'The True Definition of Love'updated ~53~ - Page 10

krits ur fic is just mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...................................

i really donno wat to say or wat to write????????
but ur this part was really very very sweet n i like timbo for this part
but plz ab ashi-yuvi ko seperate mat kar plz

neways keep up the good work krits 👏


luv
sonam

hey i want some more replies thn ony i will cont 😭

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
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arre yaar kriti
aur kitne replies chahiye .......

jaldi continue kar plz

PART 9

uv- par kya ashi...............................

ashi- main tumhe nahin bata sakti

and she turned to leave

v caught her hand

uv- nahi tumhe mujhe bataana hoga

ashi- mujhe jane do uv

and she pulled her hand and ran away to the tterrace uv came behind her

ashi to herself

ashi- main uv ko kaise bata doon ki ki mujhe Brain Tumer hain kaise bata doon main uski zindagi kaise tabah kar sakti hoon

uv was hearing all this he was heartbroken he at once went to ashi and hugged her

uv- ashi tumne mujhe itni badi baat chuppayi mujhse ashi

ashi- she started crying

ashi- uv mujhe bhool jao meri wajah se tum apni zindagi kharab mat karo

uv-nahi ashi maine college se jis ladki ko pyaar kiya jiski ek haan ke liye maine brso intezaar kiya jiske ek chance ke liye main zindagi main pehi baar roya main use kaise chod sakt hoon

ashi- uv main kabhi bhi mar sakti hoon jante ho tum uv i am not the right choice for you

uv- ashi hum tumhaara ilaaj karvayenge hum tumhe jaane nahi denge saying this he hugged her tightly and kissed her

just thn tia came there

tia- ahem ahem yeh kyaho raha hai

uv and ashi wiped their tears

tia- tum dono ro rahe the kya hua plzzz batao kya hua

hey kriti
awesum yaar..........

whoppy..........i m first one to reply

yaar kriti............

ashi ke saath aisa kyun kiya.... 😭

plz uska operation successful kara de plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

both the parts are awesome..... 👏

but brain tumour............. 😭

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ashi has a brain tumor ....she will die???????????????
sniff snifff***
but the fic as gud as usual...keeep it upppp 👏

krits aisa mat kar plz
by da way ur fic is getting its right track very early
u r a very good writer . n i mean it

gr8 round of applause for u......................................
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