A TWIST IN THE TALE...(updated pg.33)

H IGUYS...THIS IS A NEW FANFIC(COULDNT THINK OF ANY NAME).I'VE THOUGHT OF IT FOR MANY DAYS..PLEASE READ IT AND TELL ME HOW IT IS..SO I KNOW IF I CAN CONTINUE OR NOT!

AASHI(to herself)-Aaj remix ke practise ke liye sab late hai..main akeli shed main..how boring!

Just then uv enters

YUVI-Hi wacko...wassup..koi aaya kyun nahi?

AASHI-i dono..yuvi..its so boring na.Lets have fun..kuch socho na!OOPS!sorry main to bhool hi gayi,tum toh soch hi nahi sakte!

YUVI-yah right

ASHI-Idea! lets have a nice party..kal raat shed main..what say

YUVI-Good idea,lekin Mitra ka kya(im letting mitra and other villains as wel as those hu've left the serial be in this fanfic)

ASHI-Oh thank bhagoo ki us Phsyco ne shed main camera's nahi lagaaye

YUVI-Aashi please physco mat kaho..woh toh mera special naam hai na..

And they stare into each others eyes....AND THEN LOVE IS IN THE AIR!!!

I have the next part(abt ranveer tia) ready..but only if u all like this one will i post it..

please please please reply..its my first fanfic!!

hey Saloni

its aweeesomee

plz continue fasttt 👏 😳

finally u loser
finally posted it naa...all dese days i was tellin her 2 post nd she neva posted
THNXX nd vry cute....

i ogt only 2 people to read it yet 😭 ..i need the approval pf at least 5 more people yaar

it's very diff n niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee n awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont

👏its outta the world plz do cont plz plz plz 👏

it's nice really plz continue asap

it 1 of d best fics i have read . 👏

its shooooo sweet yaar continue 😊
i luved yuvis dialogue the best 😃 "psycho is my special name" 😳 thts lyk shoooo cute 😃
continue soon 😉

THANX GUYS..I HOPE U'LL ARE NOT JOKING CUZ HERE IS THE SECOND PART

MEHER-Babes,kaha jaa rahi ho?
TIA-Angel tia remix ke rehearsal ke liye shed jaa rahi hai.Bye
PRI-Ok,bye babes
THEN TIA OPENS THE DOOR,AND FINDS RANVEER THERE
TIA-Ranveer tum yaha
Ranveer-Haan tia,hum aapko hi lene aaye the
TIA-How sweet,lets go
TIA PUTS HER ARM AROUND RANVEER'S ARM(U CAN IMAGINE THAT!)

ON THE WAY
SHYLA(after seeing the two,in her mind)-WOH-OH Ranveer tia ke saath kya kar raha hai..i must go
ON THE OTHER HAND EVEN RAGHU SEE'S THEM

RAGHU-hi ranveer,hi tia
TIA-hi raghu
RANVEER-Hi Bana
SHYLA(Standing next to ranveer)-Hi ranveer
RANVEER-Hi shy
TIA-(COMING BETWEEN RAN AND TIA)-Shyla actually Ranveer aur tia kahin ja rahe hai..we're getting late..baad main baat karenge ok babes!!
SHYLA-Par ranveer,aaj ka experiment mujhe samjh main nahi aaya..
RANVEER-Shy hum aaj remix ke...
TIA(Stopping ranveer)-BYE SHYLA,BYE RAGHU
RANVEER-Bye shy,bye raghu
RAGHU- Bye tia..
They both go awayand shyla just look's at ranveer's back...then tia turns and smiles at shy)
RAGHU-Ranveer toh gaya..
SHYLA-You..
RAGHU-Bye Shyla..mi chaltos(u know he does use marathi)

OK I HAVE THE NEXT PART WRITTEN BUT PLEASE COMMENT ON THIS ONE..!! 😊