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Posted: 14 years ago
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Debby!!!!!!!!! I'm gonna kill you for writing that! Ahaa, it's awesome!! LOL Ashi is just pretending, hun. Awesome. 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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well nt technically..shes drunk bt she doesnt want yuvi to think she oiut..n she wants to have fun!revel in d moment's glory!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
aku u writing next??
maktub me aaja if ur free..im in total ay zone!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 43

Ashi still had her arms around his neck, so she moved her face towards him and stopped when it was inches away from his face.

Yuvi was too swayed in the moment to react. He looked at Ashi with widened eyes. He half expected Ashi to kiss him, and half expected her to push him away any moment.

Ashi looked at him seductively, with a grin on her face. She looked down at his lips, and then at his eyes, and then she did what Yuvi totally hadn't expected.

She puked on Yuvi's clothes.

Yuvi - (Pushing Ashi away) ''Ashi..you...-'' (Stands up and looks at his shirt) ''Eww. Disgusting. Ashi, I'm gonna kill you, I swear I'm gonna kill you right now and nobody would ever find your body!''

Yuvi looks up to meet Ashi with a threatening glare, but he saw her giggling softly to herself as she wiped her mouth with a cloth from her bag. Her eyes were twinkling with happiness like he had never seen them before. She was laughing so cutely he swore he could watch her like that for the whole day.

Ashi - (Noticing that Yuvi is looking at her) ''I..Im sorry, Yuvi'' (Moves forward to give him the cloth) ''I didn't mean it, okay?'' (Starts cleaning the shirt with the cloth herself) ''Sorry sorry sorry!''

Yuvi - (All his anger had vanished and he replied softly) ''It's okay. (Looks down at his shirt) ''I really don't know what to do about this. I .. I can't keep on wearing this.'' (Starts to take the shirt off)

Ashi - ''Wait wait wait!'' (Holds Yuvi's hand to stop him and looks down at his shirt) ''I'll take it off for you.'' (Goes behind him and moves her hand up his chest and takes the shirt off. When she's done, she turns him around to face her and grins in approval) ''Nice.''

Yuvi - (Feeling a little embarrased and hating himself for it.) ''Thanks.'' (He says confidently. His mind snaps with another idea he could use to make Ashi fall crazily for him) ''Ermm.. Ashi. I'm cold. Could you, like, stay close to me for the night?''









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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
Who's here? Me! 😎

Not that anybody cares! :D Anyway, gals - can I have a summary kind of thing of the entire story so far, I can start writing right away!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
🤣🤣🤣 hes disgusted yet hes trying...aku dis was disgusting..yuck she puked on him🤬🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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no kanks u read it bcz u dnt have any idea of d characters n stuff..cmon read it bahut mehnat se likha hai
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_wacko

no kanks u read it bcz u dnt have any idea of d characters n stuff..cmon read it bahut mehnat se likha hai



Padhne mein toh mehnat lagti hi nahi. 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nahi ull like it...cmon read it wont tk u long!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

Who's here? Me! 😎

Not that anybody cares! :D Anyway, gals - can I have a summary kind of thing of the entire story so far, I can start writing right away!


Okay, basically, Ashi is this new girl in Yuvi's school who is damn arrogant and full of attitude, but he wants to use her to get revenge from his ex who used him. He tries to woo her and all but fails, and Ashi embarasses him in front of everyone. Yuvi is angry and pissed off and he tells her that nobody cares about her and she should get back to earth. Ashi feels sorry for behaving so badly with him and wants to make it up to him. They have to go to a camping trip and Ashi, Yuvi, ashi's friend and professor share a same car.. Though Ashi's friend and professor has to go back 'cause principal called them and Yuvi is left the incharge to take Ashi to the camp. Yuvi wants to take revenge from Ashi now and he asks her to drive the car, and to his surprise, she agrees. But she doesn't know how to drive, and while fighting for the control of the car, they have an accident and veer somewhere deep into the jungle and they are lost together.

Debby, you give her the rest of the summary.

--EDITED--

Kanky, Debby is right, you better read. 😃
Edited by Akanksha0701 - 14 years ago

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