sab yehi karte hain kyonki who bahut chubby hain. Aur hum dono ke common interests bhi hai ……….Jaise…………….hum dono khane ke bahut shaukeen hain.

Tia --- (laughing) Kafi interesting lagta hain . Ab toh Tia ko unse milna hi padega.BTW Pri , Meher kasi hai.

Pri --- Meher ne ek event management company khol di hain …bohot busy ho gayi hain.

Tia --- Tia can't wait to see her. Chalo chalkar usse milte hain.

Pri --- Haa………. Chalo

They both leave to Meher's office since she won't be available at her house due to her busy schedules .Meher had the same reaction as Pri on seeing Tia . She left all her work and all the three went to her house . They spent the whole day chatting about their lives and also remembering the old times they spent together .Then they started speaking on the topic of Tia's marriage.

Tia --- Meher tum toh janti hi ho na ki 3 months bad Tia ki shadi hai . Tia chahti hain ki shaadi ke saare arrangements tum karo.

Meher --- (happily) Of course babes…….anything for you . Aur Tia tum janti ho ki shadi ka khana kaha se arrange hoga.

Tia --- Kaha se?????????????/

Meher --- Hamere Pri ke hone wale miya ke restaurant se ….Aur Tia tum kissi cheez ki worry mat karna , mein sab sambhal loongi. Date fix hote hi mujhe bata dena mein shadi ke arrangements shuru kar doongi.

Tia --- Thanks once again Meher.

Meher --- Tia !!!!!!!!!!!

Tia --- Oops….. sorry….ab thanks nahi kahoongi fine…..

They continue chatting till late night. Tia and Pri stay in Meher's house that day and the next morning both leave.

PART 3

Tia spent the whole week with her angels.She even met Pri's boyfriend Kartik and she too found him very cute. He was very funny . He cracked a lot of jokes that Tia couldn't stop laughing. She knew from the brightness in Pr's eyes that Pri would be happy with him her entire life. She also spent some time helping Meher in her work.

After 1 week she decided to go to Sumeet's Mumbai office which was managed by his manager since Sumeet was busy looking after the branch in London.In 6 yrs Sumeet has visited this office only thrice since he didn't want to be away from Tia and also because he had a lot of trust on his manager. She met him and then took charge of the fashion designing department. Tia is a very renouned designer in London but in India this was her first assignment.

After 2 days of her joining she went to the party of a fellow businessman with Sumeet

While Sumeet was speaking to an old associate he heard someone say …" SIR"……. The voice came from behind. It was a familiar voice and he recognized it immediately . It only took him a second to turn back after comprehending the voice .

Sumeet --- Ranveer ……..Tum ……yahan…..

Ranveer ---- ( who was very thrilled on seeing Sumeet) Ji Sir Hum…..Hume khushi hain ki itne saalo baad bhi aapne hamari awaaz pehchaan li.

Sumeet --- (he was not knowing whether to be happy or sad after what happened) Ranveer tum yaha kya kar rahe ho????????????

Ranveer --- Sir ……..Mr Shah jinhone yeh party arrange ki hain …unka business contract ….is baar hume mila hai. Aur issi ko celebrate karne ke liye yeh party organize ki gayi hain.

Sumeet --- Ohh…(paused a bit not finding words).. …..anyway…congratulations. Last time mein jab India aaya tha tab mujhe pata chala tha ki tum ek Company start kar rahe ho. Tumhe itni jaldi itna bada contract mil gaya…….Great…. Mein toh hamesha se jaanta tha ki tum bohot aage jaoge. Mujhe khushi hain ki tumne mujhe wrong prove

nahi kiya.

Then suddenly someone called Ranveer from behind…It was Yuvi.

Yuvi --- Bro .. tum yahan ho … aur mein tumhe kab se dhoond raha tha

Ranveer --- Kya hua bana??????????????

Yuvi --- Tumne us wacko ko kahi dekha ???? Pata nahi kaha disappear ho gayi …( Then Yuvi sees Sumeet and stops….)

Aashi also comes there and sees Sumeet . Yuvi and Aashi both greet Sumeet And all four of them talk about matters concerning them.

.

(Well ….,Aashi is a journalist. And Yuvi is Ranveer's business partner. But he is least interested in business---like a dormant partner. He is trying hard to make it in Bollywood as a music- director and is a partner in business only for money needed for surviving the competition.)

Ranveer wanted to ask about Tia ……but was not able to gather the courage ….particularly because of the bitter way in which he parted with Tia.

Aashi realized this and she decides to help him.

Aashi --- Uncle …kya aap akele aaye hain ya Timbo ……….I mean Tia bhi aapke saath aayi hain.

Sumeet --- Aashi… Tia bhi saath aayi hain..who Mr. Bajaj se business ki kuch important discussion kar rahi hain.

Aashi ----Ohh!!!!!!!!!!!( then she saw Tia coming towards Sumeet ) Woh dekho Tia

On hearing that Ranveer raised his head and looked in that direction

On seeing her he stood still like a statue. She was looking soo beautiful, soo mature in formals ……that Ranveer just wanted to keep looking at her .. his entire life.

While moving towards them , Tia also saw Ranveer , Aashi and Yuvi.

On seeing them old memories flooded her mind. The pain which took so many years to heal was hurting her again . She wanted to run away from there , that moment .But somehow she managed to control her feelings and decided to face it.

Tia --- ( went towards them) Hi!!!!!! All of you .. Great to see you all after so many years.

(behaving normally as if nothing had happened). Toh Aashi tum journalist ban gayi ho……

Aashi --- Tumhe kaise pata Timbett?????????????

Tia --- Kal Tia ne tumhe TV pe dekha. . Aur Yuvi tumhare music career ka kya hua??

Yuvi --- Babes ek bakra dhoond raha hoon jo mujhe apne film mein music direct karne ka chance de…

Tia --- ( looking at Ranveer ) Tum toh hamesha se business mein interested the ......toh usse mein honge right..????

Ranveer --- Right Tia…..( He kept looking at her)

Tia was feeling a bit uncomfortable because of his gaze ..

Sumeet --- ( realizing Tia's awkardness) Tia ab bohot der ho chuki hain …Hume ghar chalna chahiye…

Tia --- Thik hain Papa ……………………Okay guys …BYE …..(and she turned around to leave)

Aashi --- (stopping her.) Timbett …apna cell no. toh deti javo ….Hum tumhe contact kaise karenge??????????? Ya itne saalon ki tarah aage bhi anonymous banke rehna ka tumhara irada hai…..saare world se detach hoke.

On hearing her sarcastic remark Tia had to give Aashi her no. unwillingly. And after that Sumeet and Tia left.

Eveen after she left Ranveer was standing there like a statue…….glaring at her.

Aashi --- Thakur….apne dream world se bahar niklo….Timbo chali gaye.

Ranveer --- ( coming to his senses with a jerk) Ohhh………Hum to bas …(finding no words) . Thanks Aashi aapne hamare khatir Tia se unka cell no. liya

Aashi --- It's okay Thakur…..What are friends for………………

Edited by honey_13 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow ur riting the next part wow honey u rock
and han plzzzz post ur name and haan plzzzzzz mere jaanu ko jaldi introduce karo
(jaanu in the sense all nos that my janu is ranveer) 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Guys my name if Reshmi.
And Tia I have introduced your jaanu in my 3rd part.............HAPPY.
I'll try to continue tomorrow if my net is okay
Puhleeeeeeeeeeeez do comment.
If anything wrong with my writing , just let me know.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey reshmi im more than happy that u have introduced my janu and taht also in such a swet way
i just loved it
i could jut feel himm 😳
btw about the fic...........it rox and is the best soo plzzzzzzz cont it fast
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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2 parts 2gether??awesomeeeeee reshmi,pls cont asap. 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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amazing writting honey...
wonder what happened to breaj them apart
guess ranny doesnt know abt tia's engagement yet....hope he uses these 3 months well...before that suraj comes
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey reshmi plzzzzz cont soon.

titli

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