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kriti

@remixer

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Posted: 19 years ago

#311

ok my comments it was soooooooooooooo sweet and romantic wow u r an amazing writer kya night thi gr888888888888888888 ab claps ki baari
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actually main thak gayi btu multiply theses claps with 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 0000
u r the greatest one i love ur fic soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo muxh i mean tu plzzzzzzz bade hokaer script wrier banna ur amazing

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ritwika

@tia_5

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Posted: 19 years ago

#312

mittali awsome just loved the part abt snoring this part was realy sweet and romantic
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pllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont fast 😳

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kriti

@remixer

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Posted: 19 years ago

#313

here are some more claps
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aanchal

@aanch_anvesha

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Posted: 19 years ago

#314

👏 👏 👏 CANT SAY ANYTHING 👏
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Edited by aanch_anvesha - 19 years ago

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Neetaldesai

@Neetaldesai

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Posted: 19 years ago

#315

i just wanna do this

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riya

@remixgalgenz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#316

GR8 GOINING MITALI,
BUT YAAR CUD NOT SEE TIA CRYING THIS WAY, SO SAD NA, CANT U CHANGE IT A BIT LIKE, SINCE RANVIR'S MOM IS ALSO NOT ALIVE , N HERE TIA'S FATHER IS ALSO ALONE,
AFTER MARRIAGE CANT TIA, TIA'S DAD , VASU N RANVIR, LIVE TOGETHER.
DONT LAUGH OK , WAS FEELING BAD 4 TIA.
BUT U RITE REALLY WELL MITALI

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sagarika ghosh

@ranv_rules

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Posted: 19 years ago

#317

mits (can i call u dat?)
waiting for the nxt part. plz cont soon.
if u wanna hear ur tarif im saying again ki ur fic was rocking. so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.

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mesocool

@mesocool

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Posted: 19 years ago

#318

hey mittali wer rrrrrr uuuuu??????? 😛

pplzzzzzzz cont. fastttt

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srkm

@srkm

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Posted: 19 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: remixgalgenz
GR8 GOINING MITALI,
BUT YAAR CUD NOT SEE TIA CRYING THIS WAY, SO SAD NA, CANT U CHANGE IT A BIT LIKE, SINCE RANVIR'S MOM IS ALSO NOT ALIVE , N HERE TIA'S FATHER IS ALSO ALONE,
AFTER MARRIAGE CANT TIA, TIA'S DAD , VASU N RANVIR, LIVE TOGETHER.
DONT LAUGH OK , WAS FEELING BAD 4 TIA.
BUT U RITE REALLY WELL MITALI

remixgalgenz...wel i myself was sad writin dis part of tia goin n all...but well thts a part of life...a woman's life...i liked ur idea....i hope i had thgt of tht earlier...

thkz guys for the comments...ill post soon...promise

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srkm

@srkm

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Posted: 19 years ago

#320

Morning

Ranveer got up at around 10 but tia was stilling sleeping….he looked at his princess n peeked her forehead….she opened her eyes…n was wondering how ranveer was in her room
R: well I know ur wondering wht am I doing in ur room?...but if u remem we got married yesterday…
T: oh..we did?...ya…I know okay camel..
R: I know ur not used to seeing me or anyone in ur room first thing in the morning…
T: no ranveer….tia loves it…I always wanted u to be the first one tia sees in d morning…
R: well now that will happen…
Tia hugged him…
R: ill freshen up
T: n ill sleep for 5 more mins…thankz…
R: arey tiaa…
N before he could say anything more she dozed off again..
Ranveer had arranged a surprise for her….after his bath…he went to tia n woke her
R: goodmorning sweety…get up
T: hmnn…goodnite not morning……
N she turned the other side n shut her eyes….
R: tiaa
He stroked her head gently….
R: sweetheart……its 11…..n dad also called up…….
T:dad called……
N she turned immediately…….
R: he was asking wht time r we cumin there…….
T: we will first go home nah…..
R: ya so hurry up
T: nahi…tia wants to sleep…
R: I don't mind
n he got close to tia…but she pushed him behind…..n quickly got up n went to the bathroom……..
As soon as she came out ….she saw tht breakfast was all ready n kept on the table…….wid ranveer reading the newspaper……..
T: thanks for this…im quite hungry actually……..
He got up n pulled her to the sofa n they both relished their breakfast….ahan their first breakfast as a married couple……
T:hnnm……im so full…..
R: yaa me too…..im sleepy again…….
T: I hv to wear a sari now……oh god hw im I gonna wear it alone……
She looked at ranveer wid the look ohh ur there nah to help me drape this…….
R: wht don't look at me like this…..i dnt knw all this…..wear something else….
T: I dnt hv anything else besides a sari…..plzzzz help me….
R: u start if ur stuck ill help…..okay…god shaadi ke baad ye saab karna parega socha bhi nahi tha…….
T:dekhaa itna easy nahi hai shaadi karna…..
He was lying on the bed looking at her drape the sari on her glam body…..
T:ranveerr vahaa kya kar raho ho….cum here n hold this….
R: kya yaar ek sari bandhna bhi nahi aata……
T:haan nahii aata tumhe aata hai nah toh bandho nah….
R:achaa im sure I cn do a better job….give me…..
He jus wrapped the sari around her n she was jus looking at his innocence…..
R:haaan here u go…..
She started laughing………
T:iskaaa pletss kaha hain……..
R: plets vo kya hota hai….ye sari aise he hai……itna acha hai…….
T: its okay ……..my silly husband…..this is surely not ur cup of tea…
R: do it by ur self then…kitne mahnat se kiya…n u
T: arey baba it wasnt done properly…
R: okay then do it urself
T: u get ready
R: tia ur going to take another half an hour n ill be ready in 10 mins okay…
N he get back to his paper…
After struggling a lot tia managed to wear the sari
T: ranveer how is tia looking…see i finally did it
Ranveer was busy readingthe paper…n didn't response
T: RANVEER!!!!!hello!???
T: patni ko dekhne ke badle patna mein kya ho rahe hai uski paade hai
R: wah filmi….sathiya ka dialogue toh bol liya par tum rani se better lag rahe ho…
T: thanks hubby…now u get ready till I do my make up
R: ya u hurry up ill be ready before u anyways….

Edited by srkm - 19 years ago

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