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srkm

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Posted: 19 years ago

#271

The party raps up in sometime after that…only close friends are all sitting together n having dinner…
Tia n ranveer thanked them all for preparing such a wonderful skit…
T: tia is so touched all u guys…it was very sweet of u all…
R: ya it is guys…I wasn't expecting u guys 2 do anything like this…
A: well thakur we r always filled wid suprises…
T: ya n wht a wonderful surprise…
S: ya but the whole credit should go to vrinda for writing the script n all…totally her brain to all this…
T: ya really sid…how sweet vrinda…
V: well anything for friends tia…
R: thanks a lot vrinda…u made this eveing more memorable…
Pri: so jiju…carry lods of cash wid u tomorrow allrite!
R (innocently): why pri?
Meher: arey wat why ranveer…stop acting innocent…ur our jiju…n u hv to give us money if u want ur shoes…
R: ohh shoes…don't worry…all my salli's will get money…
Yuvi: hey dude…roko…inke jhal mein kitna jaldi faas gaye…wht nonsense…u'll wont get any money….
Varun: ya…n first try choroing the shoes from us then ask for money…
Sid: ya…we wont let u girls take away the shoes…
Ashi: ohh ya…u guys r underestimating us…joote toh hum chora kar rahege…no one can stop us…
Varun: ashi, but don't be over confident…joote toh aap logo ko nahi milage…
Meher: ya..ya we'll see
Y: ya we'll see....be prepared to lose girls…
A: haaaa…dream on…
Vrinda: jiju…wat do u say…ull give us money or no?
R: hmnn…if u can take away the shoes from them …then I will give u all how much money ull ask for...
Vasu: hey kuch bhi bhai…aap ko paise toh denehe honge…
R: vasu..ur suppose 2 be helping me…ur my sister…ur got 2 be on my side n protect my shoes…not on tia's side…
V: nahi bhai…I take tia di as my sister… so im on her side…ill get money being on her side…wht will I get being on ur side?
R: arey vasu…how can u do this??...ur suppose 2 help me not tia…
Tia: arey ranveer…why help u…she will help tia…n all the girls…she wont be alone on da boys side n miss on the money too…
V: exactly…im on tia di's side…
S: wah…look at u vasu…dhokebas…
Y: ranveer ur sis toh changed sides only…
R: wht to do yuvi…ye ladikeya hoti he aase hai…
He smirked at tia, saying this…
Y: u bet bro…
A: well atleast ladko si better hote hai…
N she punched uv in the stomach n walked away wid the girls…
Y: uff!...gosh…she is strong
R: well she is from the outside but inside her is a very emotional girl residing who loves u a lot
Y: u think so ranveer…
R: im sure of tht baanaa
Y: par phir why doesn't she except it…
R: well she is scared… n u uv will have to help her get over her hesitation n face the fact…
Y: ya but it wont be easy to make her overcome this…
R: love doesn't come easily…u have to make ur way through it all
Y: ya I guess ur rite…ill see what I can do from my side…n leave the rest 2 her…

Edited by srkm - 19 years ago

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swati

@sweta2005

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Posted: 19 years ago

#272

its very nice plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue the next part soon asap.

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srkm

@srkm

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Posted: 19 years ago

#273

It was 1.30 n everyone had finished eating their dinner……
Sa: okay all of u thank u soo much for everything….all ur help,the wonderful skit…..i hv jus one last request plzzz be on time for the wedding tomorrow…..gnite all of u…..
T: pappaa ur leaving….
Sa: yes princess u youngsters sit n enjoy……we are going…..
R: ull must be tired nah……
Sa: yaaa……okay byeee bt dnt make it too late haan ranveer….
R: yes uncle….dnt worry…..will drop her in an hour or soo….
Sa: okay byee gnite….im taking the driver…..
R: yaa okay we dnt need him….ill drive….
T: byeee papaa….
Now it was more like all the guys were sitting on one side n the girls on the other….
Y: so dude ur finally getting married tomorw…..
Sid: ur last night as a bachelor…..n thn kal se ur a baali ka bakra……
Varun: yaa man ull hv to handle it all….mood swings,
Y : bad hair days , shopping spree…. Blah blah
R: thank u soo much…..thts all tht I need to hear from u guys……kya support system hai mera….
Y: aab tumhe aur kya kahein…..bake sab to tumhe patta he hai…..
S: yaa man ur the guru of romance….
V: the jack of all traits….
R: jus becoz im getting married first u guys r saying all this….
Aman: I always knew u would be the one to get married first…..
R: arree aisee kaise….
On the other side the girls were teasing tia…..
A: soo timbo…now ur gonna be someones wife…..bechara ranveer!!
T: ashiiii stop calling me a timboo…..u punk…..
A: let me irritate u one last day as tia ahuja……aftr tht u will be mrs.ranveer sissodia…..then u will say… tia sissodia honaa koi aise waise baat nahi hai
Vrinda: ashi!
T: stop it u guys……meher pri help yaa…..
M: hnnmm…now we will have to take ranveers permission to meet u….
P: yaaa……after all hes ur husband….paati parmeshwar……
They all burst out laughing…… &a mp;n bsp; &a mp;n bsp; &a mp;n bsp;
The guys walked towards were all the girls were sitting….
Y: okay wht was tht laugh all abt…..girls……
Vasu: not meant for ur ears…..yuvi…..
T: lets go ranveer I cant handle this anymore……
R: yaaa its getting late…..
They all are in the lobby waiting for their respective cars to come…..
R: ashii how u going home….aunty must have taken the car nah….
A: ya no probs vrinda n aman can drop me…..
Y: I can drop u…..it will be the other way round for them…..
R: yaaa ashii im sure yuvi can drop u……
Ashi jus nodded her head…..
Y: thanx bro….
R: anytime……bt jus talk…..plzzzz
Y: yaa k gnite….tc….see u tomorrow…..
R: yaaa 12sharp cum home…..
Y: right dude…they hug each other….
Y:ashii the car has come…….
A: ohh kk…..byee thakur….tc….all the best…..tia gnite n plzz sleep okay….they both hug each other….
T: yaaaa….gnite tc…..n plzz cum early to my plc……
A: yaaa okay……
Yuvi opens the door for her…….
Ranveer shows him his thumb…..yuvi just nods back…..
N now tia ranveer n vasu get inside their car……
R: I was so surprised when u guys did the skit….
T: yaaa me too…I couldn't believe it tht u guys had actually planned something….
V: well we arnt all tht useless……
They reached tias house…….
Ranveer got down to open the door for tia……
T: thank u………
R: soo…….
T: soo…..gnite…..
R: ahan wait a min……so how do u fell……abt the fact tht ur gonna gt married tomorw……he took her in his arms……
T:its finally sinking inn…..im nervous
R: hnnmm……hota hai hota hai pehlee shaadi mein aaisa hee hota hai….
T: acchaa ur experienced nahh….
R: aur nahi toh kyaa…..they hug each other warmly…….
T: okay nw let me go…….
R: I luv u……..tia ahuja……
T: luv I too….camel……
Vasu: okay when is my turn gonna cum……im waiting….tia n vasu hug each other……
V: okay so finally u gonna be my bhabhi…….
T: yaaa….
V: im so happy for u guys……tc see u tomorrow…..bhabiiii
T: yaaa byeee…..
R: go in now byeee gnit….he kissed her on her forehead…..

Yuvi n ashi r in da car
Y: toh..today's function went off well nah
A: ya it did
Y: waise u look good in Indian clothes
A: hmnn…ye kya tha?
Y: well…compliment..a genuine opinion
A: hmmn…thank u...n surprisingly im not feeling uncomfortable in the outfit
Y: well but I hate this sharvani n all…the weather is pleasant otherwise I would have died in this…
A: hehee
Y: aur ashi…
A: yeha se left…
Y: I know the way to ur house
A: ohh u do…Im impressed pyhsco
Ashi was feeling akward alone wid yuvi….she was avoiding his eyes…yuvi realized this akwardness…it started raining…
Y: beegna hai?
A: kya?? Pagal ho kya
Y: arey the ashi I know loves dancing in the rain…playing in the puddle…
A: I do par isse waqt…
Y: well at 2 in the morning there are chances of people not seeing u do ur madness
A: well ya but
Y: ashi no but
N he got out..went to the other side n opened the car door for ashi…n pulled her out…
A: eee…yuvi im going inside…n covered her hair wid her dupatta
Yuvi caught her by the hand…
Y: ashi…this is life…experience the beauty of these big droplets
N he swung her around….ashi couldn't sustain herself anymore....she turned around in her place….arms wide open to the rain.....her eyes were shut…it was blissful for her….n yuvi just could get his eyes off her…a car in full speed comes…in the direction of ashi…yuvi pulles her wid a force….to save her…n they look into each other's eyes….first time after the dance….n he is still holding her that it thunders n she hugges him instinctively….n he doesn't hug her back…slowly ashi gets conscious again n moves away…
Y: chale…
A: er..ya
The rest of the drive they hardly talk….soon they reach ashi's house…
A: thank you yuvi…goodnight…tc
Y: gnite…go inside im waiting…
A: ya…bye..see u tomo
Y: ya bye..
Ashi walks away slowly n closes the door….yuvi then opens his arms wide….n shuts his eyes…
Ashi looks at him from his balcony….n starts pouring more heavily so yuvi then gets inside his car…n back home

Edited by srkm - 19 years ago

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sagarika ghosh

@ranv_rules

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Posted: 19 years ago

#274

wow three parts in a day kool yaaar 👏 👏
seriously the kumbhkaan's need 2 wake up
2 gud mitali
luved everything abt all the parts.

btw edit ur topic and mention that there r three parts.ppl cant miss these parts.

cant w8 nemore.cont soon na plzzzzzzz

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disha

@kutie

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#275

too gd...
lovely three parts in a day is really a tough jb..
hats off to u mitali.

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Divya

@divya_92

Rocker

Posted: 19 years ago

#276

it was amazing Mitali,

you've relly left me speechless

Hats Off To You 👏
👏
Loved the last AY part,
n each n every word of all the three parts 😳

i wish they too patch up soon 😳

continue soon

Divya

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sayantika

@sayanti_ashiuv

Rocker

Posted: 19 years ago

#277

hey mitali,it is 👏 pls cont soon

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srkm

@srkm

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#278

thkz so much guys...u guys dont knw how it feels when ull appreciate a fic...i had no choice but 2 post all 3 parts of day befre yest sangeet yesturday...2day is the shaadi so keep checkin dis page time to time 2day...

well the kumbhkaran's wake up n rply!!!!

wait up guys!!!...ill post asap

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kriti

@remixer

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Posted: 19 years ago

#279

ok main bahaut bahaut der bad reply kar rahi hoon so this is for your whole fic and specially for your creative mind 😉
👏

phewwwwwwwwwwwwwww u left me speechless ur fic is mind-blowing it is directly poured from the heart, in ur fic one can recognize ur feelings and ur love towards remix ur fic is just over to the top it is the bewst fic i ever read in the world the best fic the best story ever read and it is poured directly by the heart plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont asap and multiply these claps by 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

luv u and ur fic very very very very much
kriti 😳