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Posted: 19 years ago
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please.......my names vinitha 😊 not vitak 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey nice Vinitha

plz continue soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon asap.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey
ur fic is really gud
so plzzz cont asap
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey it was so cooooooooooooooooool.i really luved this part.but hope ranvir doesnt misunderstand tia.plz do not do any kind of separation btw them.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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its amazing vinitha..............plzzzzzzzzzzzzz do cont
relly wanna know raanys reaction
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi vinitha i just read ur fanfic today and i feel dat it rocks. don't even dare to discontinue it.your fanfic is awesome. plzz yaar don't be angry if we can't send our comments, coz even you know dat your fanfic is good. i mean it's superb and ultrasufi. good is actually quite an understatement. remember one thing anything related to ranny and tia can never be bad, it has to be awesome. 👏

sagarika
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it was awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks for the comments guys😃

THE NEXT DAY



The marriage went on perfectly.vrinda was looking radient as a bride.she was overflowing with happiness.she and Akash,Amans brother, 😆 made a perfect pair.

tia determinedly kept away from ranveer.Ashi kept shooting glances at both of them but ranveer didnt meet her eye.

the pheris were going and suddenly ashi felt something falling on her head.

surprised she turned back.yuvi was putting the flowers which were meant for the wedding pair on ashis head.

ashi looked at him.yuvi,tum kya kar rahe ho?

yuvi:kuch nahi babe,bas imagine kar raha hoon jab hamari shaadi hogi to humpe bhi log aise hi phool barsaenge.

ashi rolled her eyes.yuvi mujhe tickle ho rahi hai.aur bride waha hai yaha nahi.

yuvi:par agar tum chaho to.... YUVI!!!!ashi whispered. please.shaadi pe concentrate karo ok?

yuvi made a face behind her back.

"ashi,vrinda kitni kush dikh rahi hai na?pehle apne finances ko lekar kitna worried raha karti thi.marraige changes so much for a person na?

ashi tried to maintain a straight face.poor yuvi,he was trying so hard to get her to say yes.she choked on a giggle.well,she would,but not before letting yuvi on a bit more.

even tia had been bugging her making pointed remarks in their room about shaadi blah blah!!

right now she was worried about ranveer.he was looking very moody.
Damn tia! why couldnt she just accept her feelings.she would have to go back to mumbai and do something about it.

the marriage got over and vrinda left on her honeymoon.the others also went back to their own lives.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soooooooooooon its awesooooom grrrrrrrr8 fannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnntastiiiiiiiic 👏

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