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thanks for all the comments.pls keep them coming even if they are bad

5 MONTHS LATER

ENOUGH IS ENOUGH!!!!!!
Mujhe nahi bata! Ashi ko ab ha karni hi padegi.I mean I cant wait
indefinately for her.
Tia and ranveer looked at each other in an Oh God!!, not again!!!!
expression.
They were in the office and yuvi had come there just as they were leaving to
go home.
Tia yawned,...yuvi, hum kal baat nahi kar sakte? Mera tv program start ho
jayega.

Yuvi flopped down next to her on the sofa.
Tia,please yaar you have to help me.kaise bhi usse ha kehva do.
Ranveer said,yuvi hum kya kare?you know na ashi kitni ziddi hai theres
nothing we can do to change her mind.
Yuvi jumped up. Ranveer, dude, I have fabulous plan.lekin isme I need your
help.especially tias.
Tia, now seriously bugged, uh....ok yuvi ill do it par plan kya hai?
Yuvi jodified his hands together.Ah! Of course.plan!suno

THE NEXT DAY

Ashiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!! tia flopped down on ashis bed and shook her.Wake up.ekgreat news hai.
timbo pleaseeee ashi turned the other side and closed her ears with the
pillow.
ashi please wake up. abhi vrinda ka phone aya tha.uski shaadi ki date fix ho
gayi hai.aur shaadi next week hai.

ashi jumped of the bed.kya????vrindeshvari!!! finally!!!!
hey bhaggu!!!thank god.warna aur......next week??hey bhaggu!!! ummm..... tickets book karne
honge.that is unless of course aman hum sab kiliye tickets nahi bhejdeta.itna to kar sakta hai na? uhh... main jake mp ko phone karti hoon.bye.


tia smiled,shaking her head.then suddenly something struck her.
aaaahh! yuvi!ye tumhare liye golden opportunity hai.shayad hum tumhatra plan
ab jaldi hi action mein dal sakte hai.
tia smiled a wicked smile.ab tum kya karogi anvesha bannerji ray???

great fanfic..........keep writing but soon cant wait any longer.

thanks for the comments guys but i dont think it is very interesting as no one seems to be reading it. 😭
so im not continuing it
thanks to everyone who read it. 😊

hey plz dont do tht everyone is reading it it is really nice plz cont atleast for the people who read it plz plz plz plz plz dont do tht to us plz cont it is fantabulous 👏

Come on yaar continue! its gr8!! seriously !! i dun care if noone really reads it if i wud hav been u n got at least 1 reader id continue it for dat reader even if he/she was d only 1 to read it!! n here u hav a lot of fans of ur own !!!!!!!! i wud never miss dis oopurtunity !seriously CONTINUE!!!! 👏 IT IS AFTR ALL AWESOME!!!!!!!!! 👏

thanks sanya and kriti(i got your names from the slam book) 😊 but there are alot of fics going on now so maybe it takes time to read all of them.il surely cont after sometime 😃 or maybe tom if i can get the time
thanks and bye 😛

pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue fast and do write about tia ranveer.

👏hey vitak dont get upset,we all are reading ur fanfic and must say ur fanfic rocks and i think it is better than my fanfi👏c.so hats of to u.👏

thanks for the encouragement guys😃this is the next part. hope its good 😕

NO.

WAY vrinda!main us bimbet ke saath room share nahi karungi.who apne make up ke saman se room ko fill kardengi phir mujhe balcony me sona hoga.nahi . in fact mein to balcony me bhi so jaungi but iske saath nahi please.

Vrinda looked helplessly at tia.Tia just shrugged.

Vrinda, in an attempt to pacify ashi,started,ok ashi main dekhte hoon if………her voice trailed of as tia shook her head vigourously behind ashis back.

uhh nahi! Ashi tumhe yahi sona hai ok ?

Aur agar nahi so sakti toh your more than welcome to sleep in the balcony,tia piped in helpfully.

Ashi glared at tia and stomped away to find yuvi.

Its night time.everyones enjoying inside.

Tia was sitting alone outside.ranveer comes to see her.



Tia?

She turned. Yaha akeli kya kar rahi hai?sab log andar masti kar rahe hai aur aap!

Tia smiled.kuch nahi.just looking at the stars.cant see them in mumbai nowadays.

Ranveer raised his eyebrows.hum toh roz dekhte hai.you know at night after dinner I go up to the terrace.and look for shooting stars.aur wish bhi karte hai.




Tia: Really!kya wish karte ho?

ranveer looked at tia.ek hi cheez.humare paas sab kuch hai tia,siway…….he looked into her eyes, who ek cheez jo hum apne jaan se bhi zyada chahte hai,he laughed bitterly,aur who ek hi cheez jo hume nahi mil sakti.

their eyes met. tia felt all the old feelings come rushing back to her.she couldnt look away.her hand came up by itself to touch his face.she stopped herself just in time but couldnt look away from him.



They were very close now.ranveer could almost feel tias warmth.he swallowed.

Say it ranveer.ye perfect mauka hai.come on you idiot say it.



Ti…tia.. he bit his lip.

kya hai ranveer?

tia…I know..ki..i have hurt you.par… tia , I…I still love you.

hum.......tia......,kya....... hua?

tia was looking at him in shock.

tia....tia please..just hear me out . uske baad.........

HEAR YOU OUT!!! what do you MEAN hear you out?????are you nuts??tum apne aap ko samajhte kya ho ranveer??? tumhara jab man karega mujhe tumari baat maanni hogi aur jab nahi karega to mujhe chod doge???

par ti....NO! tia held up her hand.tumhe kuch bhi explain karne ki zaroorat nahi hai.

get one thing straight ranveer.i dont need anyone.main apna khayal rakh sakti hoon.

tumhe maine maaf to kardiya hai.but your terribly mistaken if you think ki main phir se tumhare paas aa jaungi.

saying that tia got up and went away.

OMG vitak this part was awesome mindblowing 👏 👏 👏

ranveer looked at tia.ek hi cheez.humare paas sab kuch hai tia,siway…….he looked into her eyes, who ek cheez jo hum apne jaan se bhi zyada chahte hai,he laughed bitterly,aur who ek hi cheez jo hume nahi mil sakti.

their eyes met. tia felt all the old feelings come rushing back to her.she couldnt look away.her hand came up by itself to touch his face.she stopped herself just in time but couldnt look away from him.

i luved this line 😳 😳 but the end was bit sad 😭 but still tia ranveer kitna bhi deny kare apne pyaar ko[esp tia] they will alwys end up together 😳 😳 they have never gotten over each other and in remix shayad yeh dooriyaan hi inhe aur paas layengi 😳 😳

awesome work pls do continue i luv the way u bring out the emotions between tia nd ranveer 👏