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Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Eliza, thanks :) I am not going next, I have done more than enough. U continue next =]

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Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

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part 41

Ashi - (Holds him there and starts muttering while her eyes were still closed) ''Please don't go. Please don't leave me, Yuvi.''

She said something in the affirmative and thanked him. Her hair was raven black with some blood red strands, short but shiny'

she had real pretty brown eyes too.

All that he wanted, his real intent on the flattery, was to have her sign him in,

but this was not at all he wanted it to be like... SHE ACTUALLY LIKED HIM, and he cld see all of it in her eyes,

he didnt want to do this to her, he wld nevr take chances this time..

"ashi, sweetie, tum thk toh ho?? utho.. utho.." he tried waking her up..

"shhhh..shhhhhh" she said keeping her fingers on her lips

"rest karne do, thodi der, bas thodi der!" and went back on th place wer she was always supposed to be,

she hugged him tight, laid her cheeks on his chest and closed her eyes again with a smile.

uv had never seen this side of ashi, for tht mater, he didnt see this side of any girl,

coz none of the girls he had been with cld make him feel the way he was feeling now,

he hugged her back with the same passion, but now, it was enuf... he clnt let her rest more,

"its time to have some fun sweetheart!!" he grinned

Edited by elizaa - 14 years ago

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Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Elizaa, are you trying to kill me, or what, moron!? I had this grin plasted on my face for the whole time I read the part, and my cheeks are hurting like hell. That was SO adorable 😳..I could imagine that happening, and I am still grinning like a fool. 😆

Awwiee, Yuvi was SO cute in this part..He doesn't want to hurt Ashi. 😳 Btw, you ended it on a GREAT cliffhanger. Debby, are you going next? Or Elizaa, do you want to go again? Or I will?

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Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701
Elizaa, are you trying to kill me, or what, moron!? I had this grin plasted on my face for the whole time I read the part, and my cheeks are hurting like hell. That was SO adorable 😳..I could imagine that happening, and I am still grinning like a fool. 😆

Awwiee, Yuvi was SO cute in this part..He doesn't want to hurt Ashi. 😳 Btw, you ended it on a GREAT cliffhanger. Debby, are you going next? Or Elizaa, do you want to go again? Or I will?

lol.. thanks!! i thot ud be like itna chota... but cldnt concentrate for too long naa..

u go for it, phir ill continue!! and now, yeah, debby better allow us to chat over here, waise bhi ur giving the pages in the index na!!

thanks to her 41 parts in only 10 pages!!👏

yeah,, and whoever is continuing.. plz plz make uv torture ashi to the core.. make him annoy her and make him get stuff out of he mouth!!

make it uv ashi ish!!

plzzz

and ashi throwing up on uvs clothes😆 tht wld be more funnn!!!!!

Edited by elizaa - 14 years ago

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Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: elizaa

lol.. thanks!! i thot ud be like itna chota... but cldnt concentrate for too long naa..
u go for it, phir ill continue!! and now, yeah, debby better allow us to chat over here, waise bhi ur giving the pages in the index na!!
thanks to her 41 parts in only 10 pages!!👏

yeah,, and whoever is continuing.. plz plz make uv torture ashi to the core.. make him annoy her and make him get stuff out of he mouth!!
make it uv ashi ish!!
plzzz
and ashi throwing up on uvs clothes😆tht wld be more funnn!!!!!

Lizzie you go next, please please please. I'm good in mellow stuff, and you rock in wackopanti and psychopanti.. please please please.. 😳 😊

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debo...:D

@leeseunggilove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

god im trying to learn spanish so i cn see rebelde..all i noe is quiero ir al bano

dat means i want to go to the bathroom!😆..lizzie lizzieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701

Lizzie you go next, please please please. I'm good in mellow stuff, and you rock in wackopanti and psychopanti.. please please please.. 😳 😊

am going out with friends for like 2 hrs, if u wish o wait till then, then wait and ill continue, nahi toh u continue and then ill still continue!!

lol!!

g2g, bye😆

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Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: luv_wacko
god im trying to learn spanish so i cn see rebelde..all i noe is quiero ir al bano
dat means i want to go to the bathroom!😆..lizzie lizzieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

aww babes, getting late, btw, this is from my side!

quiero ir a un restaurante!!!

so brb😳

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Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Lizzie, Debby is writing the next part..And then you can continue after 2 hours, and then I will. =]

And Debby, all the best with your Spanish. 😆 When are you going to continue?

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debo...:D

@leeseunggilove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#80

lol im goin next!

part 42

"its time to have some fun sweetheart" he grinned.

well well well...d famous red head now in my zone..sufi man!....ashi get ready for some absolutely fun times..cz u r gonna be yuvraj dev's arm candy fr a lil while..

he thought smugly too self absorbed to notice d drunk puppet under his arms who was making slightly gagging voices by now!...

"main chali main chali dekho pyaar ki gali..."ashi began to sing loudly..

yuvi was too happy now!...he joined in for some fun..

"na na na meri jaan dekho jana na waha...".....

"yuvi tum bahut accha gaate ho.." ashi said in wonder and amazement puncuated with a drunk sense of humour!

" i mean tum mumma se bhi accha gana gaate ho........she trailed off with eyes big in wonder...

"wacko....kya main tumhe itna accha kagta hu?..asked yuvi teasingly..

:acccheee..ashi ko kya yuvi acccha lagta hai..??"..she began to think aloud..

at this point ashi is merely drunk and enjoying herself...she simply wants to show that yucky moron ki whos the boss!..

she puts her arms around his neck..looks him in d eye....and tries to go all naughty and pouty!

yuvi meanwhile is unable to comprehend the meaning of this behaviour..

*wasnt i supposed to sort of make her crazy abt me..well..shes already crazy!...bt mission meher has to accomplish itself*

"uhh babes..tum kya karna chahti ho?..."

"tumhe kya lagta hai ...main tumhari pooja kar rahi hu..eersh..yuvi..ur sooo naive!"

*huh if im naive..den she has no idea what she in for..thought yuvi with a self explanatory shrug*

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