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well thanks for your feed back.i have this idea like u guys suggested but i want to know should i actually patch them up or not 😆
whatever u say.i can maneveur a bit 😆

hey u should make them patch up but not so early and you can make ashi agree to uv proposal and agree for their marriage 😳 and phir ashi ke marriage ke functions and usme tia-ran workin together u r understandin na ki main kya keh rahi hoon 😳


neways just an idea dont kill me if you didnt like it 😆

course i love it 😳 😳kriti rite what more would i like than t r spending some quality time with each other 😆

thanx 😉
so will you workout on my idea 😛

awwwwwwww poor baby, tia crooned.toh tell me darling. main tumhe attention kaise do?aise? she kissed his chin.
ya aise,she trailed up to his ear,she reached his lips and bit his lower lip.....ranveers eyes closed.stop!!....he held her face.his eyes were bright.dont do it, he whispered. then both of us wont be able to stop.

this part was the best 😳 😳 😳 2 gud nd vinitha u present romantic parts very well and if u ask me pair tia with someone else coz u know ranny plays the part of the jealous bf 2 gud 👏 esp wen tia was with arjun

hey cont soon plz cant wait.hey u can pair tia with sumone else.way to see ranny reaction.he cant see his luv to be of sumones else.

IN THE AIRPORT



Ranveers mom arrives from jaipur.

Vasudha and ranveer were waiting impatiently outside.

maa arrived.but not alone,a heavyset man with a big mustach and a trolly fully laden with bags of all sizes and two women were with her.

ranveer and vasudha touched their mothers feet.

ranveer: kaka,kaki,,kaise hai aap log.appne....bataya nahi ki ap aa rahe hai.

maa:uh ha ranveer.vo kya hai na, bhaisab ke kheti ka kaam ab 3 mahino keliye rukh gaya hai.kisi ne lease pe liya hai.aur unhone mumbai nahi dekhi thi to hamare saath aagaye.aur ha,ye unki beti hai.Gayathri. humari vasu se ek hi saal bade hai.

Gayathri was a slight girl,quite pretty.she seemed very shy.she smiled hesitently at ranveer and vasu and folded her hands and said in a low voice "Namaste."



ranveer's kaka(in a loud voice):haaaa. pure 18 saal ki hai hamari beti, hehehe!!!!uski aur vasu ki khoob jamegi naiiiii?????

vasu (in a confused tone):uh ya..... sure kaka.hi gayathri.(in a low tone to ranveer.ab ye 3 mahine tak yaha rahenge?)

ranveer sushed her.

ha ha.kyun nahi.ab ghar chale???he bundled all of them into the car all the while thinking.oh god!!! ab kaka kya museebat karenge.sambhal ke rehna padega.



AT HOME

vasu led gayathri to her room and said,in a quite superior tone: ye mera room hai.but since main murya mein hi rehti hoon tum use kar sakti ho.kaki aur maa bhi yahi rahenge.

gayathri looked around the room.it was medium size with a king sized bed.she was feeling uncomfortable already.she hadnt wanted to come at all but bauji had said it was very important that she also be there.all this scared her.even vasu.she seemed so confident and all knowing.what would she do with these high society people?

Gayathri!!! vasu suddenly asked.

gayathri:h..ha ji.

tum vaise karti kya ho? i mean kya padhti ho?
gayathri:ji hum ne 12 pass kiya hai.

vasu waited for a minute.then prodded
further,aur.....ab kya karne wali ho?

gayathri gave her an embarrassed look.ab...kuch nahi.bauji hame aur padhne nahi denge.

WHAT?????vasu asked,in a shocked tone. he wont let u study???? how dumb!!! par kyu??

woh..humari saadi karna chahte hai na, isliye.

vasu listened to this,her mouth open. uhhh.....18 years mein marriage?????

suddenly everything fell into place.the truth slammed into her like a tornado.omg!!!!!!omg!!!!so isliye....... kaka kuch bhi bataye bina aagaye aur woh bhi puri family ke saath.ranveer bhaiya!!!!abto aapki shamat hi aagayi hai.

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i think this part is a lil boring.il make the next more interesting ok??
and ya plssssssssssss comment 😉

hey ur fic is good.but dont tell me u are pairing gayatri with ranny.no plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz,dont do this.not with gayatri atleast.cont soon.

Originally posted by: kutie

hey ur fic is good.but dont tell me u are pairing gayatri with ranny.no plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz,dont do this.not with gayatri atleast.cont soon.

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don worry kutie neways tia ran have to be together......rite😉

hey to u r goin accordin my idea hey good cool sufi your this part was really nice and make the next part aa bit longer 👏