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nehal

@ashi-coolest

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#301

It was awesome Mitali you are really an amazing writer 👏 Read the last four parts now and loved them esp the rain scene between Ashi-Yuvi 😳 Plz make them patch up soon 😊 😊

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rajii

@rajii

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Posted: 19 years ago

#302

👏 👏 👏
pls continue asap

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Divya

@divya_92

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Posted: 19 years ago

#303

really nice Mitali 👏

loved it 😳

luking forward to the next part

continue soon

Divya

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ritwika

@tia_5

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#304

ohhhhhhhhhhhhh my god atlast i finished reading all the parts
u belive it or not but i was redaing all the parts from the starting till the end
divya told me to read it and leemme tell u ur fic just rox 👏

just cant wait to no what happens in their suhag raat 😳

tia

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kriti

@remixer

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#305

sorry actually aaj subah i wasnt online so i coudnt reply and sorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry fpr replying so late
yaar tune to prove kar diya ki tu forum ki hi nahi balki universe ki best writer hai yaar u should be a writer u write fantastically i mean u r just th best i love ur fic sooooooooooooooooooooooooo much i mean u r just super duper hit yaar thodi skills mujhe bhi sikha do u r awesom gr8888888888 fantastic 👏

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srkm

@srkm

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Posted: 19 years ago

#306

remixer (kriti rite?) mujhe kitna praise mat kar...ill post sumethin by 2nite...wait up...n thkz all of u

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disha

@kutie

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Posted: 19 years ago

#307

hey noooooooooooo.plz post nw b'coz i am gng today to my native place so i will be not able to cum on rf..plzzzzzzzzzz i luv ur fic alot..

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srkm

@srkm

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Posted: 19 years ago

#308

Tia n ranveer finally reach hyaatt…but r not yet alone…all the frds r there wid them…
R: arey guys ab tu humare peecha jodo…
S: ohh ya dude…commo guys its their suhagrat…leave them alone
Aman: no…now toh the really fun starts…
Ashi: ya…I have a plan…we all will stay here in one room…all of us together…n no one can sleep allrite
Ranveer n tia shout ' kya' in unison
Meher: ya perfect ashi…
Tia: meher…angel have u lost it?...all of 11 of us in one room on my wedding nite together…why??..why r u guys ruining it for me?
Yuvi: arey tia u have a life time to spend wid this guy…today enjoy wid us…phir kal se u guys can enjoy 'alone'
Vrinda: sheesh yuvi…bas guys lets go…
A: vrindeshwari mateji aap chup raheye..
R: god u guys…meri pyaari salli ya…tm logo ko tu moolah mil gaya…ab tu hume chodo do…
S: girls ko toh cash mil gaya…ab guys ka kya…
Varun : ya ranveer…for the guys…u hv to permit us to stay wid u today…in this sweet of hyatt hotel…
R: u got to be joking…girls just move these guys out allrite
A: nahi…hum sab yaha rahage…yes we all will spend the night here together..
T: okay guys..the joke is over..tia is very tired n wants to sleep
Vrinda: guys lets go…
Vasu: no vrinda di…ur not leaving
R: vasu tum bhi…
Vasu: ha bhai mein bhi…
After a little more of irritating tia n ranveer…
Y: okay guys…now enugh…its 2…lets go home n leave the newly married alone on their wedding night
Pri: ya guys..lets go now…
Reluctantly they all get up n leave…
R: finally
T: ya…n now tia has to remove all these pins in my outfit n this damn heavy jewellery
R: well im sweating….ill go for a shower
T: okay dokie…hurry up
R: why tia?...he asked her innocently
T: becoz ranveer sissodia even tia has to take a shower that why
R: God tia ur so unromantic…
Tia went towards were he was standing
T: yaa…thts the way tia is…
N she pushed him inside the bathroom…
He came out in 5 mins…
T: wow ur out quick…now help me remove these pins
R: tia u still haven't removed those pins…
T: no …come here n help me camel
Ranveer was helping her remove the pins…
R: gosh…u expect me to remove the pins in ur dress…what a night…lucky me…
T: ranveer shut up…just remove it slowly widthout poking me
R: mein bola tha kya yeh sab pehne ko…
T: look at u fuss
R: chalo its done…
T: ranveer ill go take a shower
R: ya okay
Tia after the bath..slept next to ranveer…ranveer moved her hair to one side…n kissed her neck…she turned around…n shut her eyes…n he kissed her forehead…she opened her eyes…n they looked at each other… then ranveer kissed her gently…
R: tia u know nah that I snore in the night
T: WHAT!!!!???? U never told me that
R: well I didn't know I did…till vasu told me…
T: ohh tia's god…ranveer tia cant get sleep if someone is snoring…
R: im sorry tia….u know they say u can get used to anything if u love the person
T: ranveer tia doesn't believe tht…I cant sleep if someone is snoring away allrite…
Ranveer made a sad face n turned away…
T: ohh ranveer…its okay..not ur fault…tia will get use it…
Ranveer couldn't control his laughter anymore n burst
T: ranveer!!!...this was a joke…how could u do this…u know I cant tolerate anyone snoring
R: well i thus knew u wuld fall for it
T: ohh so the purpose was to make a joke out of tia
R: ohh tia I was just pulling ur leg…im sorry
T: no tia is angry wid u
R: I said nah im sorry
Ranveer hugges him tightly…
R: but tia what if I really did snor
T: hmn so wat u would have to sleep in the other room or on the floor…
R: what..
N he takes her in his arms…n shuts the bed lamp…n puts the blanket over them n they fall asleep

Edited by srkm - 19 years ago