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Posted: 19 years ago
Tia?

Tia stood there silently.her face was pale.her eyes….red…as if she had been crying.

Im…..im sorry ranveer. Please….mujhe maaf kardo.
Ranveer looked at her in shock.
Tia:main jaanthi hu maine tumhe bahut hurt kiya hai.she was crying now. Par mujhe darr lagta tha ran…main….i love you so much ranveer ki im scared.
Mujhe maaf kardo…please.tum…tum.. jo kahoge main karungi. Bas..tum …mujhe chod kar mat jao.don…don't leave me.please.....she was hiccoughing now. 😭

Ranveer looked at her helplessly.
Tia....
He shook her shoulders to stop her blabbering.tia stop......aapne kaise soch liya ki hum aapko chod denge? Ive always loved you. Apko chod kar hum….kaha jayenge.
Tia was sobbing now.ra....
Ranveer pulled her into his arms and kissed her.he moved his lips down her face and kissed her…her eyes,her nose.....her lips.....not able to stop!!

Tia cried even harder.im really really very sorry …tum gussa mat karo ple….
He hugged her even tighter. She buried her face in his neck. Im....sorr.....
Ranveer laughed.tia ab bas kijiye.hum gussa nahi hai aur humne aapko maaff bhi kardiya aur ap mat roiye.he handed her a kerchief.
They sat down in a corner.tia sat close to him,clutching his shirt.
Ranveer wiped her tears gently.hum kahi nahi jayenge.don't worry.
Tia sniffled.par gayathri.....
Ranveer:tia....gayathri to hamari behen jaise hai.hum jaanthe hai unke kuch aur irade the lekin wo samajh gayi ki hum sirf apke liye the.
Tia:aur wo phone call?
Ranveer:wo phone call vasu ka idea tha.hume laga ki news sunne ke baad ap humse aa kar kahegi ki ap humse pyar karti hai.par hum to bhul hi gaye ki aap kitni ziddi hai. End mein to hame hi aana pada na?
Tia:off course. Tum boys samjhte hi nahi hao.ek ladki ke liye…..'sniff'… kitna difficult hota hai. 😳
Aur main atleast tumhare liye ruki.warna tumhe paris tak aana padta.
She wiped her face,still sniffling.
Ranveer (shaking his head):par ab to sab theek hai na? Aur….,taking her face in his hands.ab hum aur intezar nahi kar sakte.

Tia.....aap humse shaadi karegi?
Tia looked at him for a while.well.....she moved away from him.

'tia ahuja hona koi aise waise baat nahi hai.agar tumhe tia ahuja ko propose karna hai to kuch dhang se karo.kisi dumb run down airport main nahi jaha hazaro log hame dekh rahe ho?'

Ranveer raised his eyebrows.ohhh!!! so you want me to court you?
Tia: well….....yes!!
Ranveer:ok madam.so would you do me the privilege of dinner tonight?
Tia(blushing but trying to hide it) of course. Lekin mujhe ready hone mein time lage ga so….
Ranveer (quickly pulling her towards the car)chaliye.aur…aapke bags?
Tia gave him a watery smile.nahi hai.main jaanthi thi tum aaoge.

She got onto the car,leaving Ranveer to shake his head in wonder.how on earth could he love someone so much??


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Ummm…...... hum kaha ja rahe hai?
It was 12 at night.they had had dinner and spent time simply talking or rather….in ranveers case….simply looking at her.
Ranveer brought the car to a stop. It looked like some kind of field.tia got out.
Tia……
She looked back.ranveer was standing there, his hand outstretched.
Dance?
Light music was wafting from the car.

She came into his arms.(her rightful place 😳 )and they danced.
Tia laid her head on ranveers shoulder.the music seemed........she realised with a jolt....

Dil ki ye dhadkan.....

They moved slowly to the music unaware of time flying past.
She looked up.ranveer moved his thumb slowly over her face.she closed her eyes as he gently started moving his lips over her face.his head dropped to her neck.

Tia swallowed. Her arms twined involuntarily around his neck as she pulled him closer.
Ranveer kissed her passionately.he caressed her body,loving her without inhibitions.

Ran.....tia said..... trying to get back into her senses....mujhe lagta hai.....tumhe ab .....propose kardena chahiye.
Ranveer didn't listen.he was too lost to hear her.
Ranveer.......
He pulled back. Just looked at her for a while and pulled out a small box from the car.
He kneeled down before her.

When shall we have the wedding???

Tia looked at him in amazement. Tum itne sure ho ki main ha kehdungi?
Ranveer: agar aap ne na kaha toh….toh bhi kya? Dil wale dulhaniya le jayenge.

Aur ha. shaadi ke kuch conditions bhi hai.hame 5 children chahiye.3 girls and 2 boys.
Aur.....aap hampe kabhi gussa nahi karengi .....he rattled off few more things and....aur ha.ek aur bahut important cheez. He got up and whispered something in her ear.
Tia blushed furiously red.

Ranveer couldn't stop smiling looking at her.she was still the same old tia ahuja. As he slipped the ring on her finger ....and as she kissed him this time .....and as they walked back hand in hand towards the car……he couldn't help thinking......

It was all destiny.




THE END


whew!!! its over at last!! 😆 writing a fic is a tough job!!


but how did u find it??? plz now that it is over u can tell what u didnt like 😊
vinitha
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh god.....such a beautiful fic......awesome.....marvelous.........heart melting....truely.........an excellent work..... 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow vinitha..ur fic is really nice..but the end.. 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
ur fic was nice,when r u starting the next fic.
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Posted: 19 years ago
amazing fan fic vitak

really well written

loved it a lot
😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
amazing Vinita,

loved the last 2 parts 😳 😳 😳

will miss ur fanfic.. but not if u start another 1 😉 😳

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey vinitha ur lst part was simply mindblowing must say u left the best 4 the last 😉 😉 have tell u this was the best part of yr fan fic 👏 👏 i luved the patch up scene it was very beautifully written 😳and the way tia tells ranny u gota propose me ina better way was so 😳 😳 😳 and the last part ohhhhhh cho sweet 😳 😳 ranny wants 5 kids 😆 but dnt u think he needs 2 know abt family planning 😛 😆 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
it was great.....mind blowing...fantastic....out of the universe...it's superb... 👏 👏 me lookin forward for ur another fiction... plz start another... u write awesome...
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Posted: 19 years ago
it was awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mindblowing will surely wait for ur next fic

love megha

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