'The True Definition of Love'updated ~53~ - Page 9

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Posted: 19 years ago
#81

PART8

Ashi- started blushing a bit😳

ashi- vo actually mujhe to aise hi tie bandhni aat hai agar pasand nahi aayi to mot my fault

uv- ashi vo

just thn tia came there with reet

tia- uv ye tumhaari neck pe kya hua omg aao main tumhe cream apply kar deti hnn

reet- mumma gift

tia- oh sorry sweetheart ashi tum uv ko cream laga do

ashi- main but tia

tia- ashi vo tumhaara friend hai so what

so ashi goes takes a cream and goes forward to uv

uv- aaram se lagana

ashi starts applying cream oin uv's neck uv feels really pained thn ashi starts blowing across his neck for the first time in life uv shivers he shivs badly

after some time they are done

aashi- yeh lo ho gaya

uv- abhi to kuch nahi hua bahaut kuch pada hai

ashi- kya matlab

uv pulls ashi nd pushes her against the wall

ashi- uv leave me

uv- nahi pehle tum mujhe bataoi tum mujhse pyaar karti ho ya nahi

ashi- uv meri engagement ho chuki

uv- ashi main jaanta hoon ye sab ek natak hai

ashi- uv main tumse pyaar nahi karti

uv- meri aankhon main aankhen dalke ye baat bolo

ashi moves away

ub- kya hua himmat nahi hai iska matlab tum mujhse aaj bhi pyaar karti ho tum ye accept kyon nahi kar sakti main bhi tumse pyar karta hoon damn tum yeh kyon nahi samajhti

ashi get emotional she shouts

ashi- HAAN HAAN MAIN TUMSE PYAAR KARTI HOON PAR ....................

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Posted: 19 years ago
#82

finally cont. kiya
wah!!!!!!!!!!! kya baat hain... so cute... i luv tia for this... applying cream 😳 😳 ... that's soooooo sweet... i luved this part... yaar tuje to AY fic ka best nobel price milna chahiye... LOL... this part is one of my fav part... par ab ashi ko kya problem hain... hey bhaggu...aur kirti party wala part jaldi lana... i can't wait... neways here's a big round of applause to u for giving me gift...ur FANFIC...and this PART... u really attracted me to it...
👏

aur ab jaldi cont. karna... plz...

and i m the first 1 to reply....yiipeee....

Edited by nitz_rocks - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
very good 👏

plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
kewl [;)] , dis time dont take soo long 2 conti coz dis situation is VERY sensitive [LOL] ,u can understand dat na [:D]
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85
nice 1


continue soon Kriti!

hope they patch up soon 😉 😳

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
its gr8 kriti
do continue fast plzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#87
contine soon Kriti 😉

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88
hey kriti

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thats all i can say rather do 😆 😆 😆



plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#89
its awesome
i just read d whole fic.it rocks.plz continue
ashi912 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#90
its awesome
i just read d whole fic.it rocks.plz continue

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