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Posted: 14 years ago
part 47

''Errm.. Yuvi, do you plan to keep on hugging me forever?'' Ashi choked. ''It's pretty...tight.''

"mmmmmmmmmmmm..... and i like!" she continued

"I'd like to do this often, if you don't mind," he said, standing back up straight to his full height.

"You want me to get drunk often?" she asked, chuckling a little.

"No, no, not that, just'hang out sometimes?" he asked, flustered.

"and get lost in jungles rrrrrite?"she nodded, still dazed and he left her standing there,

her heart beating so loud she thought he could hear it as he walked away.

"uv!! kahaan jaa rahe ho??"

"to get equipments to open ur cans, tum waise bhi unwell ho, upar se u wnt be able to rest untill u eat something... i can hear ur stomach making noises till here"

"no silly, its my heartbeat tht u can hear" she blushed and stopped, wht was she doing?? line maroing on this guy,

'no... ashi, come back, ashi yeh uv hai.. u cant let him knw tht u like him!!' she snapped'I have never kissed a boy, had a boyfriend and basically the whole package. Never done it. It just didn't fit into my life. masti and music are my two favorite things. I live my life to the fullest and play music with a lot of passion. That's just what I do. That's just who I am. thers no place for uv in my life.. come bk ashi..... come back' she said to herself,

"ur heart beats?? ah haan!! still ull need food to keep tht heart beating!!" he chuckled

she couldn't get too carried away at all. A relationship would ruin her plans for the future. 'Who am i kidding?' she thought. 'Why would he go out with someone plain as me - why am I thinking this? I don't love. At all.' she mentally slapped herself and refocused on uv trying to break the can with knives he managed to find in the hut, he evn took some help from the stones he found.

finally he managed to break the can open and he served her some spaghetti,

"lo ashi, kuch kha lo, phir baat kareinge"
Edited by elizaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww, Lizzu, awesome part, babes. 😳 Vaise you are right, itni baar mein pyaar ho jaana chahiye..but again, this is Ashi and Yuvi you are talking about! Wacko and Psycho.. Do you think they are going to give in to their feelings THAT easily? 😳

Debby, you wanna go next?
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 48

Ashi - (Taking one bite and smiling) ''Yum. I love spaghetti.''

Yuvi - (Smiling) ''I can see that.'' (Looks outside the window) ''It's still raining, Ashi, and we have almost 4 hours till sunrise. What do you wanna do now?''

Ashi - (Swallowing the food in her mouth) ''Before we go, I need to change my clothes. I need a shirt which is not ripped apart.''

Yuvi - (Grins) ''Why? It's better this way''

Ashi - (Frowns) ''Shut up you wacko pervert. Now, close your eyes and turn around that way. I need to change.''

Yuvi - (Smirks) ''I'll watch''

Ashi - (Threatening) ''Turn around before I rip your throat off with the same knife you used for opening the can''

Yuvi looks up at Ashi and she looked perfectly serious. She would kill him.

Yuvi - (Throwing his hands back and giving up) ''Fine. Change. I'll turn. And close my eyes. Happy?''

Ashi - (Comes close to check) ''Are you sure?''

Yuvi nods.

Ashi walks to the opposite side of the room and threatens him again, ''I swear, if you turn around, you won't walk alive out of this place. And I'm drunk, I can do what I say.''

Yuvi - ''Wow, you are scary, Ashi. I told you I won't turn. Now hurry up. And besides, it's too dark here. And the lantern ain't on either. I can't get a look even if I want to!'' (Snorts)

Ashi changes her shirt and ripped jeans and pulls a jacket out of her bag. She turns around and smacks into someone head-first. It was too dark to see who it was.

Ashi (Grabbing the man by his neck) ''Yuvi. I told you. Stay at the opposite corner. Now you are dead.''

Yuvi - (His voice echoing from the other side of the room) ''I'm right here, babes. What happened?''

Ashi looked at the guy with terrified eyes. She still couldn't see his face. And Yuvi was nowhere to be seen in the dark.

Yuvi - (Worried) '' Ashi, ashi what's wrong? Ashi...I'm turning the lantern on, okay? Ashi...''

He turns the lantern on to find...

(To be continued 😃😃)

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Haha, okay, sorry for this part! Really sorry.. But I wanted this.. Make the guy whatever or whoever you want him to be.. a goon, someone from the class, whatever whatever. 😳





Edited by Akanksha0701 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lol!!! please!
i dnt want any1 disturbing them rite now!! how i hate u!!! ill make sure this creep gets uv ashi closer... and plz they dnt knw him!!
😡
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: elizaa

lol!!! please!
i dnt want any1 disturbing them rite now!! how i hate u!!! ill make sure this creep gets uv ashi closer... and plz they dnt knw him!!
😡


Awwie, so sorry.

Okay okay let this creep get them closer.. 'Cause, right now, their feelings are as of yet, kind-of a game, or a plan to trap the other.. Let this make it some more 'real'. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
babe wat did u do???
😆😆..
hmm..well im in d rebelde mode..so u only cntinue ill cntinue tmrw before new year kicks in pukka promise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh shit lizzie..robbie n diego r such darlings..roberta is soo awesome!!!!!!!!!!11
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_wacko

babe wat did u do???

😆😆..
hmm..well im in d rebelde mode..so u only cntinue ill cntinue tmrw before new year kicks in pukka promise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh shit lizzie..robbie n diego r such darlings..roberta is soo awesome!!!!!!!!!!11


i knww!!! i told u!!
wer r u watching it?? did u get it with subtitles? ya phir alien lang se kaam chala rahi ho?
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Posted: 14 years ago
well nahhh subs r nt anywhere..bt i have already signed fr d spanish classes!..
nahh i saw some vms of RD...and i downloaded frm torrentz d frst epi so since i noe wat happnd i cn make out..n its a scene by scene copy..
btw dat american version was cnfirmed in 2009..so it has d chances of being made!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 49


Yuvi - (Worried) '' Ashi, ashi what's wrong? Ashi...I'm turning the lantern on, okay? Ashi...''

He turns the lantern on to find...

"k.k.k.k.kaun ho tum?? kya chahiye tumhe??"

"mere adde pe baithe ho, aur mujhi se sawaal?? bohahahah!!"

"ae kudiye... kapde badal rahi ho?? bina ujaale ke mazaa nahi ayega.."

"aee..hello, tum!! tumhe mazaa chahiye na.. woh bhi ujaale mein??" she gave him an inviting smile

"ashi, just shut up.. wht r u trying to do?"

"oh uv, chill, aur tum, yahaan aao na, itne door kyun khade ho, mere paas aao!!" she pulls him close

the local quite happy to get this sheher ki kudi goes closer..

"hey tum rukho" uv goes to stop them but was too late

"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! yeh kya kiya tummmmmnnnnneee choriii!!" he yelled holding his nuts..

ashi giggled, and uv cldnt believe wht this girl had done, "ashi, kya kar rahi ho?? gundda hua, toh hame goli maar dega!!" he whispered,

"arey, kaun hai yeh?? maaf kar de meri maa, aur issey mujhse door rakho" said the local turning towards uv.

"haan!! woh.... isne nahi maara hota toh tum mujhse bachke kahaan jaate... mera dhai kiloka haath....." uv tried, but unfortunately forgot the dialogue, ashi smiled at him, tumhe darne ki zarurat nahi hai uv, mein hoon na tumhare saath, ull be safe" saying this she held his hands tight, reaction to the affair had reached fever pitch all over the place..
uv's word wernt tht great, but she knew tht his heart was in the right place.

"aur tum, chalo futo yahaan se" yelled ashi,

"futo?? hum koi bum hai jo fut jayeinge??"

"aeeee, zyada smart banneki koshish mat karo, pata hai tumhara ghar hai yeh, par tumhe pata hai yeh kaun hai?? yeh tumhare president mr. yashwant dev ka beta hai, aur tum agar iska kyaal rakhoge, toh iske pitaji tumhein malamaal kar degein!!" ashi was on the floor laughing, she hit her head to the bed many a times, uv went up to her" ashi kya bakwaas kar rahi ho.. ise pata chala ki mein yash dev ka beta hoon toh yeh hume kidnap karega"

"ahahahhahahahahhahhahahah" she fell down again, "fattu!!" she screamed in his ears

"kaha na uv, mein hoon toh tumhe darrrrrne ki..." "koi zarurat nahi hai" he completed

"arey, sahaabji, aapne bataya kyun nahi ki aap hamare netaji ke bete hai, maaf kardijiye sahaab!!"

"haan, haan, maaf kiya.. abhi tum jaao aur subah aana 7 baje" he ordered

"aur memsaab? yeh theek hai na?? yeh kya aapki behen hai??"

"BEHEN!!!" They both shouted, looked at each other.. and tried getting a grip on themselves.

"arey maaf kardijiye, bas laga hume, dost hai aapki?? aap dono yahaan akele raat bhar rehna chahte hai?"

"oii, hello, tum jaake wahi karo jo tumse kaha gaya hai, zyaada socho mat" replied uv

"par aap dono yahaan, raat bhar akele???" he cldnt take his eyes off ashi, he was shocked

"oh ho!! arey bhai sahab, humare paas raat bhar akele rehne ka certificate hai" jumped in ashi, "patni hoon na mein iski, ab tum jaao" saying this she went back into uv's arms,

"arey, memsaab, pehle kyun nahi bataya, ab mujhe dugna inaam milega.. neta ke bete aur bahu ko bachaane ka inaam, aap log so jaiye, mein subah aa jaaunga"

uv cldnt still believe his ears, was he dreaming? was it all real.. 'kal tak toh ashi mujhe kitna hate karti thi, aub ab?? kya hai yeh sab?'








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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣🤣🤣 babe waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat on earth were u thinking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol ashi did DAT too d goon!omg..love her..n love u...pati patni🤣
this will be ultra fun..................🤣🤣🤣🤣

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