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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Haaye, tum log aapas mein bhi ek cheez nahi karte ho! Jeeo! 🤣 By the way, thanks Akanksha. :P

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Dhatt teri ki.

Theek, I will read. Kal khatam kardaalungi pura. So its decided, am writing the 45th part - 44th tab tak koi likh daalega. 😆

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: -Kanky-
Dhatt teri ki.

Theek, I will read. Kal khatam kardaalungi pura. So its decided, am writing the 45th part - 44th tab tak koi likh daalega. 😆

Yayyy. Okay. Someone had already booked the 44th part, anyway. 😆 Enjoy reading. =D

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701

Yayyy. Okay. Someone had already booked the 44th part, anyway. 😆 Enjoy reading. =D

I am so selfless. 🥱 And in which era are you going to comment on any of my stuff I ask you to? 🥱🥱

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Meeko

@Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

lol wacko debby!!! main chali main chali??? seriously?? wht made u get tht song??....perfectly fitted in!!lol and thn uv singing back... na na na meri jaan!!!! awww!!😉

and akiii!!! perfect.. u made ashi throw up!! wowwowowo!!! evn i cld see the whole scene.... lmao, uv...😳.. srry, have no words to say hw i feel now!!!

welcome kank!! now as ur here, u need to be active, puhleeej!!😛

ill edit this in a while, hw much r u done with tho?? did u read all of it?? its like only 10 pages, shdnt take much time tho!!😉

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Meeko

@Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

part 44

''Ermm.. Ashi. I'm cold. Could you, like, stay close to me for the night?''

waaaaak* she threw up again on him, this time its not on his shirt, its on him.. all he wished was tht it wld all be a dream this time..

"wacko!!!" he yelled.. ashi was on the floor, sleeping?!?!? unconscious?!??! w/e he thought,

"ashi, baby, kya hua tumhein??" he cursed himself for forcing her to drink.. all he needed now was water,

it was raining heavily outside, he noticed a well, he had to do it this time, he didnt think much, went inside,got the dirty pot, cleaned it,

filled it with the water from the well, cleaned himself and went in with water for ashi.

he sort of dried himself, wore ashi's jacket again, picked up ashi and put her on the bed

"uv... uv, mujhe bohot thand lag rahi hai"

"ashi, baby.. utho.. yeh lo, paani peeyo" with tht he made her take a few sips

then he pulled out the bedsheet, rolled it around her and hugged her back

'wacko, plz jaldi se theek ho jaao; he said to himself

"umm hmph!!" she stomped

"accha ashi, tumhein neend aa rahi hai kya??"

"nahi uv, neend kyun aaegi??" she sings,"abhi toh mein jawaan hoon!!" "hmm" "main mamma nahi hoon jo itni jaldi so jaongi"

"accha!! ashi..."

"hmmmmmmmmm" being quite loud this time

"achaa, tumhe pata hai, tum kispe so rahi ho?!??!"

"hmmmm... YUVRAJ DEV ke strrrrrrong strrrrong......."(repeating the r's) and she tripped again

yuvraj cldnt believe wht this wacko has done to him, making him smile this way and on the other hand making him do anything to save this redhead

Edited by elizaa - 14 years ago

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Meeko

@Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

part 45

ashi woke up again, crying loudly

"ab kyaaa?"

"aur paani doo naaaaaaaaa" she cried again

"lo, lo... yeh lo aur paani aur baitho chup chaap!"

"tch... sirf paaani?? uv am hungry, mujhe kuch khaana hai"

"ashi, baby, we have our canned stuff, par opener nahi hai naa.."

"opener ki kya zarurat... abhi toh maine kahaa ki tum kiiiiiiitne stong ho!!!" she giggled

"kya? tumhe pata hai tumne kya kahaa??"

"ofcourse psycho, tumhe kya lagta hai? am not in my senses? dimaag kahaan hai tumhara?? oh.. tch.. srry, bhool gayi.. dad ke locker mein hoga, wahi sambhalke rakhte hoge nah!!"

'looks like she is okay now.. thank god ur fine ashi' uv said to himself

"accha chalo, ashi, tum so jaao, nahi toh kal jaldi uth nahi paogi, we need to save time rite!"

"ohk, we will save time!! but... uv!!! wen will i get it back?"

"get back wht?"

"duh uhh!!! time!!"

"wacko, ur drunk.. so jaao" saying this he caught his head"heyy bhagwaan!!! mujhe maaf kar do, aaj ke baad, main kisi ke saath aisa nahi karunga!!"

ashi giggled back at this,

"YUVRAJ DEV, TUMNE IS PYARI SI BACCHI KE SAATH THEEK NAHI KIYA, TUMHARE WAJAH SE ISKA ACCIDENT HO GAYA, PHIR YEH KHO GAYI AUR PHIR TUMNE ISSEY WINE PILA DII??" she said pretending 2 b bhaggu,

"mujhe maaf kar do bhagwaan ji, plz, main aisa waapis kabhi nahi karunga" he faked it too

"TUM ISSEY ITNA PARESHAAN KYUN KARTE HO YUVRAJ??" grunted ashi

"kyunki mujhe issey sataana accha lagta hai" he grinned!

"ACCHA?? ACCHA KYUN?? TUMHEIN YEH PASAND NAHI KYA??"

"nahi, maine kab kahaa, ki mujhe ashi pasand nahi??"

she smartly continued "ACCHA, TOH TUMHE YEH LADKI PASAND HAI YUVRAJ DEV??"

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

Elizaaa...Why do you write so cutely!? Like..OMG. I loved it chooo muchhh! Damn I love your parts!! 😳😳

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

PART 46

Yuvi looked at Ashi. She was grinning from ear to ear.

''Haan bhaggu, mujhe Ashi achi lagti hai.'' Yuvi grinned back at her.

Ashi giggled and continued in her fake bhaggu voice. ''Toh tumhein usse satana acha kyon lagta hai?''

''Jab uska poora face uske baalon ke colour jaisa ho jaata hai na, totally red, and jab she stands there not knowing what to do about me, and jab gusse mein vo mera gala dabane ki baat karti hai, I like that a lot about her. Isliye mujhe usse satana acha lagta hai.'' Yuvi smiled.

''Wow!!!'' Ashi's jaws dropped. ''Hi-five! Main bhi tumhein isliye tease karti hoon, 'cause I like your sarcastic expressions, your snorts, your rudeness, your everything.'' Ashi hugged him tightly. In her mind, she thought, Haan haan Yuvraj Dev. Games khelne mujhe bhi aate hain.

He didn't get a chance to say anything. Ashi pressed closer to him and he could feel her breath on his neck, her arms around his waist.

Ashi broke the hug. ''Yuvi..you don't want to hug me back?'' She made a puppy dog expression. ''You said you liked me.''

''I do like you.. a lot.'' Words escaped his mouth, even before he could think. And before he could think again, Ashi took his arms and threw them behind her waist.

''If you like me, hug me!'' She snorted. And Yuvi pulled her into a ribs-crushing passionate hug. She was thrown aback. She didn't expect him to do this. He's a good player.. she thought. Yuvi hugged her so intensly, so passionately, like he was so desperate, like he could do anything to keep her in his arms forever. And for what seemed like hours, he didn't let her go.

''Errm.. Yuvi, do you plan to keep on hugging me forever?'' Ashi choked. ''It's pretty...tight.''

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Meeko

@Meeko

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#100

aww, aki!!

this was toh.. idk yaar

and hw many times have we made ashi fall on uv, and hug him tight in this trip?? itni baar mein toh pyaar ho jaana pakka hai!!

hai na??

lol

jab dekho ashi is all on uv, bechaara he!

but i can see hw much he likes it wen she is all over him!! his passionate hugs... awwww!!

accha, btw, ill be continuing after say 10th, am going on a vacation, i shalll meet u online and will cont reading, so plz u guys, keep updating, wen i come bk, ill rite on for ages pakka!!

and if in case, i get a chance, i'd rite from there too!!

will miss this cc btw!!

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