A TWIST IN THE TALE...(updated pg.33) - Page 6

omggggg.......i read all the parts together.........they are really really awesome........ 👏

miss antartica.......... 😆

yah..i know its funny..i told her miss antartica bcos of the fur coats she wears!

HEY A VERY VERY NICE FIC...DO CONTINUE SOON PLEASE!!! 👍🏼

hey Saloni

amazing fanfic

plz continue soon

Divya

thanks divya!! im posting the next part in 5 mins!

OK HERE IS THE NEXT PART

ASHI-YUVI,hum kahan jaayenge
YUVI-Kahi bhi lekin perfomance ke baad
ASHI-Perfomance...oh yah remix ko perform karna hai..hurry..varna vo silly timbet aur thakur dono hi gussa ho jaayenge
UV-Lekin ashi..promise ki perfomance ke baad...u n i saath main kahin jaayenge?
ASHI-Fine...now chalo

ASHI AND UV GO JUST AT THE RIGHT TIME AND SEE TIA INSULTING SHY
(Im repeating 2 lines ok)
TIA-So go and eat all the snow and ice u want,miss antartica.Chalo ranveer
EVR1 STARTS LAUGHING,EVEN UV AND ASHI
WHEN SHYLA IS ON HER WAY OUT ,ASHI STOPS HER
ASHI-Hey room-mate,hum perform karne wale hain,at least dekh ke to jao
SHY-Leave me ashi
UV-Ya ashi,let her go...tum chaho toh mujhe aise hi pakad sakti ho..tight and close
ASHI-Shut up uv
SHYLA GOES AWAY AND AY GO TO MEET TR BACKSTAGE
RANVEER-Bana..aap kahan chale gaye the
UV-Kuch nahi dude,kuch log bahut hi aasani se rooth jate hain...toh unhe manana padta hai...right ashi
ASHI-Whatever...hey bhagoo...tia lets go and change
THEY CHANGE FOR THEIR PERFOMANCE AND COME ON STAGE AND PERFORM ON DIL KI YEH DHADKAN,MASTI HAI PALBHAR AND MAST MAST HAI SAMA!!
AFTER PERFOMANCE THEY CHANGE THEIR CLOTHES
TIA-Chalo ranveer...Now lets go and eat
RANVEER-Tia pehle aap hum me yeh bataiye ki aapne shyla se itni rudely kyun baat ki?
TIA-Oh tia's god...tumhe sirf shy ka topic mila..that silly fool
RANVEER-Tia...aap ne hum me javaab nahi diya
TIA-Ranveer..tia doesnt like her...tia ko sirf yehi lagta hai ki ek din woh tumhe tia se chin legi
RANVEER SMILES-Tia..aise kaise ho sakta..hum toh aapke saath hain..aur humesha aapke saath hi rahenge...
TIA-Promise ranveer
RANVEER-Ok..promise tia
THEY HUG EACH OTHER AND LATTY OVERHEARS THIS CONVO

NOW AY PART
YUVI-Hey ashi,lets go
ASHI-Par yuvi where will we go?
UV-UH...hum bahar garden main jaayenge
ASHI-Agar mitra ne dekh liya toh
UV-Woh bahar jaake sochenge,lekin pehle andar se nikle..warna latty aa jayegi
THEY ARE ABOUT TO LEAVE WHEN LATTY DOES COME THERE
LATTY-Oh toh bhaagna hai..kyun...UV,Lets both of us go to the garden..
SHE IS ABOUT TO CATCH YUVI'S HAND WHEN....

THATS IT GUYS..PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT

hey its fantastic mind blowin as i always say outta d world and sorry saloni main pichle part ke liye compliment karna bhool gayi it was also mind blowin d best and written by gr8est writer of d world 👏

very sweet Saloni 😳

plz continue soon

i really luved this part 😳 😳

"UV-Ya ashi,let her go...tum chaho toh mujhe aise hi pakad sakti ho..tight and close😳 😳
ASHI-Shut up uv "

it was fantablous

Divya

REMIXER??????WHATS RONG...ITNA BHI JHOOTH NAHI BOLNA CHAHIYE!!
but yet thanx to both of u

Saloni..

chill it takes time for a person 2 read sucha long part of a fanfic..

don worry

im sure everyone will reply n they'll love it

Divya