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Posted: 19 years ago
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THE NEXT MORNING

Ranveer checked himself in his car mirror.he ran his hands over his hair making it even more messy.there was a quesy feeling in
his stomach.he took a deep breath and walked up to the ahuja house.

'kaise hoge woh.kya wo hamse baat karegi? itne saal ho gaye.kya unhone hame maaf kiya hoga?'

'Ranveer'!! he turned. uh good morning sir.good morning. sumit ahuja said jovially as he came down the stairs.
wahi to mein soch raha tha ki tum ab tak kyu nahi aye.Tia se milne aye ho na?????
the smile slipped from ranveers face.'umm woh actually.. hum... bas aise hi... kuch kam...'
its ok.you dont have to explain.sumit said with a smile on his face. Tia uper hai.abhi ati hi hogi.

Papa kaun....... tias voice trailed of when she saw ranveer.her head started spinning and she held the rail for support.

Oh god!.she hadnt changed at all.ranveers heart clenched as he looked at her.she was still just as beautiful.just as perfect.
she was wearing jeans and a white top,she looked great,but somehow''..different.

Suddenly she was in front of him.Hello ranveer. how are you?
he didnt answer. just gazed at her.

thakur!!! ab kuch bologe bhi?5 minutes se waise hi khade ho.ashi slapped his back,grinning at him.
uh ha. hello....Tia.kaise hai aap?
tia gave a slight smile.'yeah, fine.absolutely fine.'
just then sumit interrupted.ha ranveer.ab tum aa hi gaye ho to i have something to tell you.
aj se Tia will joinig us in the office as our creative head.paris mein Jaques mileit ke under train kiya hain usne.
iske designs dekho ge na to tum believe hi nahi kar paoge ki tia ne banaye hai.they are so good.
in fact mein soch raha tha ki us Las Chorvle ke order ke liye yahi samples bhej de.aur usne to'.
Uhh' ha papa. tia started pushing her father towards the dining room embarrassed at her fathers compliments.
now hum breakfast karle.phir aj office jaldi bhi to jana hoga na.sabse introduce karane ke liye?
chaliye. ranveer, why dont you join us?


whaaa??? join us???whats up with her?tia aise kyu behave kar rahi hai?jaise kuch hua hi na ho
.ranveer fought a feeling of dread.shaking his head he joined them at the table.
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pleaseeeeee guys tell if its bad.iwont continue then
veonal thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
omggg ist awesome vitak pls continue soon 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
hey it is awsome plzzz do continue 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its not good kya?? 😭 😭 no ones commenting.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its very good pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue fast asap.
veonal thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey vitak pls continue yaar its really awesome nething 2 do with tia nd ranny is awesome 👏 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Alright.now let me give a briefing about what the four have been doing for the last 5 years.

TIA
Well,as I said shes become a designer.a fashion designer.after graduating from maurya she went to paris for a course in design, photographing models having a fashion show ,etc etc.she trained under some famous designer who only takes selected pupils.so u see shes quite a hotshot now.

RANVEER
Ranveer started working for sumit ahuja as soon as he finished college.he also got an MBA.so now hes manager of ahuja co.(though sumit is still the top)sumit ahujas getting old now so ranveer does all the actual running around work.sumit trusts him a lot.

YUVI
Well,he got a degree in science but its useless to him now.he set up a restaurant and lounge bar and its doing very well-especially with the teenage crowd.hes in the process of constructing his second discotheque.

ASHI
Ashi.....entered the television world.
well no,not as an actress.shes a director in charge of a news channel.it happened quite by chance.soniya wanted her to come with her for an interview and just to keep her happy ashi went.but got interested not in the celibrity world but by the drama backstage.
She in charge of telecasting news, ie: getting stuff together ,directing the shows which shes in charge of etc. also requires a lot of travelling so needless to say,ashi loves evey minute of it.

Ok now back to the story.
IN THE OFFICE.
Ranveer is introducing tia to the staff.


Ranveer, avoiding looking at tia,
tia,this is shelly.shes our best designer.shes been with us for the past 6 years.shell show you around.
Ab chaliye. Hum apko apka cabin dikha data hai.
Both of them go.
Tia:ranveer,main tumse kuch kehna chahti thi.
Ranveer: uhh, kya...tia?
Ranveer....dekho, hamare beech jo kuch bhi hua...mian...main nahi chahti ki uska asar aaj pe pade.see,us waqt hum dono young the,immature the,shayad.....shayad hamne ek dusre se kuch zyada hi expect kiya.tumhari expectations ko main pure nahi kar payee.
Whatever. From now onwards we are going to work together,and I don't want ki hum dono guilty feel kare.properly communicate na kar paye.isiliye,I want to say that maybe we should let bygones be bygones and start afresh?
And both of us know that this company hasent been doing as well.so,we should be professional and not feel awkward around each other.
Tum samajh rahe ho na mein kya keh rahi hu?

Ranveer just looked at her.After a long pause....
Ha tia. Aap thik keh rahi hai. Maybe we should start afresh.
Moving away from her.
Agar apko kisi bhi chhez ki zaroorat hai to hamse keh dijiye.
Aur ha,yuvi ne aj hame invite kiya hai. We have to go to his hotel.aap ashi ke saath aa jaeye ok?
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comments pleaseeeeeeeeeee 😳 and ya,tell me how do you feel about the professions.do they suit them???
Edited by vitak - 19 years ago
veonal thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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amazing 👏 👏 u introduced shlly as a designer 😆 btw pls continue and dnt separate tia nd ranny
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
👏
hey its amazing.......
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
uv's profession i don't know but the others suit them very well
reading ur fan fic for the first time today and i must say it's awesome plz continue soon

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