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Posted: 19 years ago
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pls continue i luv the way the tia ranveer story is shaping up 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon fast asap.
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its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon fast asap.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow its awsum..plz cont asap 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok this part is mostly borrowed by the rebelde spoilers given by veonal.there are only some slighttt changes so please bear with it ok?
and pls tell if it is boring

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Ranveer sipped at his drink,watching tia from the corner of his eye.

She looked quite happy.didn't look like she had missed him a lot.unlike him!

But then,he couldn't blame her.he remembered,tia had forgiven him for the revenge thng.then again when shyla,that b**** had tried to separate them by acting as if he was involved with her,tia had believed him even though she had been hurt.they had been going strong for two years.

And then diksha entered.everything had gone wrong from there.she had looked so beautiful, maybe more than tia.so innocent,so friendly,that he hadnt been able to see the weakness in her.

Tia had gone to bangalore,for her cousins wedding. And she had found out,of course.she had actually caught him with diksha. it had been a trap planned by shyla ,but he found out too late.tia hadnt said anything She had simply gone back to her room and had stopped talking to him.

The day they graduated she had left for paris.that had been the last time he saw her.

diksha had really loved him.he knew it.both of them had been fooled by shyla who only wanted revenge from tia.

Shyla had changed colleges soon after their breakup citing some unknown reason.ranveer didn't know what but there was a nagging doubt in his mind that tia had been behind her departure.

shyla had done a lot of hera pheri in the college.maybe tia had had something on her.he would never forget the blank indifference in tias eyes nor the cold hatred in shylas when she had left.

Ranveer looked at the swirling drink in his hand.he had started drinking soon after tia had left.but had stopped,mainly at Ashis insistence.

truly,if not for ashi he would have been a wreck.she had supported him all along when everyone, even yuvi, blamed him for the betrayal.it was all his mistake.he had been a fool.had not realised tia's importance till it was too late.had always taken her for granted

And how much ever he justified to himself he knew that he had cheated on her with diksha.

It was all over for them.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey it is simply outstanding fantabulous polz cont cant wait it is the best keep it up n cont fast 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg it's awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm plz cont
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Posted: 19 years ago
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guys is it re 😭 ally not nice????????? 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its really nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i read your fic after many days--because of internet problem--but it was awesome--please continue soon--cant wait to read the next part.

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