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srkm

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Posted: 19 years ago

#291

post da comments fast...sry for the delay...i had dance class so culdnt write much...

comment- good or bad...
plz tell me did i match ur expectations or was it just crappy...did u picture the pheras the way i wrote it??

do answer d above qs..

next part coming up by 1

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srkm

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Posted: 19 years ago

#292

well btw my fic has cume to its 51 page...i hv crossed the 50 pg border...yippeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!

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disha

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Posted: 19 years ago

#293

ossim...well written..
nw waiting for thier suhagrat.
plz cont soon.

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foresight

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Posted: 19 years ago

#294

awesome...nice..happy to see the pati and patniji...

so what's next...uv ashi coming together..

what's up ahead for tia ranny 😃

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srkm

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Posted: 19 years ago

#295

lamina a lot up ahead for tia n ranny...there is money making session of the sallis n then suhagarat...wait up ppl

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vitak

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Posted: 19 years ago

#296

lovely.
waiting eagerly 😃

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Divya

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Posted: 19 years ago

#297

it was cho sweettt 👏

Mitali, plzzzzz giv me sum classes on "How to write the best fanfic in the whole world" 😉 😳

continue soon

Divya

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foresight

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Posted: 19 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: srkm
lamina a lot up ahead for tia n ranny...there is money making session of the sallis n then suhagarat...wait up ppl

looking forward to all those parts 😃

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srkm

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Posted: 19 years ago

#299

They r all just sitting n chatting…n the fun part starts
M: okay now enough of mastii lets het too some serious talks…….
S: serious talk…..lets c wht makeup r u using today….
Y: right dude tht sure is serious…..
A: nahiii lets talk abt…..money,moolaah,cash…..
R: okaayy I see where this is getting….bt I hv no time for this…ull hv to talk to my frds yuvi n sid abt all this minor issues….
He was abt to get up…..and the girls pulled him down…
Pri: ahan jiju u cant go away like tht…..
A: shaadi tumne ke toh paise bhi tumhe doo….
R: okay par where r the shoes….show me the shoes 1st……
M: shoes hai….lets finalise the deal 1st……
R: oh hoo deal n all…tooo much haan…..meher….
A: cum on thakur dnt be a spoilsport…
R: arey whr did I say noo….ull tell me hw much ull want….
M: hnnmm…..wht say tia loot le isse aaj….
T: yaa sure….provided half is mine………..
Y: thts our girl……challo aab tia he tum logo ke sath nahi hai….
M: wht rubbish…..ranveer if u wanna take tia from here….u will have to give us wht we ask for……
R: achaa….rakho tia koo….its okay….
Y: see its simple show us the shoes n take the cash…..
A: allrite yuvi….we will show u the shoes…..
varun: dude ur sure nah shoes tumhare paas hai….
Y: haan I guess vahi hai jahaan meine rakhe the….
A: vasu!!!!
Vasu comes wid the shoes in her hands……
Y: ye kaise hua…..
R: thanx a lot ek kaam diya tha vo bhi nahi kiya…..
Sid: par vasu toh humare side hai nah vasu…..
V: jo mujhe paise dega mein usske side huu….
A: keep it up vasu…..tum right track pe hoo……
R: haan ashi begado mere bhen koo…..
Y: par ye kaise hua……
A: jab tum mujhe ye phere n all ke bare mein bata rahe the….
Vasu: aur phir meine aur meher ne vo shoes vahan se le liye……
Y: tiaa samjaho enko thts cheating…..
T: everything is fare in luv n war…..
R: ahan…..but I hope this is luv….n in luv u have to stand by me nt them…..
T: im wid u…….just give them the money n ill be wid u……
A: okay thakur nw dnt waste time….n jus give us 50,000…….
R: yaa okay ill jus cut the zeroes..50 Rs is perfect…..
A: funny!????
M:ranveer yaar u earn in dollars…..u should actually be giving us 50,000$.....par hum tumhe 50,000Rs dene ko bol rahe hai…..
R: 50,000$ …… itss okay u can keep tia….. im paying for my shoes…..or for each of ur outfits??
Y: u bet dude..its k dnt listen to them these girls hv gone mad……
Sid: listen lets negotiate…..
M: ahan see now ur taking sid…..
A: okay how abt 40,000……..
Y: ranveer mere bhai tuu uth jaa…itss okay u go…..
P: okay now 35,000 is our last…….
Varun: 35,000 itne mein toh u all can buy one new cell each…..
R: okay now enough guys…..tell us ur last offer…….tia tell them nah….
T: wht can I do ranveer u will hv to pay them…I cant do anything in this…
Vasu: thts like my bhabhi……
Sid: yuvi mujhe nahi lagta ye log 25,000 se kuch kaam karenge…..
Y: yaaa dude lets see…..
Varun : lets give them our price…..
R: okay so these ppl think……..i should give ull 15,000
A: thkur tumhare maths bahut weak hai hum 5 saali hein toh tum kya hume 3,000 each dogee….
Vrinda: nahii thts to less yaar….25,0000at least…..varna baithe raho aise hee…
R: chalo yaar… bena shoes ke hi…..i dont care…ye shoes toh 2,000 ke bhi nahi hai…..ull can keep tht….itna acha offer chodne ke liya thanx…..
Y: good going bro….tumhare communication skills aab kaam mein aa rahi hai….
T: yuvi…..nw stop it yaar im tired……
Y: areee tell ur frds to stop it……
R: okay final price…20,000………
T: come on now girls thts gud enough….
A: thakur humne tumse ye expect nahi kiya tha….hume toh lagga tum tia se bohat pyaar karte hoo…..
R: tohh usska isse kya connection hai…..dekha tia ye log kya bol rahe hain….tumhare naam pe paisa merese vasool kar rahe hain…..
Vrinda: dialogue marna band karo ranveer aur note dekhao…..
Pri: dekho ranveer tias tired haan now……jus give us 25,000
Y: 20,000 loo aur jaane doo….
R: fare enough……bolo deal ya no deal……
T: ranveer…5,000 ki leye kitna fuss
R: kyaa vo 5,000ka tumhe kuch mele ga…sooch lo…..
T: achaa like tht…haan phir theek hai….
A: timboo…tum chup baitho……
Meher: okay theek haii 20,000…..
Y: nahii nhaii 15,000……
They all started screaming together….
R: okay okay chill here 20,000……can I go now….
A: yesss u can…..
R: aur mere shoes toh do…..
Pri: ohh yaa here they r…….
T: finally u guys did it………….now lets go…..

It was 7.30 pm n tia n ranveer went up to the room which was booked for them as they had to change…….n the rest of the gang was waiting down in the ballroom for the couple to come…….
T: ohh god I cnt believe we r married…..
R: I can after shelling 20,000…
T: this was so much fun……..
R: yaaa
Ranveer moves towards where tia is standing…..n hugs her from behind……she can still feel the same shivers……his touch makes her go weak…..he pecks a kiss on her shoulders…..she turns towards him n hugs him tightly……
They then change into the reception outfits
R: u r looking beautifull n I mean it……..
T: thank u……ur looking handsome too…..
R:ahan I hv been waitin to hear this……..
T: really…….
Ranveer was wearing his tie……standing in front of the mirror…..
Tia walked towards him…….n turned him around…..
Tia started adjusting his tie for him….
T: hnnmm…now its perfect…….
Ranveer brushes his hands on her cheeks gently
R: ur perfect…..n pushes her hair behind……
Tia was now turning red…..
T: okay now plzz give me 5mins…..n let me do my make up…..
R: another 5mins….its already..8.00 tiaa…
Tia was brushing up her make up….2mins more…..
She brushed her hair…..n left them open…..
T: im ready……..
R: vohhh u luk stunning…..i really don't wanna go dwn nw…
T: mr ranveer sissodia…..stop acting cute…n lets go…

The couple came down hand in hand……the entire room was lit by their presense….they both were lookibg exceptionally good….they were complementing each other perfectly……they looked soo much in love…….a very stunning married couple indeed……
There was no stage as such there were two beautiful seats they could sit on n the rest of the time they were moving about…..n taking to ppl……..
T: this is soo tiring…..to put on a fake smile throughout….
R: I couldn't agree more my jaws are hurting…..
T: lets jus go n sit somewhere……
R: hnnmm……where r all r frds….
T: there they are……lets go….
Y: hellooo...im sure ur jaws hurt
T: thanks yuvi…can anyone be more sweet than u?
Y: well no…but I must say u both look rocking tonite….
A: yaaa totally……cindrella n her prince charming……
Tia n ranveer both were blushing……they glanced at each other….
They all were sitting in one big group n ppl kept coming n wishing the couple…….
T: where is vasu…..i haven't seen her since we hv come…..
R: nor have I ….guess she must be wid her frds…..
Sid: there she is…….
Vasu: sorry was a bit caught up wid my frds…..
T: thts k…….
She hugged both of them once agan……
A: can I ask u one question tia….
T: ashi since when hv u started taking permission to do or say something….
A: well I was jus trying to be polite…anyway……how long r u gonna wear these bangles….
T: I dont knw im pretty comfortable wid them…..soo….atleast a few days….
Y: thank god …..coz now dys these girls wear it for months together man…….
R: I wonder how…….
Varun: guys whts wrong….wht r we discussing bangles….
Aman: I know… how come ashi u came up wid it…
A: just I was curious………
Yuvi looked at her in amazement……..she choose not to look at him……
It was 11.00 n a big family table was laid for all of them to eat dinner……tia n ranveer sat in between the huge table…..they were both obviously eating from the same plate…..the talking …teasing… laughter…. went on till 12.00 n then it was time for tias vidhai……she had already started feeling low….ranveer could make out from her expressions…..
R: there is time…u okay…u wanna leave now…
T: noo its okay im fine…jus dnt let me cry….i dnt wanna cry…in front of papaa I hv to be strong……
Sumit came towards ranveer…..
S: ranveer lets go now…take care of urself n tia
R: u tc of urself dad……..
S: right son…..
N they hugged eachother….
Sonia aunty was sitting next to tia nw….
S: tia all the best for ur new life….n rember im always there for u anytime sweety….
T: aunty ur here nah nw urn t leavin nah….thn why u sayin all this nw…
S: jus tia……I may hv to leave early to go to ranveers plc……tc of urself, ranveer n everyone….
T: yess aunty tia will…….
This was it…it was 12.30 n time for them to leave….as they had to go to ranveers house first for the pooja n then they were going to spend their 1st nite in hyaatt….
R: chale tia…its 12.30
T: ya…lets leave
The two of them were walking ahead n the rest of them were walking behind them….
T: papaaaa….
S: right here princess….
he went n stood next to tia….n was holding her n walking…n on the other side was ranveer who held her hand tightly…
They reached the lobby n were waiting for the car to come nobody went ahead n hugged tia……she was pretending a fake smile while she was choked inside…..she wanted to burst out…..n their driver was not there…so they all were waitng for him to come…..
R: yuvi could u go check….
Y: yaa dude…
Tia tried avoiding looking into sumit's eyes for she knew she would see the sorrow of a father who has to let go of his daughter
He came next to her as he realized she would start crying…..he hugged her tightly…..n she tears started rolling down their eyes…..ranveer was helpless he couldn't see them like this…but he couldn't evn do anything …….the driver finally came…
S: tiaa tiaa bas…she wipped her tears…..as she was not facing him…..he held her by her shoulders to the car…..she sat inside…..n waved out to everyone there……she couldn't control anymore….ashi came inside the car n gave her a warm hug n said tht she would miss her a lot n tht she will tc of her father…n not to worry…..ranveer hugged sumit n assured him tht he would tc of his princess….
He sat in the car n yuvi sat in front…..tia burst out crying as soon as the car started…..she hid herself in ranveers arms…n really wept……n he dint stop her…..
She stopped after 10mins…..his shoulder was wet….he gave her his handkerchief….but tia just couldnt control herself
R: bas bas tiaaa…….
T: ranveer papaaaaaa……
R: shhsshhhh
Y: tia bas nahi toh tsunami aajayega
Tia gives a laugh in midst of the tears…
Ranveer looks at yuvi helplessly becoz none of them knew what to do to pacify tia…

Edited by srkm - 19 years ago